Some of you guys in my reviews, are right, and at the same time you are wrong. I'm not trying to bag for reviews, it's just I used the whole five reviews per chapter thing, to be able to tell how good I'm doing. I figured, if five people couldn't take thirty seconds of there time, to tell me what I should work on, or that it is good or that it's bad, then I probably aren't doing to well with it. I'm sorry if some of you thought it was selfish, but I don't know how else to tell I'm doing good. Believe me, I'm tickled pink that I have 86 reviews right now for this story. I just figured five reviews wasn't that much to ask. I'm willing to compromise though. How about three reviews? Because I really like this story too, and I didn't want to see it end. Let me know if you think three is bad. I have never been somewhere like this before, where you post stories like this, so I didn't know asking for five was bad. aparantly it is and I'm sorry, so... I'll update tonight or tomorrow, but I got to say the review that had the biggest impact on me, was probably NCoopers, so you can thank him mostly.