Charmed Kitsune
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NarutoxPhoebex Prue x Piper x ?
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''Normal Speech''
Inner Thoughts, Dialogue, or reading passages from books and scrolls.
(Quick Notes and Messages or Echoes.)
(Dark over lapping echoes)
''Boss Summons, Demons, Dark beings speaking, Demonic/Angry characters Speaking as well as extremely Dark spells and Magic.''
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Story Start
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It was a beautiful afternoon; Naruto and Phoebe were at a clothing store by the beach.
''Ooooh! I love this one!" Phoebe squealed, migrating from bikini rack to bikini rack in absolute solace.
Naruto stood to the side and chuckled. He watched as Phoebe went from two piece to two piece. Naruto checked his watch every few minutes; it was nearly forty-five minutes since they arrived before Phoebe finally arrived with her supposed final choices.
She proudly held them up in front of him.
"Sorry about taking so long, but which of these bikinis do you like better?" she questioned happily, and placed each one to her body when she mentioned them. "First there's this sleek red one with the silver lines and no straps or the black bikini with the red zippers?"
Naruto stared at both of them, "Neither," he remarked as he went over and picked one off the rack. ''How about this?''
"Orange?'' her nose scrunched up slightly.
"Orangle and Black." he corrected. Sure it was rather skimpy, but it was orange. He liked orange.
"Really?''
"What, you asked my opinion." he responded.
"Well, I suppose it wouldn't hurt." she remarked, taking it from his fingers. It didn't look that bad, it was a nice shade of summer orange.
She seemed satisfied enough to take it up to the cashier and purchase it. After that the two of them walked down to the beach, hand and hand.
As they walked along down the peaceful expanse, fresh ocean air breezed over them. Phoebe began leaning toward Naruto's chest. By now Naruto had his arm around Phoebe's waist. His arm fit firmly around her curve. She leaned back feeling protected against his strong loving arm.
"I wish we had more days like this one don't you?"
"Just give it time. We just have to find a routine that works.'' Naruto said as he kissed Phoebe's forehead.
"How about a sneak preview?''
''I like the way you think Miss Halliwell.''
Their lips met. The kiss was soft, gentle and yet very passionate. Naruto pulled back, a grin forming on his face. Phoebe squealed as Naruto pulled her down, the two of the, collided with the sand. Laughter echoed throughout the beach.
Phoebe got up or attempted as Naruto threw his arms around her waist. "Where do you think you're going?" he playfully asked as Phoebe giggled.
"I have to go get changed. Then we can have some fun.'' she remarked, kissing the bridge of his nose.
Reluctantly he let her go. He decided to take the time to change into his own swim trunks. Orange of course, like anyone would expect anything less. A few minutes had passed and Phoebe still hadn't returned. He had more than enough time to summon his scroll and unseal their items.
"You done in there? Come on now, we only got, like about five more hours.'' he shouted through the door of her changing room door.
"Just go find us a spot!" she yelled. "I'll be out in a second!"
He walked off through the sand and laid two towels and an umbrella in an empty space. He laid there and looked up at the blue sky. The sound of giggling filled his ears.
"Hey handsome, hope I didn't keep you waiting too long."
He turned around and a grin formed on his face. Standing in front of him was Phoebe in that red bikini, showing off that infamous Halliwell body. He was sure that the Halliwell body was like the infamous Hyuuga blood line that a lot of people joked about.
''Come on, let's go into the water.''
Naruto grinned and ran to the water with her.
They waded until they were knee deep in water. Naruto started a water fight when he splashed her.
She splashed him back. She then shoved his head in the water who was wailing his arms out wildly. Naruto lifted his head out of the water. "Do you give?"
Naruto smiled wickedly and jumped backward submerging Phoebe in the water. He then got up.
Phoebe got up and gasped for air. "That was a cheap trick!" she screamed the last word as the shinobi picked her up bridal style. "Don't you dare."
"Bombs away." Naruto said and dropped Phoebe into the water. "Having fun?"
