This is the new version of 'Story'.. R&R or C&C are more then welcome..

Much love!
- Serenity a.k.a. Serena

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STORY...

Gohan was sittin' outside when he felt someone tappin' him on shoulder. Ken decides to sit down beside Gohan. They sat there together watchin' as the sun slowly changes into the moon. Gohan saw a figer fling in the sky. He saw who it was, "Freeza."

Was he the devil? Gohan went to stand up, he flet something on his shoulders. He looks over at Videl. Goku arived to help Gohan defeat Freeza.

Gohan and his father, Goku began with blastes. They will never give up. They weren't quiters.

"Gohan, you be safe out on that battle field, you here!" Videl went runnin' off with tears runnin' down her cheecks.

Gohan was cofused. He didn't know what to do. Goku put a hand on his shoulder, and Said, "Videl loves you. Why can't you see it in he eyes Son? I can. Can't you?" Goku was gone. Leavin' his Son to think about it.

Chi-Chi came up to Gohan, and said, "Do what your father said. Give Videl a chance."

Gohan saw Videl sittin' on a binch in the park. He went over, and sat down. Just as he sat down she got up, and started to walk away.

He started to talk to her. "Videl, I didn't know that you loved me. I'm sorry for lyin' to you. Please forgive me." He was leavin'.

She was feelin' clueless. She just didn't know what to say. She was feelin' kinda speachless. They went to sit down on the binch to talk to each other.

"Videl I didn't know that you loved me. I'm sorry." Gohan gave her a kiss.

"Videl, I miss you bein' mean to me. I just want everything to be back the way it was." 'Silence'

He got up and gathered up all his stuff back into them dino caps. He started to walk away as he puts them in his pocket, he felt a hand go on his shoulder, and a peek on his cheeck. He drops them into his pocket, and turns around to see Videl.

He places his hands on his cheeck were she kissed not to long ago, he moves his hands over to her cheeck, and kissed her. He walks away from her, soon to be stoped once more.

"Gohan, I love you. I don't want anything to change. I just want everything to stay the same, and never go to bad." Everything grew silent. Gohan was confused. The silents was broken when she said, "I love you for you. If you can't except that then you got more to learn about me." Videl walks away.

"Wait Videl." She stoped. "Why do you want me to wait, Gohan?" "I... I... I love you, Videl." "Do you want to go out with me some time?" "Yes, yes I would Gohan." He kissed her once more.

THE END...

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This is the new copy of 'Story'! I've gotten it fixed up as much as possible.. I hope it's ok..

Much love!
- Serenity a.k.a. Serena