UmikoTenshi:….(sniff, sniff, weep, weep) I had three (no wait! Let me check again!) yes! Three of my first reviews! I can't believe I got soo many reviews already! Let me give thanks to my three best, and only, reviewers:
Anonymous…sorry, he/she said he/she was too lazy to sign in. TuT…
otakualways…umm I didn't really understand your message but it gave me hope and enlightenment to continue! TvT
Star Magel…me too! I think there just aren't enough of these stories either. But just by looking at your name, I can tell that you're a girl who loves stars, or are just interested in them. v
Now on with the story.!
But first the disclaimer!
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto. I don't even know who created him….TT but I love him anyways. OH! And all I own is my dirty body that has been castrated! So don't sue! I'm not worth it! Seriously! Don't….
Summary: JUST READ….
AN: none fer now…..
Fatale Sin
Chapter One
Kakashi stood over the fallen body of his loudest and most lively student. The rain pelted at the silver haired man as if to say that if was his fault. All his fault that the two had come to this. Just like before.
It seemed almost impossible to see the poor boy as is. Naruto had seemed almost to be unstoppable as if he was his own…god. His exterior was sweet and innocent but Kakashi knew better. Naruto had suffered more than anyone. But to see the liveliest, full of surprise shinobi of the Leaf on the muddy ground…
This moment brought back the sad memory of his lost comrade, and best friend, Uchiha Obito. Obito, the loud wannabe. Obito, the one who just wouldn't give up. Obito, the one who gave him a reason to live…Obito, the one who was the hero in the end. Just like Naruto.
"Am I too late?" Again? Kakashi felt for that significant blue chakra that was Naruto's only. Or the red demonic chakra of the Kyuubi. Instead, he felt neither. What he felt, and saw, left him stunned. Stunned for never having realized it before until now.
Kakashi smiled under his mask. Naruto…at least Naruto was okay. Kneeling down, he hooked Naruto up onto his back in piggy back style and stood. With a last glance around in the case that Sasuke might come back, Kakashi leapt of onto the trees, heading for Konoha. And the angry fist of the ol' hag, Tsunade, as Naruto would've said.
Darkness. It was darkness all around. Everywhere, here, there. There was no dripping of the sewers, no growling from the Kyuubi. Just silence. And the drowning darkness. Alone. If Naruto hated anything more than losing, it was to be all alone. Especially in the silent darkness.
Naruto shivered as she tried to suppress the urge to scream. Tingling crept up and down her spine. Her bright jumpsuit of orange and blue held no comfort. Then something broke the silence. Something had entered this world of silent darkness that sucked away all the happiness and leaving nothing but those horrible memories. Memories of why she was the way she was.
It was someone…
"…zumaki…" Naruto groaned. What happened? Hadn't she just been…
"…uzumaki…." Naruto slitted open her eyes and winced at the terribly bright light. Who's that calling her? Why did they sound so famili…
"Uzumaki! Hurry!" Naruto snapped open her eyes wide at the terrified voice of a young woman. She swiveled her head around to locate the source of the voice.
"Who the hell is…" She gasped as she saw the prettiest fuchsia-kimino clad lady stand just a couple of meters away. She had a weird hairstyle that seemed very similar to a kiddie show she used to watch. One that had pretty girls in crappy, showy outfits. The hairstyle looked just like the little pinked-haired girl with them hearts in her hair (1). But this lady was way prettier than Haku. Except that Haku's a boy. With girly genes. Who's a boy…Oh WTF!
Naruto shook her spiky head and jumped up feeling rejuvenated. She had come up with the thought that this HAD to be a dream. She had just been in a fight with an Uchiha. At the thought of Sasuke, Naruto saddened. Sasuke…
"Uzumaki…please…help me…" Naruto looked up in confusion.
"Why do you need my…" WHOOSSHHH. Naruto gasped and bent over, shivering convulsively as a deep coldness enveloped her for a moment. As if a ghost, Naruto looks back up, a g-g-gh-ghost! Naruto jumps up and scrambled backwards a few as she saw the ghost of the fourth Hokage stand before him, his back to the woman.
"I already helped too many times, Azusa-san." Naruto frowned. WTH? Is this a dream…or a memory? If so, whose? "I can't keep on helping Kyo out just because he can't get out of the hole he dug himself." Naruto stood up and glared at the rude mannerism of the fourth hokage look-a-like.
"Oi! Bastard! Treat the lady better!" Attempting to kick the guy's shin for imitating the fourth and for his horrible attitude, only to have her foot pass through the guy's leg. Then the cold feeling paralyzed her the leg that had attempted to kick the guy. "What happened…?" She looked up to see the guy staring down at her…with those cold eyes of the Kyuubi….
"Kyuubi..?" She asked, realization settled on her. These were memories. Memories of the Kyuubi. But why did the Kyuubi have HIS face!
A snarl appeared on the Kyuubi's face.
"Brat! How dare you enter here!" Naruto cowered slightly and blubbered for an excuse but Kyuubi continued as the lady was shredded apart. The landscape bubbled and withered out of existence back into the darkness she had been in earlier. "You don't belong here!" Before the darkness totally enveloped her, Naruto saw a flash of pain, anger, guilt, but most of all…Fear.
Ending commentry: Hallo! Is this a good enough cliff hanger? I need to know so please review to show that my story isn't just a waste of my intellect and time. So please review! In fact all commentry are welcomed!
Next time on Fatale Sin:
"..." Two figures stood on the monument overlooking Konoha. One stood bigger and taller than the other one and was definitely male. The shorter and smaller of the two looked down on the peaceful village, no emotions, no nothing.
"..." Silence.
"..." Silence ensues. Then it breaks.
"...well? C'mon! Don't tell me you've forgotten the beauty of Konoha, Sin!"