The brunette got up. Her hair was in her face. A wave suddenly knocked her into him causing the two of them to fall backwards. She was right on top of him.
They just stared into each other's eyes feeling something come over them. Their lips connected, but seconds later a wave crashed into them. It took a few seconds to connect their bearings before they burst out laughing.
The both of them waded back to the shore. Her short hair fluttered in the wind as she shook her head. Naruto dried his hands off on a spare towel and took out a camera he brought. Seeing this, Phoebe placed a confident hand on her hip and stood in a very alluring pose.
Her large breasts were nestled tautly in a summer orange top. Small oval-shaped slits decorated the fabric in random places that only accentuated her smooth peeking curves while they were held prisoner.
And if that wasn't enough, tightly and thinly strapped around her waist could hardly qualify as a bikini bottom. "Is this pose okay or...'' she asked, striking another pose and asked. "Do you like this side of me more?'' showing off her rear end.
Setting the camera down he stepped over to her and grasped her bottom with one hand and pressed his hips against her.
"I think you're really trying to tempting me.'' he whispered gruffly in her ear as his hands massaged her lower back.
Phoebe laughed and playfully pulled away from him. ''It appears to be working.''
"Indeed, and what should we do about that?'' They were a nose length apart and the thin fabric of her top brushed against his chest.
Chuckling lightly in her throat, Phoebe ran her slender fingers up and over bulge straining against the swim wear.
His body shuddered from her touch, but he knew she was only teasing him. Lifting his strong arms, Naruto hugged her tightly. He hoisted her up slightly, his kisses trailing down her neck. Phoebe's legs locked around his waist as they went to water.
The kisses sent ripples throughout Phoebe's body and a small moan slipped from her lips. Once they entered the water they spent the rest of the day enjoying each other and the water.
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Chapter End
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Now for some Trivia that I didn't cover in the past chapters. I discovered some of these after I've written the chapters so I'll have to go back and edit my chapters some time. There are those who I will also cover in the future.
Now in the episode Something Wicca This Way Comes the newspaper which you can see Prue holding at the end of this episode has something written on it like yadda yadda yadda 'Doubt Fire' yadda yadda yadda. This same newspaper will be the exact same one to feature in a future episode. Mrs Doubtfire.
Essentially a Plot Hole or Early installment weirdness: When Prue wonders where the cream is, the little container thereof slides along the table to her. Then the cream drains from the container and burbles up through her coffee. However, that's completely discontinuous with how Prue's power ever worked at any other time in the next three years. The cream should have needed to leap out of the container and into the coffee, simply traveling physically across space.
Other: Jeremy is a warlock, but he seemingly cannot blink. In all other episodes all warlocks have the ability to blink, but Jeremy had to run all of the way to the manor. While in the episode The Witch is Back, Melinda says that a warlock who blinks must have taken it from a witch, that is not the case for the entire rest of the series where blinking is only an evil power used by warlocks. So either the writers changed their minds about what they wanted "blinking" to be, or they forgot what they had said about it originally, thus making this mistake.
These next three are mistakes in continuity. In the scene when Piper and Jeremy are in the taxi, Piper gives him a fortune cookie. You can see her closing the box. In the next shot of Jeremy, you can see the box is still open.
At the beginning of the episode we see a man standing in the rain in front of the sisters house. After he starts walking away, they show a completely bare tree in front of the house. The next morning when Piper is driving away, they show the same tree with leaves and flowers on it. Trees do not grow that fast.
At the beginning of the episode they show Piper running up the stairs to her house in the rain. The umbrella she has is black, with a colored ring around the edge. When she enters the house the whole umbrella has changed to colors surrounding the whole umbrella now.
This is just another mistake. In the first episode Prue uses her powers to tighten the tie around her boss' neck as she walks down the hall, but in future episodes Prue must be looking at the object she moves with her power.
