Hey to all the nice people who reviewed my first chapter, this is for ya'll! It's longer!
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Fed Up: Rachel Slocum-Nice?
As Rachel hurried outside in her designer heels, she called out, "Ryan…"
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Ryan Slocum looked up from his girlfriend, Jennifer Kenworthy; and did a double-take. To behold the spectacle of his picture-perfect sister, the most popular girl in school, actually running to the barn, was just as unlikely as what she was about to suggest.
"Ryan, there you are, I was just looking for you." She smiled at Jen as she said, "Hello Jennifer, how are you?"
"F-fine, thanks, and you?" Jen spluttered on her reply as she wondered what was wrong with Rachel.
"I'm thrilled to catch you both, actually." She shook her head as Jen began to sidle towards the foreman's house. "Now, Jennifer, I had hoped you and Ryan would assist me in a matter that has come to my attention." Her voice became somewhat icy as she added, "In fact, I'm surprised it hasn't come to yours."
Jen sighed and shifted her weight towards Ryan once again.
"Rachel, would you get to the point? I'd like to go for a ride with Jen, if you don't mind." Ryan was just as uneasy as Jen about his sister's behavior.
"I do mind. I will make your life a misery-"
"Like you don't now?" Ryan muttered to Jen.
"-if," She went in a tone of forced patience. "You don't hear me out.
"I will spell this out for you once. If you don't understand the situation by then, I will leave with a less than favorable impression of you, be forced to do this on my own, and you will have disappointed many people in this community.
"Sam likes Jake." At Jen's smothered gasp, Rachel sighed loudly, and explained, "You can see it in the way she looks at him, Jennifer, and in the way she listens to him and how she blushes when anyone flirts with him. Let me tell you, those aren't blushes of embarrassment, she's jealous.
"He likes her. One can tell this by when someone flirts with him; he glances at Samantha as if asking her permission. He also doesn't clam up around her as much as he does with the rest of us."
Jen interrupted, "He doesn't clam up with her because he sees her as a sister…" The rest of what Jen had been going to say had quailed under Rachel's glare.
"Jennifer, just listen to my idea and then you can decide whether to do it, or not." She glanced at first Jen, then Ryan, as if looking for an interruption. Finding none, she sighed and explained her idea to them.
"You want us to do what?" Jen shrieked. "And do you honestly think Darrell will cooperate?"
Rachel smiled smugly. "Is he not Jake's friend?"
Ryan spoke up. "Rachel, we will speak to Darrell. If he agrees to your plan for him, we will do our part, as well."
"We will?" Jen squeaked?
"We will, if what is in it for us is worth it."
Rachel sighed, she had thought about what would make them do it, but she still didn't like it. "If you two and Darrell can pull this off without them finding out whose idea it was, namely me, I will," Here she paused and gulped.
"Is it really that dramatic Rachel?" Jen asked, her voice full of scorn.
"For me, yes." Rachel snapped. "Let me continue, or I won't tell you.
"If this works, I will ride Mocha to and from school wearing appropriate jeans, shirt, shoes, and hat."
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Muaha. Please review! I have another chapter I'll update soon, provided you review. I have a general idea, but I'd like some help on the details. hint, hint; nudge, nudge
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