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OK…so here's the thing, I started school and this is my senior year. It's easier, but I have to apply to scholarships and all. I'm also looking for another job. I also started to get into some REALLY good Alec/Max fics (Hot, Sweet, Heat and (I think I'm spelling the pen name wrong) caddyable's Alternative Dark Angel (title is prob. wrong too)). More importantly I have commitment issues. So here it is. This is the basic summary of the story from where I stopped.
Now, this is not to say that I will not cont. this story. I might. Maybe, possibly. Idealy, I would love someone to take what I have and write it for me, or steal a couple of ideas and put together a story. If you do, you have my blessing just PLEASE tell me so that I can read it.
Some of these scenes I really get bored with and just skimmed over. I realize that the Harry character development is completely underemphasized even though it would happen. Some parts though, I have planned to exact detail. So, if there is one or two scenes in particular that you want written out review me and I'll try to put something together. Thanks so much. I really do love you all. And the reviews were wonderful beyond anything.
Oh, one last thing…I just have an idea swimming around in my head about a crossover (maybe potter, but prob. x-men) with DA. It would be either M/Z or M/A. Anyways, either they never escaped(M/Z) or were all captured within a year or 2 and Zack killed himself to save Max (M/A). Manticore puts them in breeding pairs as soon as they find out about heat just to see the reaction. Max really does love whoever she is with, but she doesn't realize until it's too late that manticore is just using even her feelings against her. At 11 (more mature mentally and physically remember) she is pregnet. She ends up forcing a miscarriage upon herself so that manticore can't have the baby. They revolt and over through manticore. They try to blend. They all stay together for support and to take care of the younger Xs. Some of them leave what ever their main area is to go off and steal stuff and send back the money. Alec or Zack in charge depending upon pairing. During one of the heists Maz and ? get envolved with the crossover. By the way their relationship is kinda screwed up because even though they love each other, they were used by Manticore because of it and are afraid that by loving each other they are giving into what Manticore would want. Also, they would love a baby, but they would be scared for it because they are still on the run. What do you think.? Anyone interested enough to write it for me?
Here is what I had started for what was going to be the next chapter
1 September 2015
As the students streamed into the Great Hall, going to their respective tables Harry looked through the mass trying to pick out familiar faces. He grinned a little as he looked up at the enchanted ceiling. It was good to be surrounded by magic again. He had spent the entire summer blaming himself for Cedric's death, and growing annoyed as time went by. He wanted so badly to become stronger, but all of the books that he read for school just stressed defence and everyday application for spells.
Harry loved magic, all of it. But it was impractical for him to spend so much time studying the history of goblin wars when Voldemort and his followers where trying to kill his friends. While he was shopping for school supplies he had found a book in the back of the store. The cover was dusty and the title had worn away. He flipped through a few of the pages, hoping to kill time while his friends finished shopping. The writing had been small, cramped, and flowing. Harry had little luck making out the words in the dim light in the back of the store, but managed to read the section titles. Most of them dealt with offensive magic, and startigies. Their wa a good deal of defence and protection, but it also included a section on the application of dark magic.
Harry had bought the book out of curiosity. He had expected that much of it would be like an advanced DADA book, with perhaps more details, or first hand accounts of battles. Instead, in the few hours Harry had used to start the book, he had found that the book seemed to be filled with strickt rules and tactics which were supposed to help in battle. The more Harry read, the more he wanted to learn what the book had to teach. But as he continued, he soon found that much of the instruction in the book was uncomprhensible to him. Much of it was too complicated for him to understand without asking for help, and that was out of the question. So Harry continued to read the book which seemed to hint at the skills which he needed without ever grasping how to use the words which he read.
He was shaken from his thinking by Ron, as the red head whispered to him, "Hey look! Over there next to Snape. It's Max. Oh, wow doesn't she look great in those robes? I wonder if she'll be at the teacher's table all year, or if she'll be willing to eat with us…I mean we are her friends right?"
Harry was saved from trying to answer that by Hermione, who quickly pointed out, "We've only known her for a few weeks, though Dumbledore must respect her if he's willing to allow her to be a teaching aide at her age." Harry was about to agree when Dumbledore motioned for everone to sit down. The evening went smoothly, Max received a round of applause after being introduced, the food was wonderful, the first years were sorted, and everyone nearly fell asleep during Prof. Umbridge's speech.
Harry had been laying in bed for about an hour when it finally dawned on him that he wasn't going to get any sleep that night.
