k this is my 1st one piece story k...
"Zolo "said luffy "what" answerd zolo"where are you going?" "back to my home island to visit someone" "ok... hey nami" "i feel sorry for nami right no-wait she owe's me money.. ill just have to deal with it later" said zolo on zolo's home island(or atlease the island he trained at 1.i dont no any1s name k 2. if u complain bout my grammer ill just skip ... and i know you dont care)
"hey zolo" said a dojo learder(or atlease x-dojo leader) "hey" zolo just walked around untill he got to a cemitary.
and he sat down by it and just cried.
(ended)
ya i had a bigger plan for this but it wont work till i find out the names and ive been working on this for 2 months... ya pretty pathedict