Well hello there hope you guys enjoyed the first chapter re-write and I also hope you will enjoy this one. Since these are rewrites I have moved the previews reviews to the bottom of the chapter, I have tried to proofread everything in the story to make sure it lines up but please point out any continuity errors if you see any because no matter how many times I check I always think I have missed something. Anyway, I have gone through the rest of the chapters and made small changes so that it lines up properly with the new beginning and, I have adjusted the time frame to be more believable. Also, I know it is out earlier than the 30th but I was still delayed because as well as the election Halo 4 came out on the MCC PC and I couldn't resist at least two full days of Campaign and Spartan Ops.

Let me know what you think of the finished remastered beginning, also here is the better-done timeline that was also in the original second chapter it might help keep track.

Final note thank you all so much for the follows and favourites as I edit this final piece we have reached over 39,000 views and a combined 465 follows/favourites. I said this in the next chapter as well, please point out any continuity errors in the rewrites when compared to the whole story I have tried but can't spot anything more.

Chapter Two: Protectors (Rewrite)

Timeline -

2553 March - The war between Humanity and the Covenant is over as the Great Schism begins and Arbiter Thel Vadam leads the war against the Covenant loyalists and the alliance is created between Humanity and the Sangheili and those that serve under them.

2553 December - With the assistance of excavation fleets provided by The Arbiter, planets previously glassed by the Covenant are slowly redeveloped and an era of Human/Sangheili cooperation slowly begins.

2555 June - After 2 years of study and development, forerunner engines discovered on a micro shield world are reversed engineered and are capable of outputting double that of even the UNSC's most powerful engines and slipspace jumps 80% more accurate than anything the UNSC had so far developed.

2555 July - The Universal refit begins for all UNSC combat and Science vessels to be fitted with newly developed reactors and engines capable of powering active camouflage and increased weapon power as well as new more accurate than ever slipspace drives.

2556 February - During the mass refurbishment the UNSC deploys its newest creation, the Mark I discovery probe. To avoid events such as the unforeseen invasion of Harvest from ever happening again.

2559 November - After nearly seven years the Arbiter and his forces drive the Covenant into submission and in their final attempt to win the loyalists round up every ship they have to attack Sangheilios but fail and are scattered into small cells across the galaxy.

2561 - Being the primary focus for redevelopment the planet Reach, reaches 60% of its original population and structural development, slowly becoming a military colony again

2562 July - Discovering countless references, details and illustrations of what the forerunners held as the Mantle of Responsibility it is slowly after ten years a principal for joining the military next to protecting humanity and a way of life for many within both the UNSC and Civilian population. The Mantle of Responsibility Act is drafted into commission by President Ruth Charet after being proposed by a group of representatives from multiple planets including Reach, Carpathia and Barrow statin, that if any sentient civilisation, known or unknown is subjected to inhumane treatment, the right to intervene and declare war is justified.

10:00 Hours, November 20, 2564 (UNSC Military Calendar)

UNSC Infinity

Geostationary Orbit above Sierra Base, Lucazec

It had been nearly four months since the first battle between the 1st exploratory fleet of the UNSC and the 10 ships of the Separatist Alliance. In that time the UNSC has sent half a dozen fleets to the galaxy and have been conducting surveillance operations in order to understand their enemy, there had been many engagements, however.

Two months into the construction of a temporary Andromeda based headquarters named Sierra Base on Lucazec a Separatist and Republic fleet encountered each other in the Abhean system almost right next to Lucazec and the cloaking generator to hide the outpost from sensors and wandering eyes hadn't arrived at the time. Luckily the two foes seemed more concentrated with the battle than scanning nearby systems.

Another close call was 6 weeks later when a separatist scout ship jumped into the system right in front of Lucazec and to make matters worse the cloaking generator was being repaired at the time and the base, as well as the fleet which now included the 20th battle fleet, were in full view to the small spy ship. Sensors on the UNSC ships and newly constructed Moncton-class super MAC platforms picked up the vessel almost immediately and as it tried to turn around and jump out of the system SMAC platform 3 operated by a smart-AI targeted the ship as it tried to jump and fired a standard 3,000-ton tungsten depleted uranium projectile that hit and entirely annihilated the ship. Whether or not any communication was made by the ship wasn't known.

Since the incident, early warning systems were placed in nearby systems. So far all UNSC operations conducted had been of surveillance. Prowlers sent to monitor planets occupied by the Confederacy and unmanned drones had been deployed to observe battles to learn the tactics used by the largely droid forces. One of the main discoveries of their involvement in the Andromeda system was an order of beings that used energy swords similar to that of the Sangheili and rare Spartan but they were much different. Closer surveillance and intelligence gathering revealed they had the ability to wield a galaxy-spanning energy field with their minds.

Further research showed them as generals in the clone wars and they commanded troops on the battlefield and in space conflicts. After many months of watching and learning they had gathered more intel than they could have hoped for. It led to attacks on CIS bases in other regions of the galaxy and ambushes on ground troops. All of it slowly drawing attention to the UNSC.

Rear Admiral Lasky, Captain Ajex, Commander Palmer and Roland stood in the CIC in-front of the main holotank in the room listening to intercepted transmissions they had managed to acquire from one of the many deep-space probes they had deployed over several weeks. "Play it again Roland". Captain Ajex said

Roland replayed the hologram message which compared to the holograms of the UNSC seemed vaguely static, the message was between two individuals one wore a hooded cloak and even with the three-dimensional communication was impossible to see who was under it, the sender was a large cyborg creature with a rough voice and intimidating figure.

The hooded figure is the first to speak "The Clone planet of Kamino will be a dangerous target" the voice sounds deep but slightly feminine, then a large droid like cyborg speaks in a robotic way "Just make sure you hold up your half of the mission, we must stop the production of new clones if we are to win this war". The transmission cuts out

The four of them look at one another "Kamino?" Palmer asked

Roland clarified bringing up the few images and details they had on the planet "It's an aquaplanet, completely covered in oceans with man-made, so to speak, islands on several parts of the planet It is the primary production and training facility of the Republic clone troopers if the Separatists attack Kamino and the Republic fails to protect it I honestly cannot figure out any way they could win the war". Roland said almost solemnly.

"Like Reach," She said looking back at the holotank

"Roland, where is Lieutenant Banks?" Lasky asked as Roland looked through the ships security cameras in half a second.

