ok this is the rewrite. see if u can spot the changes. there arent that many but im pretty much satisfied with the result. have fun.

REGULAR NARRATOR POV:

It was just another normal afternoon in early September. The host members were currently getting ready for opening when they had to entertain guests with their various charms.

Today's theme was ancient Egypt so of course they were all wearing the traditional dress of the time and place whence (whence. Heh. That's a funny word. I probably didn't use it right.) the pyramids were built.

The door leading to the hallway slowly opened and everyone looked up at the soft sound. A girl stepped in. She was an inch or 2 shorter than Haruhi with brown-red hair. Her hair was up in a high pony tail and she was wearing silver chandelier earrings and a dainty silver bracelet. She was wearing the school uniform, a yellow dress with puffy sleeves, and had a black leather laptop bag strung on her shoulder. The tips of her white high heels peeked out from under it.

Tamaki was the first to react, as usual. " Well, hello there princess, are you lost?" he said, coming very close to her face and stroking her chin with 2 fingers.

In the background Hikaru said to Kaoru. "Hey isn't she in our class?"

"I think so. She does look familiar." Kaoru replied, examining her from afar.

"No I'm not lost. Thank you though." The girl said, clearly not affected at all by Tamaki's charms. She spoke with a strange touch of an accent, like Japanese wasn't her first language.

Tamaki instantly was in a corner sulking. The girl looked at him confused. Now it was twins' turn.

They went on either side of her. "Hey don't we know you?" Hikaru said, seductively.

"Yes princess, please, what is your name?" Tamaki said coming out of the tantrum instantly.

"Wow, he recovered fast." The girl pointed out, ignoring the question. When her comment made the hosts' king go back into the corner she answered the question. "My name is Reina! (Pronounced rain-ah)" she said smiling cutely, vaguely resembling honey-senpai.

"She is Reina Abarne, the only American student in Ouran. She's 15, a freshman. In your class I believe." Kyoya read of his files, his glasses gleaming as he pushed them up the bridge of his nose with one finger as he looked at the twins and Haruhi.

"You seem to know an awful lot about me, and yet I know nothing about you."

"Kyoya Ohtori, pleasure." He said shaking her hand. She smiled again.

"Oh yeah. Is…, she paused as she pulled a piece of paper from her bag,… Haruhi Fujioka here?"

"That's me." Haruhi said, stepping forward.

"The English teacher wanted me to give this to you. You were supposed to report to her," she smiled again, "I don't think you're in trouble though."

"Thank you." she said, taking the paper "Tamaki-senpai, everyone, I'll be back in a little while." Haruhi said as she headed quickly out the door before they could protest.

Reina watched her leave then turned back to the guys. "Does she always dress in boys clothes?" she asked. All the boys sweat dropped.

"Eh…" one of the twins said.

"Oh it's a secret that's she's a girl then. I figured as much, with her being a host member and everything…" she put her thumb and forefinger to her chin in thought, then broke into an evil grin. All the guys gasped. "I wont tell, if you let me hang out here in the afternoons for the rest of the year." All the guys groaned, just what they needed, another crazy girl to be in this room during business hours.

"If that's the way you're going to be I can just go tell all of Haruhi's customers that she's a…" the twins cut her off by covering her mouth with their hands.

"Deal." Tamaki said, shaking her hand while she was still in the twins grasp. "Ok you can let her go now," he said to the twins.

They let her go and she brushed her mouth with one hand impatiently. "Great, now if you'll be so kind as to find me a corner near a window where I can sit and easily be ignored…" Tamaki and the twins went off to do what she asked, grumbling while Reina wandered absentmindedly through the room.

Meanwhile during all this honey and Mori-senpai were busy in a corner, eating cake. Well honey-senpai was eating it and Mori-senpai was watching him.

Reina walked up to them. Mori nodded to hear in greeting and she smiled at him. Honey was oblivious and continued eating. "Hello Mitsukuni, long time no see." She said to him.

He glanced up then continued with his cake. "Hey Reina…" he said. He lifted another forkful of cake, then stopped, fork in midair, his eyes widened and the fork clattered on the table. Standing up he embraced her. "Reina! When did you get here? I heard what happened are you ok? How are you? It's been a long time…"

Silent to his stream of questions and babble, Reina hugged him back, her eyes shut. Mori had a small smile on his face, watching them.

The twins and Tamaki ran over.

"What the hell?"

"You two know each other!"

Reina looked up and smiled slightly. "Well of course, we were fiancés…"

Yay! I know you guys are so angry with me for not updating but I just had to fix this. I'm sorry. I'll get right on it. I promise. Until next time ------------Katie