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CHAPTER 1:
The Person beside the man,lightly shaked the man who opened his eyes and gave a questoning look,heard the later as...
PERSON:sir aap belt bandh lein...flight bas land hony wali hai...
He sat straight with a thanking smile,wrapped belt around his body although a memory sparked in his mind as...
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ABHIJEET:wesy DAYA,tujhe to belt bandne ki jarurat hi nhi padti hogi...phir tu itni mehnat kyun karta hai...hann...
DAYA looking at his buddy who's busy wrapping the seatbelt around himself on pilot's reminder as both were in plane returning from their vacations from Manali, so asked...
DAYA(in confusing tone):matlab...
ABHIJEET(with naughty smile):too tu thori na seat gir sakta hai...(with laugh) wo to hum jesy(stressed) patlepatle logon ke liye hai...
DAYA:(angry tone)to...itna bhi mota nhi hun main...
ABHIJEET:(confused)to maine kab bola ki tu mota hai...(naughtly)main to bas yehi keh raha tha ki tu itne se bhi jyada mota hai...
DAYA only murmuring under his breath and now totally engrossed towards the window enjoying the take off process...
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He backed on present feeling a slight jerk on the call of his manager as...
MANAGER:sir,we have landed...
He just a slight nod,and takes a painful sigh and preparing himself to board out...
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Clock showing 10:00 in a place with a logo CID,MUMBAI and the people there engrossed in their work,typing something on computer,some sipping coffee along with writing something,some just analysing something but one person sitting beside an empty desk egrossed in his own thought with the HEAD OF THE PLACE observing the person from his cabin murmered something as...
HEAD(painfully):tum kahan chale gaye ****...mana ki usme ham sabki galti thi par tumhe hame ese tanha karke chodke nhi jana tha na...(tearfully)har pal har jagah tumhari kami mehsus hoti hai...jo jagah ek samay par khushiyon se bhara hua tha aaj wohi pe kaam ke siwaye aur kuch baatein hi nhi hoti...
tumhara bhai,jiski hasi se yeh jagah gunjta tha aaj uske hontho pe gam ke siwa aur kuch nhi bacha...jo FREDDY aur PANKAJ hamesha tumhari dant se darte the aaj wo tumhari ek labz ke kiye taadap te hein...
jo RAJAT kabhi kisise baat nhi karta tha aaj wo sabse baat karta hai taki tumhari thodi kami kam mehsos ho...DCP jesa sakhs jo par pal tumhe tane dene se piche nhi hat ta tha aaj wo bhi tumhe yaad karta hai...
plz beta tum wapas ajao...bhale hi hame maaf na karo lekin plz hamare ankhon ke samne to raho...(he came out of his thought as the the main door opened and DCP along with DIG entered the beuro...)
All the officers stood up and wished as...
ALL:Good morning sir!
The head came out of his cabin and asked as...
HEAD:are sir app log! wo bhi itni subah...
DIG:han ACP baat hi kuch aisi hai...
DCP:dekho ACP aaj ek bohot bade business tycoon India arahe hein...so we want ki CID MUMBAI unhe security de kyunki yeh khabar mili hai unki jaan ko khatra hai...
ACP:yes sir! hum unhe security jarur denge and he will be safe under us...(doubtfully)wese sir unka naam kya hai?
DIG:ye to hame nhi pata direct HQ se orders aye hein lekin itna jarur pata hai ki he's the YOUNGEST BILLIONARE of US...
ACP:don't worry sir...hum apni puri jee jaan laga denge lekin unhe kuch nhi hone denge...(authoritive tone)kyun officers?
ALL:yes sir absolutely!
DCP:hame tumhare team se yehi umid thi...(bossy tone)chalo ab sab log kaam pe lag jao aur sharp at 12 tumhe airport pahonchna hai to pick him up...
DCP along with DIG departed after instructing them to be with the TYCOON for all time...
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The person came out from the airport with his manager and security mumbled as...
PERSON(POV):mein yahan wapas jarur aya hun lekin tumlogon ki shakal tak dekhna pasand nhi karunga...athrah(18)saal kam nhi hote kisi pe bharosa karne ke liye(tearfully)are atrah sal mein to kisi nirjib vastu par bhi log bharosa karlete hein(painfully)main to phir bhi ek chalta phirta insaan hun...(determined)lekin aur nhi...is bar aap log mere agar gidgidaenge bhi ye pathar dil nhi piglegha...