"Crew quarters, he appears to be playing cards with Gamma squadron" Roland replied

"Ask him to come to the CIC" Lasky asked

Roland nodded as he accessed one of the holo panels in the room and told him Admiral Lasky had requested his presence. When he had been told that the UNSC had declared war on the Confederacy but that they couldn't reveal themselves to them or the Republic he was incredibly reluctant to remain on the Infinity, after much convincing he agreed to stay until they 'officially' entered the war.

Despite some friendships with the crewmen he bunked with Lieutenant Banks was still adamant in his wishes to return to the GAR. After a short, while he entered the CIC, wearing a copy of his original Republic uniform that the armour and gear department had fabricated. "You asked for me Admiral". he said.

"Yes, Roland, play the message," Lasky said as he again played the short communication from the beginning with Banks watching. His eyes went wide halfway through it and his brow tightened at the end with his fist clenched

"The Separatists are going to attack Kamino!?" He said gritting

"Yes, I don't expect you to know the defences so I have deployed prowlers to the system to analyse how the Republic would fair against the invasion fleet the separatists are sending, we'll be receiving the details any second now but from the numerous signatures we got from scanning the location of the origin of the message we have estimated the fleet to include at least 25 capital ships and an unknown number of support vessels". Lasky explained

At this point, Roland interrupted "Sir, the report just came in from the prowler crew over Kamino". Roland said as he brought up the images taken and the official count of Republic ships, he started listing them, "11 Venator-class destroyers, 2 Acclamator-class assault ships and 2 Arquitens-class light cruisers" he finished

"That's it? One of their most valuable planets and they only have 15 ships protecting it, Imagine if the Covenant had it that easy with Reach" Palmer commented

"Roland are there no defence platforms or stations above the planet?" Ajex asked thinking there had to have been more to the defence.

"None Sir, I estimate that even if the Republic knows about the invasion, they still have a 60% chance of failing to secure a victory". Roland calculated.

"Admiral Lasky I can't stay here anymore, if they are going to attack Kamino, my home, I won't be here for it" Lieutenant Banks announced to Lasky

"That won't be necessary," Lasky said with Banks about to argue against it before he spoke again "Because we aren't going to let it fall"

Banks' expression changes "You're going to stop it?" he asked questioningly

He didn't reply, Lasky walked up to the holotank and accessed the composition of both the 20th battle fleet and the 1st exploratory fleet. He wouldn't leave the research and science vessels with no protection but the 20th battle fleet was due to leave in 3 hours to provide protection to a top-secret diplomatic mission between the UNSC and the head of the neutral systems, Duchess Satine of Mandalore in an effort to create mutual friendships between the two governments.

"As of right now 6 completed Moncton-class defence platforms are protecting the fleet and our settlement on Lucazec but it won't be adequate enough to repel an attacking force especially if we don't know it's strength. Roland, I'm inputting the ships to split off from the 1st fleet to form a temporary task force codenamed Guardian". He said as he started analysing the ships he would need to leave behind in order to protect the planet and the rest of the non-combat vessels as well as making assessments as to how many ships he would need for the attack.

Task Force Guardian

UNSC Infinity; Lead Ship

2 Thermopylae-class supercarriers

2 Titan-class Dreadnaughts

5 Ajax-Class Heavy Frigates

10 Hyperion-class destroyers

Completing the separation he submitted it to Roland "Sir, even with the Infinity's internal Stridents, are you sure this is going to be enough ships to fight a fully equipped Confederacy fleet?" he asked skeptically knowing that the Separatist fleet was at least 25 ships and of what class they didn't even know.

"I agree with him Sir, if the Separatists are attacking Kamino they aren't going to be doing it lightly," Banks said looking at the group of 18 ships he has selected

Lasky was quick to respond "I am sure, I can't leave the rest of the fleet open to attack and with our efforts combined with the Republics, I am confident we'll come out of this intact. Roland can you calculate how long before the Separatist fleet arrives at Kamino" He asked

"Not entirely Sir," Roland says bringing up the message details "We intercepted the message while they were in Hyperspace but we still don't fully understand it as it isn't slipspace but there's only so many places they could launch a fleet big enough to attack Kamino from and the best estimate I can give you is that they will arrive in the system within the next 1 to 3 hours". Roland informed

"Our eta to Kamino?" Ajex asked

"1 Hour and three minutes based on the task force configuration," Roland said

"So best case we get there just as the invasion starts and worse case it's already over". Ajex said

Lasky raised his arm and used the oval-shaped tablet on his arm to contact the bride "Lieutenant James, plot a course to the Abrion sector coordinates as follows 710.488 by -530.778 and relay them to the ship configuration codenamed Guardian for immediate departure" He ordered as he made his way to the bridge followed by Captain Ajex and Lieutenant Banks.

As the three of them arrived on the bridge and gathered around the main holotable several minutes later the task force was already underway, Lasky brought up an internal communication line to the CIC where Palmer was. "Commander Palmer, prepare the 7th Shock Troops Battalion and 6 Spartan Fireteams with jetpacks and decent brakes, if the enemy fleet is still there when we arrive the fleet we'll make a window for them to deploy to the surface, the weather is to violent for SOEIV pods, they have to deploy via D77 Pelicans but they'll have to bail out at forty thousand feet". Lasky said organising the attack

As Lasky was detailing the troop numbers and requirements to commander Palmer, Ajex had the captains of the 'Centaur' and 'Malter' Thermopylae-class supercarriers as well as Chief Petty Officer Richards the flight controller of the Infinity. "Have two-thirds of all available manned space fighters ready to deploy immediately and keep the remaining in reserve, Malta have all remaining F-41 Broadswords escort the Pelicans to the surface and provide support to ground assets". Ajex detailed

Roland displayed a large three-dimensional map of Kamino "Scans of the planet have shown these two series of platforms and buildings to be the main predicted attack point of the Separatists" He said, enhancing on the map.

