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Huh?
Huhhhh?
HUHHH!?
AM I A GODDAMN DOG!?
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So… This is the end. I'm dying because I wanted to show off a stupid book to my mom. Why was I so dumb… I shouldn't have distracted her. I hope she's okay, and the dog. What happened to Loki? What… I can't think clearly anymore.
My mind shut down.
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I'm alive?
I open my eyes and blink. Am I in a hospital? I shot up. I'm a!- Why would anyone put all this fur on me. I moved my oaw to remove… Paw…
I scrambled to my feet, "Are these paws!?"
A mirror a mirror a mirror, I need a mirror, I need anything!
I swerved my head around. What the actual-! I'm in a damn cage! I hurry over to a water bowl-
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AM I A GODDAMN DOG