TenshiUmiko: Ohayo! As ya can see I have changed my name because my brother was messing around with my net sh!t. Well, my new name is (Da Da Da Da Dum!)

TenshiUmi Hana

But of course from now on I'm gonna call myself TenUmiHana or something like that.

Any ways, going on, this is the newest insert to Fatale Sin. (Duh) I hope ya likes it.

Naruto: Why wouldn't they like it? It has me in it! People love me because of my "special" power. The old hag…mmf!

TenshiUmiko: Now, now Naru-chan, we're not there yet. You gotta wait. So to you readers enjoy! (Drags a bound Naruto away)


Disclaimer: Naruto is Kishimoto-sama's, not mine.

Summary: Naruto has lots of secrets! One of them being that he is a girl! But what about that veil?

AN: Yo! This insert will include some flash backs. So…yeah…


Fatale Sin

Chapter Six


Konohamaru frowned. What the hey? Then a light bulb unexpectedly popped up over his head.

"Ah ha! Naruto-nii chan is probably going to surprise everyone! That's why he was dressed as a girl! For Naruto-nii chan, I won't tell a soul! Because I was the first to know that he's back and maybe then I'll be the guy who knows it all and I won't be acting all surprised and stuff! Nyaha! Maybe Moegi will finally…"

All of a sudden another light bulb appeared. No, really. Another light bulb did appear, only this light bulb was a foot taller than Konohamaru and had a face that resembled his other friend…

"What was that about Moegi?" Konohamaru started and started to laugh nervously.

"What about her? Nya! Let's go before we're late!" With that, Konohamaru started to run with his bushy fox tail between his legs.

The light bulb sniffled and rubbed his nose.

"Konohamaru is weirder than usual today." And then he followed the fox boy (not Naruto, Konohamaru).


Sin grinded her teeth together as she tried once again to use the genjutsu to cover her whisker marks and long blond hair. Onee-chan was going to kill her if she knew that Sin had forgotten the veil.

PUFF!

Sin looked into a mirror and groaned at the results. She had never been good at changing her features because she hadn't stabilized with Kyuubi-sensei's chakra. That's why she needed the veil because it allowed her to freely access her chakra and change her features with out anyone sensing her chakra signature no matter the circumstance. That's the only use Sin had ever found for the veil. It could hide a ninja's chakra signature, even one as huge as Sin's.

Which was still didn't explain how important it was. Sin would never know because her onee-chan didn't even tell her anything about the veil, only that if she lost it she was dead.

Sin shuddered as she looked at the newest results. Well, it did look better. Instead of three whisker scars on each side of her cheeks, a short red scar was in place at the cheek bone of both cheeks (not butt cheeks, mind you) and her hair had become a greenish, yellowish color. Um…green yellow color.

Sin fingered her hair. Green. Ick. It reminded her of Lee. And his thick eyebrows. She shuddered once again.

Well, that finished it. She was ready to enter the Hokage tower. Taking a deep breath she used all her skills and took a step towards the tower.


Flashback
Sin was in her ninja uniform (refer back to Chapter four in Sin's flash back). Only it was torn and muddy and she was tired. Her onee-chan had ordered her to enter for a piece of crappy headdress or veil or whatever that thing on the stand was. Sin was tired and pissed and hungry. But because she was hungry, she was even more pissed. In fact, she had passed the last round simply because she had frightened off her opponent with her pissed look.

"Ugh!" She groaned. That had been pure luck but judging on her next opponent, it wasn't going to be easy or fast. After all it is the finals.

Her opponent was, well, you could say, the female version of Chouji. Only with curly brown hair and beady black eyes.

Sin got into position and bit her tongue to stop herself from biting into her opponent for resembling a big, juicy pig. Tears were apparent in her eyes from such great restraint.

"Are you ready?" The referee raised her hand and brought it down. "Go!"

"Yaarrrghhh!"

"Yahhhhh!" They charged at each other and began to wrestle each other. In a ring of mud. Yes. This is mud wrestling. And it is also very embarrassing for Sin to have to go through but apparently the only thing on her mind is food. That and sleep.