He came out of his thoughts as his manager called him as...
MANAGER:Sir aap plz panch minutes ke liye wait kijiye...your dad has arranged some officers for your security...they will be arriving here in next few minutes...
PERSON:kitni bar mene bola hai ki i don't like to wait for anyone...(angry)why the hell are they not here before our arrival...i just want them right infront of me in next 5mins...(shouting)DID YOU GET THAT DHRUV?
DHRUV(MANAGER):(stammering)ye..yess si..sir...sure...i am just calling them to report here within next 5mins...
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A BIG LAVISH VILLA,SURROUNDED BY A BIG GARDEN AND THREE SWIMMING POOLS...MANY PEOPLE RUNNING HERE AND THERE WITH DECORATIVE ITEMS IN THERE HANDS...SEEMS THAT A PARTY IS GONNA BE ORGANISED TODAY...MEANWHILE A VERY EXCITED VOICE AROUSE AS...
VOICE:are bhai!jaldi jaldi kaam karo(lovingly)aaj mera beta itne sal baad ghar wapas jo aaraha hai...(scolding)Ramu!ye kya hai?abhi tak tumne ye streamers yahan nhi lagaye hein...jaldi karo...(excitedly)mera champ pata nhi kitna bada hogaya hoga...akhir che(6)saal baad jo aaraha hai...(cute angry tone)aaj to mein use pakka dant dunga akhir itne din tak milne bhi nhi aya...isbar to use mein wapas jane hi nhi dunga...apne paas rakhlunga...
(meanwhile his phone rang...after checking the number)areh!ye DHRUV kyun call kar raha hai..lagta hai pahonch gaye shehzade..chalo baat karke dekhta hun..(after picking up the call)han dhruv...kya!...abhi tak woh log pohnche nhi...thik hai main baat karta hun...
(cutting dhruv's call and dialing someone else)...aaj to bhai mere champ ka gussa satve asman par hoga(the call gets recieved)...(authorative tone)hello!abhi tak woh log pahonche kyun nhi hai...unhe bolo jald jald se jald pahonche...mujhe mere bete ke mamle mein koi bhi delay nhi cahiye...reach there as soon as possible...(disconnecting the call)...
(angry tone)haad karte hein ye log...matlab ek jagah time par bhi nhi pahonch sakte...(HIS POV) bohot saha hai mere bete ne...lekin aur nhi...isbar cahe jo bhi ho jaye use kuch nhi hone dunga...wada hai mera...
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A car running on road with high speed with many officers inside it...meanwhile the phone rang and the officers heard the later as...
HQ OFFICER:how can your team be so late PRADYUMAN...the tycoon has already arrived and i want you to reach there as soon as possible...(angry voice) Is that clear?
ACP:yes sir hum bas pohanch hi gaye...(the phone got disconnected and he odered SACHIN as)SACHIN jaldi chalo...
(POV)pata nhi kis tarah ka insaan hai...(angry teasing)panch(5)min late kya hogaya sidha HQ ko live commentry suna raha hai...yeh raees baap ke bigde hue aulad ese hi hote hain...
He came out from his thought as they reached the airport...They saw a man with long coat with many guards standing facing back towards them...meanwhile heard the same man's rash shout as...
PERSON:(rash nd angry)why the hell have they not yet arrived here DHRUV?...mein idhar last 10 min se khada hun aur woh log abhi tak nhi pahonche...ye dad bhi na haad karte hein...bina security ke mujhe koi uthke le jaega kya...(loud shout)driver ko bulao i am going home...koi security nhi cahiye mujhe...(complete tease)nd also inform dad ki unke so called RAKSHAK have not yet arrived aur I want him to suspend them from their duties for atleast 1week taki wo log time ko value karna sikh jaye...
He turned to sit in his car but became stunned to see the whole CID team infront of him or his dad's so called ASSIGNED BODYGUARDS...even the whole cid team remained spellbound to see the desired person infront of them...
oh!how long did they wait to see a glimpse of the man...wait 6years no no wait!72months or 2191days or 52560hours no they waited for 3153600minutes or a total of189216000seconds...they overwhelmed with joy while the volcano of the later one just erupted after listening something from his bhai's mouth as...
VOICE:ABHII
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A JOINT VENTURE BY ABHIDAYA HOLIC AND C.I.D. OBSESSED...