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OK heres the summary
Harry gets tutored from Max about the military like stuff in the book he found about dark arts and military strategy. Harry gets a better character. It's announced that there will be a Halloween ball. There's a trip to Hogsmead. Max and Harry meet Lupin, but Max says that she needs to go do something. Harry sees a Death Eater talking to Max asking about information, he assumes because she isn't freaking out or anything that she must be a spy, but he likes her(as a friend) so he doesn't want to accept it and just tells Ron and Hermione so that they keep a closer eye on her. Max tells the Death Eater that was trying to recruit her with the promise that she wouldn't be killed to shove it and manages to get away. She goes to the Shrieking Shack(Harry and co. aren't following) and calls Zack. He agrees to come to the dance since costumes are required and it's only a day or two before her heat anyways.
At some point in potions they're going to make a paternity/maternity test potion. Hermione will notice that Max doesn't want to go near it. They'll get some hair or something test it and end up with a weird stream of letters…the base pairs of her DNA. They don't recognize it, but somehow Umbridge is going to get her hands on the paper it's on. Halloween Ball: she goes as a 'dark angel'(sorry couldn't resist). Cool dress, think Phedre's low in the back dress if you've ever read Kushiel's Dart. Zack shows…yay romance and hot monkey love. I'm not sure if Harry recognizes him as the guy from her boggart illusion or not.
Eventually they go to Dumbledore with their suspicions, they think that she must be reporting to Voldemort or taking a potion to hide the fact that she's a witch or keep her resistant to magic or something when she goes missing for a few days at a time, so they decide to find a way to make her stay the next time she tries to leave and see if something happens, or if she fights to get away to follow her. Snape agrees to help only because he has complete faith in her. They pretty much bog her down with work and make it obvious to her that if she tries to leave she'll be followed. She's helping Snape with detention, Harry, Ron, Draco, and Hermione I think will be the ones in there along with Snape. She's in heat and trying hard to fight it. She keeping on coming on way to strong to the guys and then basically trying to provoke them into a fight to see if any on them are strong enough to be worth her time when she knows that her mate is out their somewhere. Hermione runs to Dumbledore for help, he gets there and with Snape's help manages to knock her out and drag the her away from the boys(yeah she's coming onto Snape to, he just if more of a fathering figure and can resist better). They lock her in the dungeon and try to figure out what the hell is going on. She wakes up and begins snarling and scratching at the door trying to get out. Zack eventually shows up, if Harry, Ron, and Hermione didn't recognize him at the dance they do now, gets past all the people guarding Max's door, threatens and causes some semiserious bodily harm, gets to Max, they run like have a sexy passionate kiss and a minute to grind before they run for the forest like bats out of hell.
Lupin gets called in because obviously Max is a little more than she seems. She comes back to the castle manages to get away with some half truths and an assurance that her secret has nothing to do with the magical community, and the only reason that she is on any side in the magical war is because she cares about Lupin and Snape. They agree to let her stay, but everyone is keeping an eye on her.
Umbridge, who has shared the paternity results with her superiors, gets an order from the ministry, who is being influenced by Lucius, who is controlled by Voldemort, who is cutting a deal with Renfro dealing with soldiers for magical strength, to begin looking for the person who produced the results. They come up with a new bogus rule saying that the ministry requires that everyone submits a blood sample to be tested for illegal potions. Max somehow finds out what Umbridge's ulterior motive is. Zack shows up and kills Umbridge, Lydecker frames Max, Zack turns himself in.
Max spends all summer depressed goes 452 mode completely perfect soldier training, she contacts her sibs. and tries to take care of them, saves/kills Ben, starts helping Harry learn how to fight, and asks Lupin for help getting Zack back in exchange for telling the truth about who she is. She gets back Zack, the wizards that go with her see some disturbing things at the military base, Max manages to feed Lupin more half truths that only cover the tip of the iceberg. Once Zack is stable they run for it.
They contact their sibs. and eventually after Lydecker finds out that Renfro killed Tinga, who was captured earlier, he helps Max and Zack try to take down Manitcore. Captured, Zack kills himself, they fix him up, because of Max's heat she and Zack get placed as breeding partners sans contraceptives. They break out with Alec and Bryn's (a couple now) help, the double back and release all the soldiers and blow up the base.
Meanwhile Harry keeps studying and practicing, the war with Voldy is now acknowledged by the magical community and he is getting extra help (familiars). Lupin is still depressed about Max. Hermione comes back from some break having heard about transgenics on the TV. Everyone gets interested and they do spells to keep up with the news. A photo of Max shows up from TC. She has a baby with her (cat gestation period, maybe twins because of litters and all).
They go show Lupin and Dumbledore. Eventually it all work out that the good guys help each other to bring down the bad guys. A couple of horrifying revelation scenes were the Potter gang find out about how awful a Manitcore childhood really is. I'd want some transgenic-human interaction like the press or some senators because that always seems interesting to me. Ummm….that's about it.
Hope it was Okay….love you lots of chocolates worth.