Scene Break (Nyah…Sorry I'm not really good with action scenes so we'll just skip my crappy stuff, nya?)
Sin practically ate the whole ramen stand. Well, literally ate it out of business, that is. Sin was so happy slurping up the ramen, and with mud clogging her ears, it was reasonable that she didn't hear the person come up behind her…and punch her up into LEO (Low Earth Orbit).

"BAKA! You dirtied the veil!"


Another Scene Break
Sin nursed her left cheek sulkily as the person standing before her yelled obscenities and other things a child shouldn't hear at her. Sin toned out but not before long when she was all of a sudden held in a strangling hold by the person.

This person happened to be her onee-chan, the one who ordered her to enter the competition. The one who embarrassed her in front of a bunch of sex starved men who were ogling at her when she fought (wrestled) the competitors. And also the one who raised her when everyone else had not cared to take in the Kyuubi's container. The monster. The Demon.

Which is how she got into this mess in the first place simply because onee-chan was the one who she owed her life to.

"Kyahhh! Onee-chan! Please! I'm so sorry!" Using her tactics, Sin pursed her lips and allowed tears of pain to show. Knowing that her onee-chan won't be able to resist her cute look.

"Nyaa! So KEEYYYOOOOTTTTEEEE!" Sin's onee-chan changed the position into an embrace.


Another Scene Break (I gotta stop these scene break, ne? It seems I'm hooked…)
Sin and her onee-chan were seated and finally calmed.

"Anyways! I have decided!" She said to Sin. Sin perked up. "I have decided….to let you keep this veil, Sin! Nyahahahaha! Aren't I a good sister?" Sin shook in rage then without hesitation, she bopped her onee-chan on the head.


End of Flashback
Sin tried to hide her chakra as best as she could as she stepped around the villagers in the huge crowds littering the place.

All of a sudden, her ears cleared and focused on a group of giggling. She paused in the middle of the crowd to locate the source and stopped on a group of five girls under a tree. They were in a circle around a sixth person leaning against the tree. Sin was surprised as she had not seen the person. In fact she couldn't even read the person's chakra signature. It was as if the person was a henge. Sin read the other five girls and found they were of average genin level. But Sin wasn't interested in them as she zoned in on the sixth person.

As if knowing that Sin was looking over, all five of the girls suddenly twisted their heads in her way. Sin's eyes widened as she jumped to avoid the combined attacks of the girls as they jumped high into the sky and landed fists where Sin had been just a moment before. Sin began to dodge and jump out of the way. She had wanted to attack them but she had seen that faded, glazed look in their eyes. They were being controlled!

Sin looked back over to the tree to find the sixth person still there. In the shadow of the tree, Sin couldn't make out what sex the person was or even the person's features.

Sin leapt back into the scattering crowd as one of the five threw a fist at her. Sin looked back at the tree but the person was no where to be seen.

Sin glared at that spot and barely had time to block an incoming fist from another girl.

That's when things got dangerous. All five of the girls brought out kunais and were throwing them like crazy. Sin dodged like crazy, but at the rate she was going and keeping up with the genjutsu, she was running out of time.

Sin yelled out in pain as they had managed to pierce her with a kunai on her left thigh near her hip segment. She tried to move as another attack came from all five of the girls, but instead she fell onto her side as she realized, the kunai had been poisoned.

Usually it would take poison a little longer to actually work but in her case, things were accelerated in her body so the poison took immediate effect.

She waited for the attack to come but it never did. Slowly she looked up and gasped in surprise as she found her self protected in a chakra-induced dome of a Byakuya user. Sin noted that it was a high-level technique. She also noted that her savior had long dark hair and almost white eyes (like duh! It's a Hyuuga!) But then her body shut down to intercept the poison.

Sin cursed her luck. All she had wanted was to get her veil back and she fell into this mess.

Then all she saw was darkness….


Ending comments: So how was that? Review and tell me! I love fan mail, or what ever they're called. Any ways can you guess who the Byakuya user is? Take a guess! And yes! Votes are still being taken in even though they won't take effect until later!