I hope I am entertaining you! Now the 4th chapter.
Rabid Badger- Thanks a lot. A hundred thanks to you. I'm so flattered to know that people really love my stories. Actually, Akane appears like Ryouga and Shampoo. (Isn't Shampoo a really cute name for her?)
Jenny- sorry to disappoint you but I don't think I'm good at writing romance!
A Good Start- here's a chapter for you.
Sorry I'm late but I was busy writing my other fanfic!
Disclaimer- How many times do I have to tell you that I don't own Ranma 1/2 .
4. Kuno's house.
Akane looked around and gave a small gasp as she saw Kodachi. "Gosh! It's…It's Kodachi!" she said. Luckily Kodachi didn't hear her! Akane crawled back into the bag and tried climbed on a book. "Tatewaki Kuno." Was written on the books. Akane gave a small spidey gasp.
She was in Kuno's bag. Gosh! She had to find the main door and get out of here. She crawled out of the bag and looked around at her surroundings. She knew Kuno was a rich boy but she never had visited his house. The living room was soo huge. She could easily get lost.
She crawled down to the floor. Kodachi was still searching for Tatewaki. "Yes, sister." She heard. She looked back to see Kuno walking to his sister. "Brother dear, I'm going out for a while, will you take care of the house?" Kodachi said in her bittersweet voice. Kuno nodded and lifted his backpack and turned around. Suddenly he stopped.
Kodachi had already left. He walked to Akane and bent down. Akane flinched. "A spider?" he said and gently scooped her into her hand. "Hey, you can make a good companion!" he said. Akane stared at him in astonishment. What? Kuno thought that a spider can make a good companion? (A/N: I know it's strange but tell me isn't Kuno a weirdo!)
She quickly crawled away. "Hey! Wait!" Kuno called out but Akane crawled under a sofa. It was dark there. She shivered. She heard Kuno sigh and turn away. After some time, when she thought that the coast was clear she got out from under the sofa. She'll have to find the front door and get out of this place! She crawled around aimlessly trying to find the door.
She at last came across a door. She tried to open the door by pushing it but her push was too tender. She tried her best to open it but it was too heavy. Suddenly she heard a door knob turn. Using her small legs (Er…hands) she moved back to a safe place. The door opened and Sasuke entered. "Master Kuno is so strange. He asked me to find a pink spider. A pink spider?" Sasuke muttered to himself not looking down to the small pink spider he was looking for.
Akane heard him and instantly understood that Sasuke was looking for her. She quickly crawled into another room past the door. She was in a huge passage. There were several doors. Akane got confused. "gosh, why does Kuno's house has to be so big!" Akane said angrily. She walked along a huge carpet in the floor.
She saw a small gap at the foot of a door. She entered it thinking it was the front door. As soon as she entered she heard the sound of water flowing and whatever met her sight was enough to make her faint…
This chapter was horribly short and it was not so good. I'll try to make the next chapter longer. I'm running low on ideas. I had the story so well planned out now I need more inspiration. This chapter was rushed and horrible. I'm sorry! Please review and send me some ideas. I'll need at least 3 reviews to continue and yes maybe I'll be making some own characters hence I need some information.
You can send me your anime name, eye and hair colour, age, description about yourself etc etc. Please leave your e mail then if you do! Don't feel bad if I give you strange personalities or strange powers or hobbies. It's a part of the story. I'll need not more then 5 people then.
If you are not chosen, don't be sad cuz I'm gonna send you guys who have given their info something for helping me out. Oh, yes, a message for A Good Start. Please tell me what is your pen name. I think I can gain a lot of inspiration after reading your stories. I think you are quite a good author. I would like to get in contact with you!
Mata Ai Mashou!