"Tipoca and Timira City" Banks said "They are the main facilities if they fall so does Kamino, in the event of an invasion Tipoca city is more likely to face a greater enemy force being the capital"

Admiral Lasky responded promptly "We'll focus our efforts there and provide aerial support to both locations once the leading Separatist fleet is terminated," he said looking up from the tactical display

"Admiral, once we arrive, what is your plan for the defence fleet, even if they Separatists break off and attack how do you stop them from assuming you're hostile?" Lieutenant Banks asked

"When we exit the slipstream I'll contact whichever Republic ship is leading and inform them that we are enemies of the CIS and have no intentions to invade or assault the Republic and Kamino," He said straightly to him walking forwards to one of the monitoring stations

Banks walked over "With all due respect Sir that might not be enough to persuade them to allow you to send troopers down to the surface, When you contact the defence fleet I think my appearance might help them believe you more". He appealed

"Your probably right but it could backfire, If they assume you're a hostage or that it's some kind of trick they could wind up us as enemy combatants," He said leaning against the metal railing next to the station "Alright, I won't have long before the Separatists try and attack us or do something equally bad so if they don't get on board quickly then I'll allow it there is another way you could help though". Lasky compromised

"Anything, How?" he asked

"All ODST and Spartan armour have tracking and sensor systems in them but if we could identify clones from droids in zero visibility it would minimise the risk of friendly fire and make locating allied forces much easier, you're a clone all your genetic material is the same, using yours we can use it to pinpoint any clone within the range of the soldier's armour". Lasky explained

"Alright, What do you need?" He asked trying to help the protection of Kamino however he could

Lasky told him the scientists in charge of armour development already had a genetic scanner but it was still in the testing phase, voluntarily he plucked a hair from his head and provided it to the grateful researcher, only time would tell if the research divisions on the Infinity were worth the credits.

Behind in the back decks of the Infinity thousands of troops prepared for the upcoming battle with no time for detailed briefings. ODST forces hastily put on their armour making sure it was strapped tightly followed by their helmets and finally their weapons. Gathering all their ammunition and equipment storing it in their pouches. Once equipped and ready they rush march in double parallel lines to the deployment bays on the port side of the Infinity where over sixty Pelicans are waiting.

Onboard they receive their mission briefs, to deploy to the surface via heavy Pelican dropship and bailout at forty thousand feet above the ground and use Jetpacks and air brakes to descend the rest of the way, once on the ground their platoon leaders would highlight key areas for them and other teams to get to and protect and eliminate all droid forces on the planet.

While In the starboard side hangers, flight crew teams were working double-time to get all the F-41E Broadswords and GA-TL1 Longswords ready for combat with missile loading systems operating to arm the craft and large elevators and trams moving with crewmen on them to retrieve extra munitions from the secure storage deeper within the ship. Small towing vehicles and large crane systems above moved the fighters into positions with their pilots inside them ready and waiting to deploy.

On S-Deck or Spartan Town as it was commonly referred to, 26 Spartans of the six teams checked their armour systems and weapons were combat-ready before also double-timing it to the Pelican hangar bays. Onboard the ships they received detailed mission parameters and objectives. They would jump from the Pelicans at the same altitude but would land at different locations.

Fireteams Bailey, Royal, Crimson and Blackburn would land at the very edge of the city from the North, South, East and West providing heavy support to ODST squads while moving in towards the centre of the city. The last two fireteams Osiris and Majestic would drop in the right to the centre of the city and fight their way through the buildings to the command centre clearing out any droids that may have captured it or got close. Commander Locke of fireteam Osiris would take points for the objective.

Activity buzzed all over the ship as well as the rest in the battle group with the fighters in Malta and Centaur simultaneously being prepared for immediate combat deployment. The situation was no calmer on the other combat vessels as missile pods, MAC cannons, point defence guns and all other weapons were being loaded and armed ready for the battle. Sixteen Sabres and F-406 Katana fighters readied to leave the hangers and provide CAP to the dreadnaughts. By the time all fighters were ready for deployment and all troopers were locked and loaded in the Pelicans there were just minutes left before they exited slipspace.

On the bridge, the crew rushed from one area to another gathering all the details for the attack and marking off readied systems. Despite the organised chaos the tension could be cut with a knife. Soon they were only several seconds out as Lieutenant Jet announced the countdown till the task force exited the slipstream.

"Reentering subspace in 5…" He started

"4…"

"3…"

"2…"

"1…"

In perfect timing, the battlegroup dropped out of slipspace and didn't have time to gather their thoughts as in-front of them to their close right was the Separatist fleet. It was as large as Roland had predicted and the Republic forces were correct to the reports received from the prowler, they were outnumbered more than two to one by themselves and were already losing the battle.

Far enough away that they were still out of the enemies range but close enough theory could already see the ferocity of the ensuing battle, red and blue laser fire swarmed the space around the two fleets. Running the scan Roland informed the Rear-Admiral that there were 2 Lucrehulk-class battleships,

"Alright, here we go, Roland, I need a firing solution on the Separatist fleet, all fighters and troop loaded Pelicans are to launch on my orders, Lieutenant Jesperson, open a hailing channel on all known Republic frequencies we won't have long before the Separatists try something" Admiral Lasky quickly ordered.

All the crew quickly went to work and the communications Lieutenant signalled him that the channel was open, "Republic defenders of Kamino, this is Rear Admiral Thomas Thomas J. Lasky of the UNSC, are you receiving me?" He said waiting for a response and got one a few silent seconds later which Roland used to warn him of a problem.

"Sir, there's too many Republic fighters attacking the enemy ships for us to effectively coordinate a MAC salvo at full strength, requesting permission to take control for all MAC's for the task force to fire at clean intervals?"

"Are you sure you can process that many trajectories?" Lasky asked

"That's almost an insult captain" Roland half-joked

"Granted," He said as his head was brought back to the communication terminal near the front of the Infinity bridge. The Republic fleet had received the communication request and could now see each other.

Lasky saw the man on the ship in a dark olive green uniform with six rectangular tokens on his left side, three red on top of three blue. He looked confused upon seeing Lasky having not seen anything like his ships or uniform before. He was clearly holding onto something out of view to brace himself in the middle of the battle, "Admiral Yularen to Unknown vessels, this region is under siege by the Separatist alliance you must fall back from this system immediately" He said warningly out of intended protection or threateningly Lasky didn't know.

"You misunderstand Admiral, the UNSC is at war with the CIS and we're here as reinforcements to protect Kamino," Lasky said increasing in speed as he could see a section of the Separatist fleet breaking off from the main attacking force.

"The Republic is not allied with and has no knowledge any faction or government known as the UNSC," He said back

"Admiral we don't have time for this, your fleet is outmatched and if you do not allow us to help Kamino will fall, I have drop ships ready to deploy to the surface and fighters ready to engage the Separatist with my Taskforce but I need your assurance that your men will not engage them when they begin their assault against the droid forces on the planet, against the droids Admiral, not the Republic or the clones". Lasky detailed trying to convince him.

