Ok I've relaced the first chapter with this!
Thanks to my reviewers:) Lily
Chapter 1
8:30pm
Lilliana slowly walked home from school, she was exhausted. Now some of you might be asking why she was walking home this late; and I assure you that it is a perfectly reasonable explanation. Now school normally ended at 3:30pm but for Lilliana the bell meant one thing: sports. Lilliana Smith was one of Sentinel high schools top athletes. In fact they had their schedules planned around hers. From 3:30 to 5:30 it was soccer, from 5:35 to 7:30 track. The last halfhour were spent having a shower.
Anyhow she was walking home when all of a sudden a severe storm hit, running to the tree lilliana though she would be safe. Unfortunately luck was not on her side.
CRACK!
She heard the tree she was under split, she saw it start to start to fall and yet for all her training she didn't move out of the way in time
Please review!
Lily