Chapter Five:
A/N: I'M BACK! Hehehe- miss me much? Okay so I do have reasons as to why this took ages- 1. It was my first battle seen so I was really worried about how it would go… 2. A friend that we all thought got murdered in America when he went to visit his little brother after his twin (My boyfriend) died came back last weekend so yeah- I'm in shock. 3. This mother fcking cnt (excuse my bad language but I hate him so much) went on under my MSN account and deleted ALL my contacts but his own so I got a new one so he didn't no my e-mail. So if that isn't good enough for you then you guys are REALLY hard to please. ENJOY next chapter and REVIEW!
Disclaimer: Okay I would just like to say- I HAVE PLANNED THIS BATTLE HAPPENING FROM THE START! I CAME UP WITH THE IDEAS BY MY OWN- EVEN IF THEY SOUND LIKE SOMETHING YOU HAVE READ IT ISN'T PLAYGERISM! ALL THE FIGHTS GOING ON IN THIS SCENE WERE ORIGINAL KATIE BELL ORIGINALS (hehehe- do you love the word usage? -You know you do!)! I DID NOT COPY!
Dedication: I dedicate this to my brand-new beta SmilieFace, and Son of Harry Potter for helping me write this chapter (thank you SOOO much Jackson) and not judging me for the way I am.
Disclaimer: I own nothing of this story except Lily Weasley-Potter- but don't we ALL wish we owned Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy, Sirius Black, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Fred and George Weasley, Ron Weasley… well you get the point. ;)
Chapter FiveFred and George were fighting side-by-side, back-to-back as usual, sending jinxes of their own creation towards the Death Eaters. Fred against Roldusph Lestrange and George, Avery Nott (A/N: I FOUND OUT THE NAME! YAY!). Or they were until Fred herd Nott scream "IMPERO!" and felt his brother go ridged as the flash of red light that hit him when the Imperious Curse was thrown in his direction.
"G-George…?" Fred said shakily as he turned around to face his twin. George's eyes had a ghostly white ghostly white glaze covering their normal blue.
"What's wrong Freddie-kins? You look like you've seen a ghost." George sneered advancing on his brother.
"George- you don't h-have to do this." Fred said as he ducked a purple jet of light sent his way from his twin brother.
The smirk on Georges face was foreign as he did so.
"Oh, but Fred- I want to." He grinned again sending a flash of bright green light towards his twin.
"Potter- I have always hoped I'd be the one to kill you. I will be worshiped like no other out of all the Death Eaters- but first. Tell me how we can get the Dark Lord to return?" Bellatrix boasted before returning to the present state of being and getting back to business, raising her wand so it was level with her eyes.
"Oh, yeah. I am sooo going to tell you now." Harry said in an amazingly sarcastic voice that would have made Sirius proud, (A/N: tear-sob-tear… I MISS U SIRI! –he's NOT dead!) as he rolled his eyes, ducking a stray curse.
"TELL ME!"
Harry felt memories racing faster and faster through his head before slowing down to the normal pace as they reached the moment when he had ridded the world from the evil known as Lord Voldemort.
Voldemort sneered as Harry raised his wand against him.
"Really, Potter? You actually believe you can defeat me?"
"Ah- yeah!" Harry said shooting a curse at the evil wizard, which Voldemort deflected easily with a wave of his wand.
"Well, you must be more stupid than that blood-traitor father of yours and that Mudblood you call a mother. They too believed that they could face me- the most powerful wizard of all time"
"ALBUS DUMBLEDORE IS THE MOST POWERFUL WIZARD OF ALL TIME!" Harry screeched angrily shooting yet another curse at an unsuspecting Voldemort who only missed it with a mille-second to spare.
"OH YEAH!" Voldemort yelled back angrily at his rule being questioned. "YET I BELIEVE THAT THE MUGGLE-LOVING FOOL IS DEAD! YOU HEAR ME? DEAD! KILLED BY ONE HE THOUGHT WAS HIS ALLY. HE IS GONE FOREVER YOU STUPID BOY!"
"DUMBLEDORE WILL NEVER BE GONE! NOT AS LONG AS THOSE WHO REMAIN ARE LOYAL TO HIM!" Harry yelled back in an equally heated voice, then something happened that both he didn't suspect and yet made perfect sense.
Fawkes the Phoenix swooped down upon Harry for the second time in his life and dropped two objects into his hand- the sorting hat and Godric Gryffindors' sword.
"What is it, Potter?" asked Voldemort with the slightest waver in his cold, rasping voice.
"You don't know, Tom?" Harry answered Voldemort's question with another, putting particular emphases on his birth name and satisfaction filling him momentarily as Voldemort flinched at it. "Why, it's the sword of Godric Gryffindor…" Harry said lovingly pulling the rapier slowly from the sorting hat and placing it on his head (A/N: the hat not the blade).
"Impossible." Voldemort spoke with a glimmer of hope in his voice at finally finding the legendary weapon- even if it were in the hands of his sworn enemy "The sword of Godric Gryffindor was lost centenaries ago."
