Yes I know it's chapter eight again but this chapter had so many problems that I had to go over it. It is now longer, with fewer mistakes. It should also be easier to follow. For those of you that are wondering I am still in Japan. The problem is though that I cannot sleep! There is so much to do here and I find myself to be very excited. Not only that I found myself a girl-friend. (She speaks English, thank Goddess Izanami, better then I do LOL) Thanks to her I can understand things a lot better. Anyway here's the story.

Chapter 8 Revised

Foyutsuki is having a bad time. On his way home, after a long and arduous day at Nerv, he had an encounter with a woman, who he almost hit with his car! He got out to check her over, to make sure she was alright. She was fine but a little shook up from the ordeal. At first glance she seemed like a normal woman but after she calmed down and composed herself, she changed. The woman started flirting with the old collage professor. But what shocked Foyutsuki more was that he like it. It wasn't long after that, that they were both heading towards Foyutsuki's home. What followed after a couple of drinks, was a night of sex that only the young were designed for. Foyutsuki could not believe that a young woman could fall for an old man like him, and he was right not too.

In the morning things changed. Foyutsuki woke up to an empty bed but not and empty room. The woman was sitting in a chair near the door smoking a cigarette. She took a long drag and blew it out slowly before telling Foyutsuki that he owed her seven hundred thousand yen (3,134.88 Pounds or 5,971.57 US Dollars) for her spending the night. Naturally, Foyutsuki was shocked and surprised at the revelation that the woman was a prostitute. Foyutsuki said that he had no idea that she was a prostitute and refused to pay. That was the last thing he remembered before someone hit him on the back of his head. He woke up to find himself gagged, blindfolded and tied to an uncomfortable chair.

The sound of a door opening and closing brings Foyutsuki out of his reminiscing. The sound of a chair being dragged towards him didn't bode well for the old man. He feels the gag being untied and removed. A familiar voice then speaks to him.

"Foyutsuki. It's been a while. How are things at Nerv?"

"Is that you Shinji?" Foyutsuki's blindfold is removed and Foyutsuki get a look at his kidnapper. What stood before him is indeed Shinji but a more mature looking version of the boy.

"Foyutsuki, do you know why you are here?" Shinji asks the bound man. Foyutsuki looks at him confused. Shinji sighs at the predicament the old man has got himself into.

"You are here because you refused to pay for the service that was provided last night."

"Service? It was just a whore looking for a quick buck." Shinji back hands Foyutsuki hard across the face.

"A whore is someone with no morals, no sense of worth, comes cheep and usually disease ridden! My women have morals, high standards, are very expensive, clean and don't have sax with anyone they don't want too!" Shinji explains with malice in his voice.

"Your girls? What are you? Their pimp or something?" Shinji smiles and then explains to Foyutsuki a little about what's going on. Foyutsuki cannot believe what Shinji is saying. The Shinji he knew could never do this. (A.N. I don't think that's true. If Shinji had his way in the series he would have had Asuka and Rei leather bound and on leads. Shinji is so messed up.)

"What would your mother think about this! She would be disappointed with you!" Foyutsuki shouts at Shinji.

"It was mothers Idea. You would not believe the things mother said while I was in the Eva. She kept going on about how men use their big egos to make up for their small appendages. How men think they own women and the world. Well mother wants to change all that. Mother wants a world where both sexes are equal. To do this I have start small and end big."

"And how do you intend to do that?" Foyutsuki ask.

"That's easy. I'm going to take over Nerv and use the Eva's to wipe out all the male leaders in the world and replace them with women. Nothing on this planet can stand up to an Eva." Suddenly an explosion shakes the room. "If you will excuse me professor." Shinji leaves the room.

Outside Shinji is greeted by Ritsuko with a worried look on her face. She quickly explains that Eva Unit 5 has appeared in the city. She then explains that Unit 5 was supposed to have been destroyed in Nevada in an accident a while back. Since the disappearance of the Rei clones Nerv has been locked down tight so fighting Unit 5 with an Eva was out of the question.

Shinji asks if the human sized, anti-Angle guns could hurt the Eva. Ritsuko explains that the power is the same as an Eva rifle and pistol, so the weapons could easily penetrate the armor and hurt the Eva, but the area of affect is a lot smaller so it would not be enough to stop the rampaging Eva. Shinji tells Ritsuko to watch Foyutsuki then grabs the two finished pistols, off Ritsuko's work bench, AKA the kitchen table, and headed outside. Near the center of the city; Unit 5 is standing tall and appears to be waiting for something. What it is though Shinji has no idea. Shinji makes his way to the bottom of the apartment building while phoning Miho to meet him their.

When he gets to the bottom, he finds Miho waiting on a customized bike of her own design. Miho throws Shinji a helmet and Shinji gets on the back of the bike. They drive off to the center of the city. After scaling to the top of tallest building in the center of the city, Shinji finds Rei's sisters waiting for him. They seemed to know what he is planning as they attack a rope to Shinji's waist and secured the other end to the building. Shinji was very relieved that they were their because he didn't really think about how he was going to land on the Eva without killing himself. Shinji then nods to the girls and jumps off the building. Shinji descends quickly and just as he gets to the Eva's shoulder and the rope becomes tort, Shinji removes it and lands with a thud. Shinji gets to his feat and quickly runs to the plug but it is made difficult as the Eva starts to shake and makes grabs at him. Shinji manages to evade and grabs and keep his footing as he makes his way to the plug. Shinji opens the control panel and finds that the language setting was set to English and Shinji cannot understand English.

Shinji unholsters his pistols and aims them at the plug locks. Shinji pulls the triggers but nothing happens. Shinji tries again but this time with the safety off. Shinji pulls the triggers an again nothing happens. Then without warning the guns release a glass shattering screech. The sound deafens Shinji and the recoil knocks Shinji off his feet. But the plug locks are destroyed and the plug is released. The plug rockets off and lands some distance away. The Eva starts to sway and Shinji quickly runs and makes it back to the Eva's shoulder just in time to grab the rope.

After descending the building with Rei's sisters following close behind, Shinji makes his way to the jettisoned plug. The plug is surrounded by Misato and her army of women. Shinji cautiously walks up to plug. He puts his hands on the hatch locks then nods to Misato. Misato and three solders aim their rifles at the hatch. Shinji then proceeds to opens the hatch the quickly moves out the way. The LCL sprays out the plug covering the army of women and the surrounding area. When no one attempts to leave the plug, Shinji makes his way inside. Inside he finds the body of an unconscious girl, no older then himself. He finds a bruise on her head, obviously the reason why she is unconscious. He scoops her up into his arms. A couple of minutes later he emerges with the unconscious, red haired girl in his arms. He gives the girl to Misato and they all get aboard the stolen Nerv vans and leaves the Eva for Nerv.

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