Here's another one that didn't look too bad without a beta to smooth it out. C:
Disclaimer: Aww, check the first limerick. I have a pretty limerick'd disclaimer, there.
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I watch as it shimmers and swirls,
The tendrils of current in curls;
The sake tastes foul,
I bite back a scowl,
My soul, like the drink, is in whorls.
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And there are more to come. I've got at least a dozen of these left, and still more ideas running around in my head, curse them.