THANK U VERY MUCH FOR SUCH NICE RESPONSE...I HAD NEVER THOUGHT THAT U GUYS WOULD LIKE THE STORY SO MUCH...IT REALLY MEANT A LOT TO ME...
HERO:THANK U BRO...NHI ACP KO PATA NHI THA HE ONLY HAD A MERE GUESS BCOZ ABHIJEET WAS A BUSINESS TYCOON...
VAISHNAVI:THANK U SISO...ABHI TO AUR SUSPENSE BADHEGA...
RUBLI:THANK U DUDE...U WILL KNOW IT VERY SOON...
DEVANSHIKAPLA123:THANK U VERY MUCH BOSS...ISS CHAPPY MEIN ANGRY YOUNG MAN WALA ABHIJEET HI HOGA...HOPE U LIKE IT...
SANJANA GUPTA:THANK U VERY MUCH DUDE...ISS STORY MEIN ABHIJEET IS NOT SUFFERING FROM MEMORY LOSS ND REGARDING HIS DAD...YEH TO BHAI SUSPENSE HAI(HEHEHE)...U WILL KNOW IT VERY SOON...
NIHARIKA:THANK U SISO...
SINGLE PIECE:THANK U SHAILU DI...AAP ESE HI GUESS KARTE JAO...U WILL UNRAVEL THE PLOT VERY SOON(HEHEHE)...NO THEY ARE NOT BROTHERS BUT BEST BUDDIES...
GUEST:THANK U YAAR...REACTION TO BHAI BAHOT BHAYANKAR HOGA(WINK)...
FAIZA KHALID:THANK U YAAR...
XYZ:THANK U BUDDY...
DUO JENNY:WELL DUDE I DON'T THINK ITS A REPEATED ONE...BUT PLZ TELL ME IF ANYTHING SEEMS SIMILAR...THANK U FOR UR SUGGESTION...
RATNESH JYOTISH:THANK U BRO FOR LIKING THE CONCEPT...YOUR UPDATE IS HERE...
CRAZY FOR ABHI:FINALLY DUDE U R HERE...THANK U...
GUEST:THANK U VERY MUCH DUDE...
C.I.D. OBSESSED:ARE YAAR ITNE REVIEWS TO MAINE KHUD BHI EXPECT NHI KIYE THE...
BRAWNY:THANK U VERY MUCH DEAR...
COOLAK:THANKK U VERY MUCH DUDE...IT REALLY MEANS A LOT TO ME...
MALINA KAUR RANA:THANK U DEAR...
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GUYS I JUST WANT TO CLEAR ONE THING THAT ABHIJEET IS NOT SUFFERING FROM MEMORY LOSS IN THE STORY
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CHAPTER 2:
DAYA:(overwhelmed with joy)ABHIII...tu..tum wapas agaye...(assuring tone)ma..main na janta tha ki mera ABHI wa..wapas jarur ayega
(holding ACP'S hands and with a trembling voice)si..sir...aap dekh rahe hain na ham..hamara ABHI wapas agaya...aab hume chod ke nhi jaega..hama...(but stopped in the middle listening a loud shout as)...
ABHI:(angry shout)DHRUVVV...(pointing to team as)yeh log kon hai?{THE WHOLE TEAM STUNNED WITH THE QUESTION}(teasing tone)kahin wohi officers to nhi jo mere security keliye appoint kiye gaye hain...(taunt)are bhai hamare to bhagya hi khul gaye...itne bade officers jo pure desh mein mashor hai mujhe(with a smirk)mujh jese (streching)LANKA BHEDI VIBHISHAN ko security denge...(holding his ears as)na baba na...humse to dekha hi nhi jaega...(laughing madly)
Whole team shocked and tears flowing through everone's eyes...the cid team whose eyes always showed the fire of strength,pride confiedence were now shedding tears of pain,guilt and shame...the world around DAYA stopped...he became standtill at his place...DAYA with much hope started as...
DAYA:(crying)ABHI ye..ye tum kya keh rahe ho...dekho main jan..janta hun ki ham sabne tumh..tumhare sath galat kiya hai...nhi nhi bahot galat kiya hai lekin(trying to hold later's hand but ABHI just jerked it away and started with a threating tone as...)
ABHI:(rash and threatning)don't ever try to touch me MR. DAYA...nd who the hell are you to call me with my name..(everyone shocked)call me sir...(instructing DHRUV as)driver ko bolo gadi nikale...i am coming with 2mins...(with a smirk)thoda inse baat karke ata hun main...(instructing other guards as)sablog gadi tak chalo...i want talk to with them personally...