Edit Time
In the second episode: I've Got You Under My Skin In episode 1-2 ("I've Got You Under My Skin"), Alec buys Phoebe a martini at Quake. but then in episode 5-11 ("The Importance of Being Phoebe"), Cole tells Kaya that Phoebe doesn't drink. Then, in episode 5-17 ("Lucky Charmed"), Jason buys Phoebe a "Martini, Dirty" at the end.
We can assume that she either stopped drinking or maybe start up again. I don't know, show has plot holes and such.
Continuity: In the previous episode, Piper tried out for a job as a chef at a restaurant called "L'Opera Ristorante" and was hired by Chef Moore. Then in this episode, she works at a bar and restaurant called "Quake," but she talks about Chef Moore quitting and leaving her in charge of the establishment, so it's not meant to be a different place.
This one is a big plot hole. After the shape-shifter turned from a mailman into Andy, Prue told him about her father returning to town. Later, the real Andy came to the house, and then after a cut, he and Prue were talking about Prue's father, Victor. Andy has known Prue since high school, and therefore knows that Victor has been gone for twenty years. And since Prue only told the shape shifter about Victor's return, the real Andy didn't know about it. So how could he and Prue have gotten onto the subject of Victor being in San Francisco, a fact that surely would have surprised the real Andy, without Prue figuring out that Andy wasn't the one she talked to earlier that day?
Continuity mistake: When the mailman breaks into the manor to steal the Book of Shadows, he's able to hold it and get as far as the front door. But in other episodes, the Book is shown to have a power of its own that prevents evil from touching it at all.
Other: When Piper and Mark are in the police parking lot she holds the door open for him to get into her SUV. When he gets in you can see the SUV go down from his weight in the vehicle. Ghosts are supposed to be weightless.
Revealing: When Mark (as a ghost) and Piper leave the hotel after he asks for her and Phoebe's help, he bumps into the handrail as he walks down the steps.
When Prue runs into Susan Trudeau at the restaurant, she asks if she's Andy's sister, only to find she's his ex-wife. But Prue knew Andy all through high school - she would have known he didn't have a sister.
Another Plot hole: When the Charmed Ones run up to the bedroom at the end of the episode, Prue can't find the poignard as she rummages through her black purse. Elliot, who has fallen from the bed, suddenly picks up the poignard from the ground, where it is sitting next to a black purse. The way the shot is set up, it looks as if the purse has fallen there, and the poignard fell out. But since Prue is still holding the purse that the poignard was supposed to be in, and she hadn't been to that room before, the poignard's presence on the floor is completely inexplicable.
The Truth Is Out There... and It Hurts
In the teaser, the demon attacks Dr. Mitchell, killing him and also destroying his irises. His eyes turn white, and later dialogue confirms that the irises were gone from his eyes. However, when the Charmed Ones find his corpse, his eyes are open and his irises are visible.
In this episode the truth spell is before the demons page in the Book of Shadows, but in 'Out of Sight' the truth spell is after the demons page.
The Witch Is Back
Character mistake: In the attic, Melinda Warren is awed at how thick the Book of Shadows has gotten. But according to information from previous episodes, the Book was started after Melinda had died, so she wouldn't know how thick or not it was.
When Prue first releases Matthew, he blinks several times, then blows out the windows and jumps out. Why would he do this and reveal who and what he is when he could have simply blinked? Obviously it was just a way to get the police involved so Andy could be chasing Prue through the episode.
Factual error: In the opening scene in Salem, Melinda Warren is going to be burned at the stake. But in the real Salem trials, no one was burned; all of the people convicted of witchcraft were hanged.
Is There a Woogy in the House?
Continuity: At the beginning of the final scene in the attic, the view from the window prominently features the Transamerica Pyramid. At the end of the scene, the view is completely different, showing the Ferry Building and the Bay Bridge.
Continuity: At the beginning and throughout most of the episode you can see the entrance to the basement. If you look to the right of the door you can see a light switch by the door with the cover on it. At the end of the episode they show the entrance but this time the cover to the light switch is off.
With that let's begin the actual chapter.