Kingdom Hearts: A new hero

by Manticore66

And now.... The update you've all been waiting for.... CHAPTER 7 IS NOW UP! This story is about a young, new keblade wielder named Raye and how she discovers the secrets of the keblade, the heartless, the nobodies, and explores other worlds.

6. Incomplete

Chapter 6: Incomplete

Note: I'm sorry if chapters 5 and 6 seem short… But Chapter 7 is nice and long for you guys. I got a C on my P.E. exam .

PoV: Raye

God, another boring school day… This sucks… I had a strange dream last night about another keyblade wielder named Riku. Suddenly, I begin to hear strange sounds coming from outside.

"Mom!" I call out but there is no answer. I run downstairs and search the house and find no one.

"What's going on here!" I say as I frantically continue searching the house. The noise from out side is gradually getting louder and louder. I run to the door and open it. Outside, I am shocked to see an army of dusks outside in the street. Among them I see a member of Organization XIII.

He turns around and spots me standing on my front porch.

Suddenly, he disappears and I can feel pain shoot through my body. I can feel the warmth of the blood flowing down my arm. I pull out Anguish, but it was too late for that as soon as I had been struck.

"Your keyblade is incomplete," I hear the Organization XIII member say from behind me. "However, even I am not powerful enough to destroy it… I will save it for later…"

"Incomplete! What do you mean? Tell me!" but it is too late, he is gone. I suddenly fall to the ground and black out because of the pain.