All the guards along with DHRUV dispersed from the place and now only ABHIJEET along with team was present there...
ABHI:(devilish grin)to bhai aplog mujhe protect karenge...(taunt)chalo acha hai...athrah(18) salon mein to nhi jan paya kya pata in kuch mahinon mein jan jaun...(threatning tone)aur aap ko yaad dila dun MR. DAYA aap ye jo baar baar ABHI ABHI kehkar mujhe bulate hein na...woh margaya hai(tears continuously flowing from team's eyes heard more as)che(6)saal pehle hi...
(whispered in ACP'S ear as..)sir jo khel aap logon ne 6 saal pehle shru kiya tha iss baar mein khatam karke hi lotunga...bahot seh liya maine iss bar app logon ki baari...
He walked towards his car...sat nd drove away towards his home...The whole CID team standstill at their respective places...they just couldn't come out from the shock that their deary ABHIJEET sir could just behave so rashly with them...and then remembered that they were the only reason for such a drastic change in the HIS behaviour...
ACP PRADYUMAN THE LION OF CID MUMBAI WAS JUST SHATTERED AT HIS PLACE...HE WAS HAPPY THAT HE RETURNED AFTER MANY YEARS BUT...COULD NEVER IMAGINE HIS MOST TRUSTED SUBORDINATE...HIS SECOND IN COMAND...HIS RIGHT HAND MIGHT HAVE INCULCATED HATRED AND ANGER IN HIS EYES WHICH ALWAYS SPARKLED WITH LOVE,CARE AND NAUGHTINESS FOR HIS LOVED ONES...
OHH! THEN A SMIRK CAME TO HIS LIPS...HIS MIND RECALLED THE INCIDENT...HIS SUFFERINGS...THEIR BEARINGS...THE MAN WHO ALWAYS SUPPORTED EVERYONE AT THEIR BAD PHASE HAD NEVER GOT THE SAME IN RETURN...BUT ONLY TAUNTS AND ALLEGATIONS...
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ABHIJEET'S CAR RUNNING ON THE ROAD TOWARDS HIS HOUSE WHILE HE DIPPED IN HIS DEEP THOUGHTS,
ABHI:(POV)jin logon ko chodke main yahan se gaya tha...jinke liye itni mushkil se maine nafrat paida ki thi...phirse wohi log...wohi log ake mere samne khade ho gaye hein...(tearfully)akhir kyun bhagwan...kyun...kya apko bhi mujhe tadpana acha lagta hai...(determined)nhi...main nhi bhul sakta...jab bhi main ankhen band karta hun woh sab mere ankhon ke samne ajata hai...aaj bhi main chain ki saans nhi le pata hun...
(strongly)bina sach jane woh log mujhpar itne ilzam lagate rahe...phir bhi main chup raha...lekin isbar nhi...abkibar sare hisab kitab chuta karke hi jaunga...(hurtful tone)areh jab main itna tadap raha tha...ek boond pani ke liye gala sookhe ja raha tha...ek niwala khana tak nhi mil raha tha...tab to koi nhi aya tha...nahi woh dost jisse mene apna bhai mana tha aur nahi ACP PRADYUMAN jisse mene ek baap hone ka darja diya tha...(teasing)aab jab sach samne agaya hai(mimicking DAYA as)"MUJHE MAAF KARDO"...(angryly)maafi my foot!(hatefully)sakht nafrat hai mujhe iss alfaz se...
(painfully)main apko maaf nhi karsakta...kyunki agar firse app logon ne mujhe tod diya to shayad main khud aur jod nhi paunga...
And he got lost on the day when it all started...
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FLASHBACK:
A cool breezy day...nice weather...most of the people would be enjoying on this weather but our toughest cops of CID MUMBAI engrossed in their works...but wait has there been anyday in CID beuro without masti mazak...lets peep inside the building...
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DAYA:(with a wink to ABHI)wese boss...mene na kal raat ek message padha tha...mobile mein aya tha... apni jo yeh MG marg hai uske paas jo band apartment hai...hmm..kya naam tha uska...han yaad aya Z ONE...uske aas paas se log gayab ho rahe hein...(fake shock tone)pata nhi kahan chale jate hein...(fearful tone)unka kuch ata pata hi nhi chalta...