Onboard his ship Yularen looked out to his fleet and the officers on the bridge reporting more losses on the planet's surface and in space. His fighter started to spread thin and several droids packed ships had even managed to break through to the surface aiding the already numerous force attacking the facilities. He knew that they were losing but if he allowed this force that had come out of nowhere to bypass what little defence they had left and they attempted to attack Kamino a court-martial would be the least of his concerns.

As he was about to respond to the UNSC Rear Admiral two more of the fleet's Venators suffered massive explosions from the near-constant fire of Separatist ships. "Admiral, I don't know who you are or where your ships came from but if something doesn't change none of us will do what you have to I'll contact command not to fire on any unknown ships or soldiers If I'm wrong about this I doubt I'll live long enough to see or suffer the consequences". Yularen said hoping he wouldn't regret more than he already did.

On the Infinity Lasky grinned and sighed in relief turning to Roland behind him on the holotank, "Roland the light is green, all fighters deploy, fire all clean MAC's and arm all Archer, Rapier and Howler missile pods for the ship to ship combat. Lieutenant James, take us into sector 571 by 381". Lasky firmly ordered as the fleet started moving, missile pods opened and energy started routing to the MAC's coils.

Their approach put them on a course aligning them with the Republic fleet on their left and the Separatists right in front of them "Sir, the group of 8 enemy ships that broke off from the main Separatist fleet is clear of Republic fighters we can fire a full salvo". Roland informed

"Do it" Lasky said as the ships used their manoeuvring thrusters to have their sterns facing the incoming group of enemy ships, energy gathered in all of the ships forward MAC's and several seconds later they fired and let loose a combined 38 projectiles that exploded from the fronts of the ships shooting towards the enemy ships who did not even attempt to manoeuvre thinking the slugs would not even drop their shields. Admiral Yularun appeared to share this presumed downcast when the weapons fired until they struck the ships and peppered the hostiles as if they had no shields, striking with massive kinetic force causing of large explosions with some rounds splintering inside the ship and coming out of the rear as shrapnel.

The absolute shock of seeing the 8 ships get eviscerated was clear on both Yularens face and the clone crewmen and officers around him who had whitened the massive synchronized firing from the UNSC ships strike the attackers and completely annihilate them. Lasky addressed Yularen bringing him out of his distracted look "Admiral, my fighter are about to intercept and relive yours make sure they know we're not enemy targets" He said

Yularen shook his head quickly "Yes, of course, they'll register your ships as friendly, sorry Admiral I've just never seen anything like that, What was that?" He said mostly out of his state of awe.

From the starboard side hangers of the Infinity, Hundreds of UNSC fighter groups flew out and descended on the overburdened Republic fighters marking them as allied and targeting the Separatist Vulture droids and tri-fighters. In the tide of a few seconds, the overwhelming wave of Broadsword, Longsword and Sabre fighters firing their machine guns and locked on missiles had practically evaporated the enemy fighters like water tossed into a volcano. The Republic fighters had been relieved and now had the chance to regroup. Golden streams of tracer rounds were now added to the display of the battle.

Working with the regrouped fighters the UNSC craft led the attack on the new waves of incoming droid fighters that had apparently been kept in reserve, unlike the Republic who had run out and were down to their last available ARC-170's and V-19's to fend off the attackers. Several minutes into the battle the escort fighters and D79-TC Pelicans loaded to the brim with ODST's and Spartans departed for the surface. Very few enemy fighters got through the screen of combined Republic and UNSC fighters to shoot down even one.

The remaining 7 Munificent-class frigates, 2 Lucrehulk-class battleships and single commanding Providence-class dreadnaughts now found themselves outgunned and outnumbered, deploying all their bombers and fighters to try and eliminate the new ships that had entered the battle, turning most of their fire on them from the Venators causing the ships point defence systems to be running continuously to try and take down all incoming bombers, The fighters protecting the ships flew tirelessly to shoot down all of the incoming ordinance carrying ships.

Onboard the Infinity Roland was running through all of the calculations to fire the MAC's without hitting the Republic and UNSC fighters, a task that was proving difficult after the enemy ships moved closer to the battle of fighter craft after seeing why the ships didn't fire large salvos as they had done with their broken off group that now floated aimlessly through space defenceless. Having fewer chances to fire the massive projectiles the task force was forced to use the ship to ship missiles and heavy autocannons as their main offensive weapon.

Approaching the surface over sixty D79-TC Pelicans escorted by dozens of ground support multirole fighters slowly became less visible from the fleet and the Separatist ships focused on trying to wipe out the UNSC fleet but every attempt they made backfired and only resulted in the loss of more of their own ships. One Of the two remaining Lucrehulk-class battleships and four Munificents had attempted to clear the fighters and make a run for the Infinity, firing all of their hundreds of laser batteries and cannons at the ship and the surrounding ones.

Onboard the Infinity the shields started to decrease dramatically until the Preston and four Hyperion destroyers fired its engines and flanked the enemy ships. It was now clear of all friendly forces with nothing behind the enemy but open space. A purple glowing sphere started to form on the forward section of the Titan-class battleship on both the port and starboard side until a full 30 seconds of it increasing in size caused it to release, the ship had fired it's two Ion cannons, a rare weapon fitted to any ship due to the immense power needed to not only charge the weapon but to contain it until it was released.

It hurled towards the enemy battleship that even being able to put out massive amounts of fire barely touched two-thirds of the Infinity's size. As the two purple spheres hit the ship they dissipated against the hull causing no explosions or detonations but the ship and two of the frigates next to it stopped firing and the glow from their engines died. It stopped moving and started to drift downward towards the planet below, getting caught in Kaminos gravity well. Onboard the Infinity Roland worked out the print of its descent.

"Sir, I've run the descent of the ship six thousand times and it'll land 20 miles south of any facilities on the planet, the other two frigates are trying to fall back to what's left of the main force, orders?". Roland informed watching the ships go down but it didn't matter.

"Angle the Infinity, Preston and Keys downward 45 degrees and fire full MAC salvos, Aquila and Grant are to fire on the retreating ships" Lasky ordered

The Infinity and the two dreadnaughts fired their engines and the ships promptly aimed closer to the surface of the planet aligning their sterns to the falling enemy ships as above them the two heavy frigates started firing their MAC's at 15-second intervals while also engaging their engines to increase their accuracy.

