CH4

I'm feeling discouraged. Nobody will review my story, so I'm considering the discontinuation of my story.

Disclaimer: I'm not George Lucas. He is the daddy of Star Wars. I'm just an obsessed fan.

Car-re froze in her doorway. Something's not right, she thought, and she ignited her lightsaber. A pale violet blade erupted from the hilt as Car-re cautiously entered.

"Who's in here?" Car-re yelled as she inched toward the nearest corner of her room to investigate a shadow. It was only a lamp by her bed. She heard a creak come from the opposite wall into her bathroom. The bathroom door was wide open, but darkness covered it. "Stop hiding and get out here now or I swear I'll…" but as Car-re spoke, a shadow emerged from the darkness. The light from the hallway draped over a tall young man wearing black jedi robes. He pulled down his hood to reveal short, black hair falling lightly over his tired, contemplating eyes that gleamed through his black bangs with a bright, yellow luminescence. He walked closer into the light of the doorway that cast shadows across his body which, even through his robes, Car-re could tell was muscular and toned all around.

Car-re's heart began to race with excitement. This man seemed to radiate a passion and power that made it difficult for Car-re to hold her own weight let alone her lightsaber. She deactivated it and switched on the lamp as she seated herself on her bed.

The man force pushed the door shut and faced her. "I've been waiting for you." He smiled. "I wasn't sure you'd ever come.

"How'd you get in here?" Car-re managed to spit out.

The man chuckled. "You should really lock the door before you leave. I was almost afraid someone would break in."

"Like you." She breathed.

"I've been waiting a long time to meet you, Car-re. My name is - "

"Tynan." She interrupted.

The man smiled. "So it's true. I'd heard you could do it, but I guess I had to see it for myself." He now stood in directly in front of her. Car-re had trouble keeping her guard up against him when her heart felt like it would pound out of her chest. "You don't remember me? It was a long time ago..."

"You always said hi to me in the hallway." She said as though she were reading the words from a book.

"So you do remember?"

"No, but you do."

The man called Tynan frowned. "I guess I should conceal my thoughts better."

"Good luck." Car-re said frankly. Feeling uncomfortable, she stood up, hoping to usher him out of her room. Instead, she found herself standing an inch away from him. She could feel his powerful presence pouring over her.

"You're even more beautiful than I remember you," He smiled at her. "but I have to leave now. I look forward to seeing you again." Tynan turned around and walked to her door. He stopped for a moment without looking back and said, "Don't trust Ferren." Then he shut the door, and once again, Car-re was alone and speechless.