The story Ravenpaw: A redo of Into the Wild
Chapter1: Aftermath of the attack
Bluefur stood hovering above the mangled remains of a brown tabby tom. Her blue coat was mangled from the fight. It was Rippedstar, Thunderclan's brave leader.
"He's dead," She whispered then jumped up on highrock. Her blue fur bristled angrily, "Shadowclan has crossed the line now! Taking Rippedstar's last life is crossing the line! What are the other causalities?"
"They've taken the life of Whiteheart!" cried Goldenflower.
Whitestorm yelled from Goldenflower's side, "They've taken Finchkit away to Starclan knows where!"
A brown torte walked out of the medicine cat's den and wailed, "Moonsong is dead!"
"Spottedpaw, is this true!" asked Bluefur from highrock, the medicine cat apprentice shook her head yes. "Now they've broken the warrior code; abduction of other clan kits, and attacking and killing a medicine cat, outrageous!"
"Bluefur, that makes you leader," yelled a golden tom from the back.
"You are right, Lionheart," Bluefur said sadly, "Before I chose a deputy, I need time to grieve for Rippedstar, Moonsong, and Whiteheart. May their sprits be guided to Starclan."
Bluefur leaped off highrock and landed among the crowd sharing tongues with the dead cats. Goldenflower stayed a veil for Whiteheart, her beloved mate, all night with her two remaining kits.
The next morning Goldenflower was awaken by Ravenkit licking his mother. Goldenflower looked down at her kit, "Yes, dear."
"Where's Bluefur going?" asked Ravenkit, his black fur waving in the wind. He nodded at Bluefur at the enter trance to camp talking with a torte tom with as red tail.
"She's going to get her nine lives," meowed Goldenflower. "Then she'll be known as Bluestar."
"Cool, I want nine lives!" squeaked Pantherkit.
"Only leaders can have nine lives," mewed Ravenkit shyly.
"Then I want to be leader!" wailed Pantherkit, as their mother hushed them.
"Your still a kit," meowed their mother to Pantherkit. "Maybe one day you may be leader."
"But I want to be leader now!" mewled Pantherkit.
Suddenly before Goldenflower answered Bluefur climbed up highrock and announced, "All cats old enough to fetch their own prey, please gather at the highrock for a clan meeting."
Goldenflower looked at the two anxious kits and said, "Go on, get back to the nursery." They ran to the nursery but watched the meeting from the nursery entrance.
"Redtail is the new clan deputy," She announced with pride. Gently licking the surprised deputy's shoulder before jumping off highrock.