The fleeing ships didn't make it far though as the consistent and sustained fire from the Ajex class frigates depleted their shields within the first three salvos causing the first to be split from its engines causing secondary internal explosions and the second had two rounds go through it at once, one hitting the bridge from behind causing its nearly all window design to throw everything inside it out into the vacuum of space. Simultaneously the second shot ploughed right into the left primary ion engine, the imbalance caused the ship to list to starboard exposing its weak under armour, one final shot from the Aquila went straight through, no chain reactions of explosions accrued but it was dead with no power or weapons.

Finally realising the fleet was all but lost the leading Providence command ship started to steer to port and was clearly trying to escape, it was followed by the few Munificents and single providence that remained but the Republic ships now-fired everything they had as did the Hyperion and Ajex ships that now fully entered the battle. As they retreated, the UNSC ground forces had reached their jump altitude.

(Just a surprise note, If you want the next part to be twice as amazing play 'Light is Green' from Halo 5 Guardians OST)

Onboard the Pelican carrying Fireteam Osiris, team leader commander Locke was going over the plan on the small holo terminal in the middle of the ship. It showed a three-dimensional map of their descent and the planet where their landing point was marked as it was on their HUD's as well. "Are we clear, we make our way to the command centre of the city marked on our HUD's no wandering, eliminate any and all droid forces on route, under no circumstances are we to fire on the local military population and Republic personnel, Republic command has been informed of our arrival though a response has not yet been heard from their ground command" Locke detailed in his usual deep and prudent tone of voice.

As he finished the Pelicans decent stopped and the ship levelled out, followed by blue light in the cabin and the rear ramp lowering to reveal the massive ocean planet with miles deep sea below them and ahead of the pelicans by several miles and below them by 7 and a half miles was the largest of the cloning facilities, Tipoca city. The second the light came on and the exposure of daylight entered the room they all made their way to the rear. "Osiris, the light is green!" He said loudly over the wind and threw himself out of the dropship followed by the rest of the team.

As they all deployed the other sixty-plus ships around flying in perfect formation they had also opened up and the hundreds of troops had started their descent towards the battlefield. All of them are specially equipped with Jetpacks and drag increasing flaps to allow them to drop into combat as effectively as possible without commencing a slow troop deployment through dropships. No anti-air tried to shoot them down but as the twelve-hundred plus strong UNSC force broke through the cloud cover they could see the stilt mounted city crisscrossed in laser fire with droid forces starting to push back the defending clones into last stand defensive areas.

They all equipped and racked their weapons as the 7th Battalion and Spartan Fireteams held their weapons close and as they reached the 1000ft marker on their displays all deployed their Jetpacks to full power immediately slowing their velocity to a landable rate. On the ground, the clone forces had clearly noticed them as they fell below the clouds and despite only some of them being aware that they were not an invading force the clones were too busy fighting for their lives, Some pointed upwards to the incoming mass of troops or that was what they assumed.

Following behind them were fighters the size of republic gunships, they pushed their engines to the limit and a squad of three raced to the surface locking on their missiles to a large amphibious droid carrier that was drilled into one of the cities large building, The three of them released two missiles all hitting with ferocious power, destroying the metal grip it had causing the half containing the droids the fall to the ground and into the ocean. They broke off and split their formation attacking other targets on the ground and in the air.

The cover fire provided by the Longswords bought the UNSC their opening as the chaos only increased and the droids' fire was forced to split between the clones and the UNSC forces that had landed at all four main points of the city. Seconds before they had even set foot they were firing their weapons at the large cluster of droids that had been overwhelming the existing garrison.

Fireteam Osiris was the last to land and as they came to their stop on the sloped roof of one of the central buildings they could see the ODST troopers begin to make a dent in the enemy forces already. Especially to the west were with the assistance of fireteam Blackburn they had encircled a large buildup of droids and in the trap had wiped them out completely, the clones they had saved were cut off from command and had no idea who the soldiers were one of them even raising his weapon towards them when they started rushing towards and away from them to go and continue their mission, luckily one of the clones next to him had reached out with his arm and pushed the soldier's weapon down.

Whether or not the new soldiers didn't notice or saw it and didn't care they didn't know, but as they watched them continue to lead the fight with others they followed and found themselves fighting droids alongside heavily armoured troops using unknown but deadly weapons. Not taking more than a few seconds of it in Locke pointed out their objective building that had a trail of droids going into it and several fallen clone troopers next to it, he gave the order to pursue. Not being in a stealth situation the team didn't bother with acknowledgement lights and followed Locke.

The four of them quickly holstered their weapons running down the side of the curved roof before collapsing their knees and sliding down the rest of the war before pushing themselves off with force and landing on the long platform that led into the building, in a flash they had their weapons back in their hands and entered the command building, the droids they had seen run into the room just moments before were not in sight. There was no power in the long white corridors and the entire structure was void of light. They all activated the powerful lights mounted on their helmets and weapons.

"Vale, Tanaka you're on rear security, Buck up-front with me, sweep the corridors and junctions our target is the command centre, HUD reads it less than 50 meters," Locke said as they moved forward hearing faint blasters in the background but it was almost silent which almost unnerved them considering the colossal battle continuing around them. Tanaka and Vale moved with their guns sweeping every corner they passed and always checking their six for any surprise attacks.

After getting closer and closer to their objective the firing got louder and louder until it sounded like it was right next to them and their thoughts were confirmed when several meters later they came to a corner and several clones had been attempting to open a locked door while three others were fighting off two dozen droids that had them trapped with no way out, or so they thought. Silently Locke used hand signals to direct them into a spread line in the hallway, the clones weren't firing close to the back and wouldn't hit the Spartans.

As they formed the line they moved in unison closer towards the droids, slowly and unseen as they got to within a meter of the enemy and Locke gave another signal. In complete synchronicity they pulled back the droids in front of them, Buck and Locke crushed them beneath their armour while Tanaka and Vale used their arm and strength to put the droids in a headlock snapping the joints in their metal. Buck dove into the middle of the droids crowds and planted a bubble shield around the droids him and Tanaka while Vale remained on the outside fighting the droids behind them.

Inside the bubble, the Spartans didn't attempt to shoot or physically attack the dorids, instead, they all activated their Spartan armour lock ability that briefly sent a surge of power to their shields making them nearly invulnerable to all forms of fire, after several seconds of concentrated but inaccurate fire the energy lock collapsed but sent a small wave of disused energy that was of no threat to the Spartans and their UNSC tech but completely fried the droids who shook violently and fell to the ground when the Spartans shields resumed to normal.

