Chapter 5:
Hiten back from the dead.
I know it looks weird but I decided to put it the way you wrote it Kira
started crying and said im sry inuyasha and she ran away..meanwhile...when she was flyin with her huuuuuuge wings with her black fox in her arms she heard her fox in its mind say kira look a waterfall! kira looked at it and was relieved that she finnaly had a place to rest and a few seconds later it was sunset and she turned into her 17 year old form and her wings were even bigger! as soon as she landed she stripped off her clothes and jumped into tha cool sparkling water when she came back up to take a breath, she saw somebody on a cloud go by...i wonder who that could be?... he spotted her and went over where she was..well well well look what i found said hiten: kira: who are u and what'd u want? im just swimming thank u very much. hiten: what are u doing way out here kitty? she started growling y th would u wanna no? hiten: i have my reasons...he had a perverted look on his face kira noticed and was blushing alot she slapped him to make sure he would go away so she could get back into her outfit hiten yawned and didnt budge then she got a towel on and went over to him and whispered something about her showing herself naked to him if he would go behind tha tree for a minute hiten got a hentai look on his face and ran behind tha tree when he went back to tha waterfall he noticed she was already dressed and in a tree playing her flute to a song she made and it was tha most beautiful song he had evr heard it was called, kimi wo nosete after she played that song she fell asleep hiten decided to take a peek of her panties hee hee so when he got to her and lifted up her skirt kira blushed alot and when he got to tha point of almost taking them off...she punched him chibbi style and yelled U HENTAI! he was still flyin in tha ai and landed with !thud! serves u right...she mumbled and then her fox said well that was just pointless with an anime sweat drop she purred back no it wasnt and u no it...when he landed he saw her backpack and scrambled to it ah ah ah kira said...she went to him and faked to almost kiss him but she really had preyer beads in her hands hee hee clever when she got to tha point of almost kissin him, she put them around his neck and then said SIT! just to test them out and he fell with a great big thud! hahahahaha she fell an her back laughing so hard she started ponding tha ground hiten: hey whats tha big idea! SIT! he fell again she started laughing again hiten:awww crap he said in his mind. just then kira had a backflash owwww! she cried in pain holding onto her head I HATE U INUYASHA! inuyasha's p.o.v he had tha same backflash I HATE U INUYASHA! those words echoed in his mind he started to get sad and started to cry...im sry...kira...he said while tears threatened to fall..it seems that they are talkin to each other in their minds sango said amazed kagome was wide eyed really? inu heard im sry inuyasha i dont hate u i fact tha truth is ive loved u ever scince we first met... when inu heard this he didnt no what to say... tha backflash ended...dmt that was my only chace to communcate with her! he pounded a tree and tears began to fall alot now kira plz forgive me im so sry...kira heard this in hr mind and tried to say back i luv u inuyasha with all my heart but it will break valkeries heart to see u with me... inu just stood there thinking of what she just said...