Moon Java: aww thanx, you were the first to review for that chapter hugs

Miss Mary Lou: I love your reviews they're so interesting, and I really did think 'within you' was hilarious.

El Loopy: I want no school, but I've got an after school detention on Thursday cos I was apparently late for school. Which I wasn't. Honest!

I liked the kissing too, but it's kinda weird writing it cos it's about my mate, but I'm sure she enjoys it. Hehehe.

Disclaimer: I do not own the Labyrinth (you get the idea.)

Chapter 4: Bargaining

Jareth rematerialized inside the forest, then as soon as he sat down. He began to cry. She denied me, defied me, betrayed me. Normally this would just make him angry but this, this was different.

He pulled out a crystal. Lillian was crying too. What have I done? What have I done?

"Lilly? Where are you? This is useless." Great she's disappeared, and now I have to find her or get Adam. What am I supposed to do?

Georgia wandered the forest following the path which hopefully led the way to the Goblin city then she heard someone, someone was crying. She rounded the corner hoping that the someone could show her the way to the castle. A figure was hunched up on a rock,

"Why are you crying?" the figure could be seen clearly and the girl jumped back in fright. There stood... a little goblin. "I wasn't crying! He was!"

The goblin then disappeared after pointing to the real crying form through a little clearing.

"My mistake" she whispered to her self, and then walked into the clearing.

Voices? Some one is coming. Stop crying dam you!

Jareth fiercely wiped the tears from his eyes, they stung red and angry.

"Jareth?" I wasn't so sure if it was really him. "Why are you crying?"

Jareth suddenly towered over me. Yikes! He's really tall, and I'm really small.

I drew my self up a little but he was still bigger.

"I was not crying, how could you even think that I, Jareth, king of the goblins could cry." Trying his best nonchalant voice. Didn't work.

Oh please like guys can't cry, I mean who does he think he's kidding, his eyes are red he's obviously been crying. But it must have been something big to make him cry.

"Look Jareth, I know were not really on friendly terms but, if you tell me what's a matter it will make you feel better. I'm good at this I can help."

I sat down next to him and he reluctantly told me everything. About the kiss, and then when he told her she was to say her forever.

"YOU TOLD HER WHAT?" I can't believe he did that to her. "YOU CAN'T THREATEN A GIRL INTO LOVING YOU, COS THEN SHE WON'T LOVE YOU."

He was a little taken back with my out burst, but what an idiot!

"You have to tell her that you love her, don't force her. Suggest that you can get married and everything after school finishes, she might want to go to uni, you know. Give her a romantic gesture. Roses, sing, presents." Honestly guys do not know girls.

"You. You will help me win her."

Come again "what?" he can't be serious?

"You will make Lillian fall in love with me and marry me. Teach me how to be... Romantic, what ever you called it."

"Why should I help you? You've stolen her little brother, and pretty much wasted our Friday night." Well he had. "We have a prom to prepare for, and besides I'm not going to trick my best friend, if you can't do it you can't have her." Simple as that.

"I think I can change your mind, you give me what I want, and I will give you what you want."

Somehow I don't think so, lets she what he has to say.

"What? Will you give me my dream? Woo, like I haven't heard that one before."

"I know what you want, and I can give it to you." I didn't like how he spoke to me.

"What" I asked "what could I possibly want and how would you know about it." He had no idea about what I wanted, I wasn't even so sure, except about one thing. But he couldn't know.

"I can show you your dream, and give it to you."

Yeah right. "Okay then, show me my dream, what is it?" like he'd know.

Jareth pulled out a crystal and the faint fog swirled until a figure was created from the shadows. "Him, he is your dream" with a smirk.

Okayyy, maybe it was just a lucky guess?

Ohhhh, who was it? Plz review. My mum has threatened to take away my comp if I spend too much time doing this. So I did all my hmwk first, there was lots of it I can tell you that. How am I doing?