Now the bubble shield fell and they could see the clones and Vale firing on the last remaining few droids. The three of them approached, even with their helmets on, the clones looked suspicious, to say the least. "We're fireteam Osiris of the UNSC, sent here to protect Kamino not take or destroy it, is this the door to the command centre?" Locke said factually to the clones who looked towards each other, none of them heads any armour marlins that distinguished them to be of higher rank/

"The command centre is behind this door but the droids sealed it behind them, we can't get through". One of the clones said after several seconds of silence.

Locke looked towards Tanaka who then moved towards the door quickly scanning it through her HUD, "2.5 inches thick, magnetic lock system, give me a second" she said as she planted a tall thin canister on the middle section of the door.

"Stack up" Locke ordered, Osiris piled up next to the door as well as the clones who split between the sides of the door and crouched a few meters away but in front of the door, accurately guessing it was some kind of explosive placed on the door. Fully stacked ready to breach, Tanaka primed the detonator "Breaching!" she shouted before activating the device. Along the outside of the planted cylinder, a blindingly bright light burned against the metal seemingly moving clockwise. It lasted for three seconds before it stopped. It had completely melted through the locking mechanism and the pressure of the doors pulled right open.

When they rushed open the Spartans and clones piled into the room, when they first got eyes in the room it was filled with droids and clone officers, not in armour but fighting back with small arms fire. In front of them was a tall figure wielding a blue lightsaber. In Spartan time they rushed forward slightly crouched with their weapons turning on the droids and firing immediately. It didn't take long for the incoming clones and Spartans to fan out across the room and overwhelm the droids who were cut down within minutes of the breaching.

When the combat ended the Jedi sheathed her lightsaber approaching commander Locke "I sense that you are these UNSC saviours we were told of by Admiral Yularen" She said, her voice was soft and almost felt compassionate.

"Correct Ma'am, Spartan Locke leader of Fireteam Osiris, I recommend you gather your forces the battle isn't over yet" he replied as she nodded agreeing and had most of the clones guard the command centre will she and several other clone troopers followed the Spartans outside were the battle was raging but in favour of the Republic and UNSC, all droid forces had been pushed back to the edges of the city. Across the other side though the largest section of droids had put up a better fight than expected.

"Iona, do you copy?" A lone spartan shouted into his com as he fought off multiple incoming aqua droids. "Does anybody copy, this is Spartan Jack A-127?" he said again hearing nothing, his communication link was damaged. He shot and ran his way through the droids eventually losing them by lowering himself down an outside balcony display area onto a platform below him, he had evaded the droids but several meters ahead of him he saw something else. A tall man with a blue lightsaber fighting a slim agile figure, they were battling aggressively. He could tell the one duelling red lightsabers was CIS and the other a Jedi that they had been briefed on over several months.

Not seeing his team anywhere he pulled himself up onto the catwalk above them and silently ran along the metal railing until he was directly overhead, as he got closer he could see they were fighting over something, a small cylindrical container of some sort. He knew that if the Jedi was trying to protect it, it must have been valuable. It looked as if the assailant was going to get her hands on it when she managed to get the upper hand on him, knocking him back after a quick but strong slash with her weapons he had dropped the canister and it rolled to the edge of the platform stopping just before it fell off.

Reaching her hand out it started to fly towards her quickly, he knew vaguely of the powers some people in this galaxy had, he didn't think any further seeing what she was doing, using his augmented and extremely sensitive reflexes he dropped down from the footway with his hand already out to catch the container before she, whoever she was caught it, he managed to do just so as she pulled it forward it landed firmly in his grasp. He tightened his grip on it, it was only halfway through his drop that either of them noticed him. The Jedi behind him had thrown himself back up, as he was right next to him Spartan Jack now recognised him as Anakin Skywalker from the numerous surveillance operations and briefings.

"Hand that to me now or I shall kill you!" She threatened standing ready to attack him.

He tossed it to Skywalker who despite already having seen and fought the droids with the ODST soldiers, not that he was going to stop them, was still confused as to who they were. "Not mine to give and I don't believe it is yours to take". The Spartan said removing a small device from his holster and holding up as he activated revealing a blue energy sword, twined with his M6D service pistol he readied himself for her impending attack when from the shadows of wreckage and storage containers all around them clones had emerged with their weapons drawn and from behind them all Jet ODST troopers fly around them with their guns also drawn on the sith.

While glancing at the jet troopers the clones and Skywalker kept their focus on her, "I suppose you expect me to surrender?" She said with a smirk as if she was mocking them.

The Jedi only grinned "Actually I plan to let the clones execute your, right now" he said

"Same here," Spartan Jack said with a platoon's worth of jet troopers behind him.

She paused and looked to her left, the ODST troopers saw the incoming ship not knowing if it was Republic or not but the sith then jumped backwards into the air and managed to land perfectly on the ship. Spartan Jack tried to slash at her last second with his sword but it was no use. As the small sphere ship flew away the clones and hell jumpers attempted to shoot it down with their weapons but it was already out of range moments after they pulled their triggers.

With the enemy gone the Spartan lowered his weapon and the jet troopers landed, they could hear light cheers coming from the city. They had won the battle. "General Skywalker, I presume?" the armoured soldier greeted.

"I am, and who are you I saw what your people did during the battle above the planet and nowhere," Skywalker asked

"Spartan Jack A-127, though as for WE I don't think I am cleared let alone knowledgeable enough to tell you, I have no doubt now the battle is over our commanders will want to...discuss some things." He replied

"Certainly," He said as they and some of the soldiers vacated the area.

As they emerged from the shaded area below the city they came out into the light and saw the victorious forces, Venators had lowered into the atmosphere and both Republic and UNSC fighters flew overhead as well as dropships that came down to deliver supplies and start ferrying relief forces. But the largest source of attention by all of it was the behemoth of a ship that had also lowered into the atmosphere along with two smaller vessels. It was five times longer than a Venator-class star destroyer and was currently moored next to and above Tipoca.

On the main landing pad in the very centre of the city two Jedi already stood the Spartan and Skywalker approached them, they were talking to a man in a battle uniform similar to the ODST troopers but without a helmet and less armour. "General Skywalker?" he asked as he and the Spartan walked to them.

"Yes, who is asking exactly?" he asked

"Colonel Travis Sir, Rear Admiral Lasky, head of all UNSC forces in this galaxy has asked permission to come down to the surface for diplomatic discussions" he explained.