ABHI:(fake shock tone)kya bol rahe ho DAYA...ye to shayad wohi apartment hai na jo hamare FREDDY sahab ke ghar ke bagal mein hai...
{EVERYONE HIDING THEIR LAUGH AS THEY UNDERSTOOD DUO'S INTENTION}...(telling FREDDY as)are bhai FREDDY...(with a flair of naughtiness)tum na ghar se kam nikla karo...agar kisi din tum bhi gayab ho gaye to(with scare)aur phir baad mein pata chala ki kisi(streching)atmaa ka kaam hai...
FREDDY:(scary tone)aa..aatmaa...(declaring as)to phir aaj mein ACP sir se bol dunga ki mujhe roz jaldi ghar jane dein...kya pata kab koi mujhe bhi gayab karde...
With this each and every member broke into a hysterical laugh leaving an angry FREDDY behind...meanwhile the beuro main door opened and ACP along with DCP,DIG and some other HQ officials entered...
ALL:good morning sir...
The heads nooded while ACP with a serious note started as...
ACP(serious tone while introducing the other official as)inse milo sab...ye hai ...HQ ke naye chief officer ...(everyone nodded while again continuing with...)inhe apne ek khas khabri se pata chala hai ki kisi bohot bade company mein UNDERGROUD SMUGGLING ka dhanda chal raha hai...filhal to uss company ka naam pata nhi chala hai...lekin jald hi pata chal jaega...aur DIG sir yeh chahte hein ki hum iss case ko investigate kare...
DIG:yes officers!kyunki mujhe pura yakin hai ki PRADYUMAN ki team se acha koi aur team ise handle kar hi nhi sakta...(turning to leave with saying...)filhall to kuch pata nhi chala...lekin jese hi kuch pata chalta hai you will be informed...tum log bhi personal basis pe kaam chalu kardo...
The team headed back to their respective desks while ACP entered his cabin after recieving a phone call...everyone started alerting their informer's network to find any clue regarding the company...meanwhile ABHI'S phone rang grabbing everyone's attention...he just excused himself and went out picking up the call as...
ABHI:(shocking tone)kya!how's this even possible...thik hai...(consoling as )don't worry main kal tak pahonchta hun...nhi unhe inform karne ki jarurat nhi hai...i will manage...(bossy tone)maine bola na...han...thik hai...bye...
HE TURNED BACK TO GO INSIDE THE BEURO BUT GOT SHOCKED TO SEE DAYA STANDING BUT MANAGED TO SAY...
ABHI:(shocked and stammering with)areh DAYA tu..tum...yaha..yahan kya kar rahe ho(managing his sinus)tumhe to andar hona cahiye tha...
DAYA:nhi...wo to mein bas tumhare piche aya tha...(concerned tone)koi pareshani ki baat to nhi hai na...(raising his eyebrow)wese kiska phone tha?
ABHI:ku..kuch nhi yaar bas ek dost ka...tumhe yaad hai mera jo college time ka dost hai RAHUL...(lying and telling in a sad tone as)actually uska accident ho gaya hai...to mujhe aaj raat DELHI ke liye nikal na hoga...bichari bhabi akeli hai...to kahin unhe kuch problem na hojaye...(assuring tone as)tum bilkul chinta mat karna main kal tak wapas aajaunga...
DAYA:ohh...(instantly)wese mein chalu kya tumhare sath?(wink)tumhe company bhi mil jaegi...
ABHI:nhi yaar...(understanding later as)beuro main bhi yo koi senior officer hona cahiye na...RAJAT akele thodi na sambhal paega...aur agar koi naya case report ho gaya to...tu khud soch na ki ACP sir ke upar kitna pressure ajaega...(naughtly)samjhy mote miyaan...
The later one moved inside saying HUNH with a pout brinnging a sweet smile on his BUDDY'S face...
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ABHI came back to present as his car came into halt as they reached his house...he took a long breath and walked out of the car towards the door when heard a big BOOM!
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IT ONLY TAKES A FEW SECONDS TO HURT SOMEONE
BUT CAN TAKE SEVERAL YEARS TO REPAIR THE DAMAGE
-BY BUDDHA
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SHOCKED KI YE KESI AWAZ THI...YE TO BHAI SUSPENSE HAI(HEHEHE)...
GUYS PLZ REVIEW FOR THE CHAPTER...ND SILENT READERS TOO...
A JOINT VENTURE BY ABHIDAYA HOLIC ND C.I.D. OBSESSED...