"Well, I found it." said Harry as he raised it as he had his wand only a few minutes ago.
"Say goodbye, Tom." Was the last thing that Voldemort ever herd as Gryffindors' sword was driven into the place where his heart would have been and Voldemort left the world forever.
"Happy now?" Harry shivered at the last memory as he finally broke through the Legllimency with his own Occlumency and looked up at Bellatrix- her face had frozen with horror at witnessing her leaders death "I was going to tell you but no- you had to go straight ahead and break into my memory. Regretting it now aren't you?" he ridiculed her with a slight sneer in his voice.
"No…" whispered Bellatrix in a disbelieving voice, her eyes blank and a lost look to them.
"Oh, but yes!" Harry leered, enjoying the torment upon the one who had taken his godfather (A/N: NA-AH! Boy, it will take WAY more than that to bring my Sirius hottie down) long before his time.
"NO!" she screamed, denial pumping through her veins as she send a curse at Harry who skillfully ducked it. The curse speed past him to hit Ginny square in the back who crumpled into a heap- screaming in pain at the Cruciatus Curse.
"GINNY!"
Harry spun around immediately and begun to run towards his wife, desperate to save her from pain beyond all imagination- forgetting for the second time that night that probably the most evil witch of all time was standing right behind him.
"STUPIFY!" screamed Bellatrix as a beam of red light struck Harry square in the back and he collapsed onto the ground, as helpless as Ron and his divination homework (A/N: Oh, come on! You can't have read that and not laughed:D).
"Well, I guess I got my wish…" Bellatrix said barely above a whisper and a mad glint in her eyes as she approached the stunned man- or at least she was until a shaking Ginny Potter threw herself onto the husband in an attempt to save him.
"Move aside, girl." Bellatrix spat a cutting edge to her voice.
"NO! I WONT LET YOU DO THIS I-I LOVE HIM!" Ginny choked, clinging to Harry as if she loosened her grip he would just disappear.
She would not let Bellatrix do this! She would not just stand by and watch Harry be murdered at the hands of the witch he hated most.
"Fine. Have it your way then." She raised her wand, a smile tugging at her lips "AVADA-"
"NO!"
"KAVADA!"
A man with red hair and bright blue eyes jumped in front of the jet of green light in order to save his sister.
A/N: YAY! MI 1ST MAYJOR CLIFFY! Mi 1st battle scene, Mi 1st death 2… :( :tear:. I was like cryin wen I rote tat it- was funny coz I was in class and every 1 was like "Katie wats up?" HA! So funny! - Even mi friends don t no who it is… they r threatin 2 kill me so if I dnt update eva again u cn send all ur h8 mail 2 Mrs Clare Malfoy, Son of Harry Potter, Jadie Grint and little miss moine and they ll pass it on 2 da rest- tats if u luv me tat is :tear:.
A/N 2: IMPORTANT! READ THIS! I- the Original Katie Bell- REFUSE point blank to put up the next chapter until I get -drum roll please-… FIVE REVIEWS at least! I don't ask for much but I DO ask for reviews! MWAHAHAH!
Complications:
NO FLAMERS- if I get one then you will have to restart (A/N: hehehe) :Death threats are not included in the previous statement:
Only ONE REVIEW PERSON- if you review anonymously please leave your email address so that I know that none of my friends :cough-Clare-cough-Jackson-cough-Jadie-cough-Emma-cough-SmilieFace-cough-Backwards-cough-anyone I forgot: review twice.
A/N 3: So… GO REVIEW ALREADY!
A/N 4: I might not put up as soon as I get your review because I have to write it AND not completely fail at school :dodge rotten tomatoes: "HEY!"
SmilieFace: OK so I didn't have to fix that much! And when did I review more than once? Did I get amnesia or something? Cuz I really don't remember that. Ok, well, does this count as my review or do I have to put one up? Um I think that the part I had to change the most in here is where you had the "-" and they were supposed to be commas, here's a hint, if it is in the middle of the sentence, not separating a word or w/e it does, you probably need a comma instead, and another hint for where you put commas. Say the sentence out loud; where you pause naturally, you put a comma. And don't be like throwing in long pauses between every word and putting a comma cuz if you do that I'll just send it right back to you ok? I don't know if you spelled everthing right, but it's 11:27 pm. here and I don't have the books by me, so I'm just going to have to check the spellings of the names later, and maybe make some more changes later, but I just want to let you know that I'm working on it. I really can't wait to see who got hit w/ the curse tho. I really hope it's not ron. Another thing, if you put that many author notes w/in your story, in my opinion (I still don't know how to spell that word), people start to lose interest in the actual plot and they won't review. Just some helpful hints. Oh, and when you put this up, don't forget to hit tab to indent the new paragraphs. I don't know if it was in the e-mail, but don't double space between paragraphs, it does that incase you didn't notice on fanfiction on its own. Just a random question: What grade u in?