Anakin glanced to the other Jedi, Obi One Kenobi "I have informed, Colonel Travis here that we are eternally grateful but puzzled as to their aid and their commander has asked for permission from all generals at least in the Tipoca city for approval to land" he clarified

Looking around at all of the UNSC soldiers he turns back to the Colonel "I think it is time we meet the leader of the people that defeated the Separatists and saved Kamino". He replied.

Colonel Travis accessed his comm, they couldn't hear what he was saying but moments later a ship departed from the Infinity, escorted by two Broadsword fighters it landed front facing away and the rear ramp lowered, Admiral Lasky stepped out followed by Commander Palma on his right in her white armour and to his left Roland walked out, being able to utilize a forerunner synthetic shell covered in patterns of light and have a fire-like glow inside his head. Finally, a clone emerged. The leader of this group and the Promethean were a shock enough but this put more questions in their mind.

"Greetings, As I am sure you have been informed I am Rear Admiral Thomas Lasky of the UNSC or United Nations Space Command before we get into any questions about governments or military, Lieutenant Banks should be debriefed and allowed to return to his station whatever it may be after I explain. I know you have no reason to trust any of us but may I ask that we discuss things further aboard my ship?" Lasky asked, gesturing to the substantial vessel behind him.

Immediately the Jedi and clones around them grew nervous, "General If I may" Banks spoke "I know the Admiral will explain everything but I was not a hostage he said I could be brought back immediately but If I had taken his offer to come back after they rescued me there is a chance they wouldn't have aided us today or even declared war on the Separatists" he tried to briefly explain

"You declared war on the Separatists?" Anakin asked

"Officially yes, several months ago but without knowing anything about our new enemy we wouldn't have been able to manage an efficient war so up until now we have been waiting and watching". Roland replied his voice was the same as usual if slightly more natural.

"I'll agree to board your ship to discuss this matter but might I ask that Commander Cody and Captain Rex accompany us as well?" Obi-Wan asked

"Very well, We can finally discuss the matter on the bridge". He replied in agreement

Currisos the three Jedi boarded the Pelican that had brought them down. On the way to the Infinity Skywalker asked one of the questions they had all been asking in their heads "Admiral, Firstly I never thanked you for the fighters that saved us when we were up there so thank you but secondly how is it that ships and weapons so powerful belong to a people that the Galactic Republic has never even heard of". He asked, wanting to know.

"I'll explain fully on the bridge but the short answer, we aren't from this galaxy and have only been here for half a year". He explained

Frustratingly this only created more questions, however, they didn't have to wait very long before they arrived and docked with the Infinity. Skywalker was easily the most interested in the ship with it being five times longer than a Venator and judging by its performance probably more than 5 times as powerful. They got off the internal tram and stepped onto the lift that would take them to the bridge. "Admiral If you don't mind me asking how many of those fighters are on this ship?" Skywalker asked pointing towards one of the F-41 Broadswords being refuelled in the hangar.

Lasky saw it before the lift started to rise. He thought about it and it wasn't classified information "At full capacity and just those fighters...100 give or take but that is why the Infinity has super-carriers in the fleet with her". Lasky told him.

By now they had made it to the bridge, for the size of the ship they had expected it to be much bigger "I was expecting more bridge crew" Kenobi said to Skywalker Behind him the large holotank activated

"That's because I handle a lot of it" A voice came from behind him, their attention was turned to the voice.

"Hello, I say I have never seen anything quite like you," Shaak Ti said looking at the Golden AI persona.

"That is Roland, the smart AI that runs a lot of the ship, a little too smart for his own good sometimes," Lasky said, bringing up several files on the main holotank section Roland didn't occupy.

"We've never met, yet you sound familiar" Kenobi mentioned cautiously

"Actually you have met me so to speak, I was the Promethean with Lasky when we met on the planet, I'm an artificial intelligence but I'm not completely restricted to the ship". Roland said

"I have never known Artificial intelligence to possess such character," Shaak Ti said, admiring the construct.

"If you mean my appearance, this was the standard flight uniform for a pilot on the UNSC homeword several hundred years ago, I thought it fitting when I was created as I was to help run one of the largest ships built". He replied

Lasky approached the communications station on the bridge "Jesperson, are our long-range communication relays operational?" he asked

"Fully Sir". The Lieutenant responded

"Generals, I understand you'll need to make a report to your Jedi Council if you are willing to authenticate our communication to your capital, we could conduct a joint report and hopefully depart for Coruscant now that we have finally revealed ourselves". Admiral Lasky suggested

Obi-Wan walked over "The council will be awaiting our status and that of Kamino, If you can put a communication through to the temple's communication station I can authenticate it and have it directed to the council chambers, they'll be waiting for us no doubt". Kenobi agreed.

"Roland put it through, gather round," He said as the Jedi and clones came to the holotank on the bridge with Roland initiating contact.

An audio response came through first "Unidentified Personnel contacting the Temple District of Coruscant without authentication or identification is prohibited, Identify yourselves" the voice demanded

"This is General Obi-Wan Kenobi, I need this transmission directed to the council immediately, transmitting clearance codes now". He said as Roland brought up a keypad in galaxy basic for him to enter them.

"Alright, codes are clear General, putting you through now," He said before his voice cut out and seconds later a large hologram appeared on the holotanks surface of the Jedi council.

"Master Kenobi, we were starting to get concerned when we lost contact," One of the Jedi said before looking at the other individuals "Where exactly are you?" He asked

Anakin and Shaak Ti were both visible as was Lasky, Roland and Ajex "Master Windu, We'll have to explain from the beginning" Shaak Ti said, "Our intelligence on the invasion force was inaccurate and the fleet that arrived was more than double what we were prepared for, they had assembled assault craft under the surface undetected and started deploying troops, the surprise attack overwhelmed our front line". Shaak Ti started with Skywalker continuing.

"The situation was the same in space, our fighters were outnumbered 3 to 1 and the fire from Separatist capital ships had taken out two of our Venators before the ground assault had even begun, it was hopeless...until reinforcements arrived". Skywalker led.

"Reinforcements?" He asked leery glancing a look at the strangers

"Admiral Kenobi said looking at Lasky.

"Master Jedi" Lasky greeted "I am Rear Admiral Thomas J Lasky, commander of all UNSC forces in this galaxy, I'll try to explain as much as I can in the time we have, Nearly four months ago one of our deep space detection probes had detected life signs and energy signatures in an uncharted part of your galaxy what we know as the Andromeda. This was an instant full alert scenario and being the closest fleet in the area I immediately investigated and found the remains of both republic and Separatist ships, reconnaissance and retrieval teams recovered a single survivor, a clone identifying themselves as Lieutenant Banks". Lasky started to explain as Roland displayed small clips of footage they had captured.

"After recovery, the Lieutenant informed us of the War between the Confederacy and Republic, we sent out ships to retrieve parts of the ship and droids floating in the debris for analysis and we started researching into a civilization we never knew existed, I was in the middle of making my first report back to our command when I was alerted to a small fleet of ships entering the system, some matching those in the wreckage. They immediately demanded we leave the system threatening us with destruction, I warned them that any attack would be an act of war against the UEG but they didn't take it and fired on us".

Again Roland brought up footage of the attack as Ajex continued on with the explanation. "We were already in battle condition when we arrived in the system, not knowing what we would find, so they probably didn't expect us to be able to destroy their fleet so quickly. Once Admiral Lasky reported the unprovoked attack our government declared war against the then identified Separatist Alliance, we had little to no intel on this enemy or galaxy so for the last four months we have been watching and learning everything we could about both the Separatists and the Republic as we assumed this exact scenario couldn't be held off for long". Ajex finished.

The Jedi all looked to each other after hearing the brief explanation "Choose to reveal yourselves to us now, why did you?" A small Jedi with a green pigment asked.

Roland explained this one "Two reasons mostly, Firstly the Separatists were starting to notice us more and more recently after several attacks by us and the second, we also intercepted the transmission of the individual now confirmed as General Grievous regarding his invasion plans of Kamino, reports and statistics showed that even though the Republic knew about the attack and sent forces to protect it they still had a sixty percent chance of losing the planet, Our own intelligence along with clone Lieutenant Banks informed us of how vital the planet and facilities on the surface are to the Republic and that if it fell the war would almost certainly be won by the Confederacy". The AI explained

"And Thirdly, the Separatist Alliance has breached the Mantle of Responsibility Act," Lasky said

"Care to elaborate," Windu asked

"I'll explain more if we can come to Coruscant but up until the last decade, Humanity, in our galaxy at least, was on the verge of extinction from an enemy much more powerful then us at the time and after we narrowly avoided destruction and built our way back up to a military and exploration capable people we put precautions in place to avoid such a devastating series of events from happening but as we grew past any level of power we had before our reasoning for expansion and military growth changed from one of self-protection and advancement to that of others, the Mantle of Responsibility act declares that bodies of power that abuse, slave or cause mass suffering amongst the galaxies populace are justified in declaring war on it has become a way of life to our people in the last decade".

"If you truly are at war with the Separatists and aided in the defence of Kamino you have our thanks, On behalf of the Republic I cordially invite you to the Senate on Coruscant the capital of the Galactic Republic to propose an Alliance to join forces and put our efforts together at defeating the Separatists". Mace Windu offered.

Lasky smiles "I accept your offer to travel to Coruscant and discuss this matter in the Senate and to represent the citizens of the United Earth Government"

Windu then looked to the Jedi "Kenobi, you and Skywalker go with them, you're needed back on coruscant as it is, Admiral Lasky I hope you don't mind a few passengers" He said

"Not at all Master Jedi, I am sure it will give us time to learn more about each other, I'll arrange for Master Shaak Ti to return to the surface and we can depart for Coruscant right away, I'm easter to see for myself," He said

With that, the holotank communication shut down. "Master Shaak Ti if you wouldn't mind following Staff Sgt Mark Collins He'll escort you back to the Hanger and you can return to Kamino," Lasky Said to Shaak Ti who nodded in thanks "I bid you well Admiral" and then left following the soldier.

"Captain, I'll take a small detachment of guardian and head to Coruscant I need you to take the rest back to Sierra base on Lucazec and oversee the final construction efforts on Eden base," Lasky told Ajex

"Yes, Sir Got to say though I was looking forward to seeing Coruscant," He said as he left the bridge for the hangers.

"I'll send you a postcard," Lasky joked as he left the room. Once the Pelican returning Jedi General Shaak Ti to Kamino and Ajex to the Preston J Cole had returned the crew made ready to depart the system.

"Coordinates for Kamino set Sir," Lieutenant James informed the Admiral

"Good, relay the orders to these ships, take us out of the system, we'll link up with the fleet and then jump to slipspace" Lasky ordered giving the officer a list of the ships leaving the system with them.

"General Kenobi, before we leave are there any reinforcements on their way to Kamino, I can always leave some behind temporarily until a new fleet can arrive". Lasky offered.

"A very generous offer Admiral but I don't think the Separatists will be bothering Kamino again, not for a long time anyway" Kenobi replied.

Captain Rex who up until now had remained silent, as well as Cody, stepped forward towards Admiral Lasky, "Admiral we may not know you all very well yet but on behalf of every single clone on Kamino I offer my thanks and gratitude for saving us, I can only begin to think how many lives you saved" He finished with saluting him.

Lasky returned the salute "Don't mention it, Captain, you and your men are fighting a noble cause and we are glad to be fighting with you".

Quickly the ship made its way into space where the UNSC fleet had formed up in line with the Republics, As the orders were sent out the two new groups split off with Captain Ajex taking command over the carriers and 5 of the Hyperion destroyers. The remaining 5 Hyperion destroyers, Ajax Frigates and the Titan dreadnought Keys followed the Infinity as it accelerated a short distance from the planet before opening up a large slipspace rift followed by the rest of the ships. Once they were through the portal it collapsed behind them leaving the rest of the fleet in the hands of Captain Ajex who set to return to the base on Lucazec and oversee the final construction of the new military and science installation, Eden Base.

Well how was that, I couldn't wait until the 30th so I pulled some all-nighters and as an added bonus I have gone through every single chapter to check and change any errors or continuity problems that I may have missed from the very beginning. Think of it as a mini remastered series. I have changed some things a lot more drastically than others but I did hide a few easter eggs in the first and second re-write. Let me know in the reviews if you spot them.

Here are the old comments from the original chapter two because….I Don't know.

Shanarcy - Thanks and they will be doing a bit more to "help" the Republic soon.

Someguy420 - It's fine without comments on grammar errors they would continue, I'll try to work on that.

Mend1cant Bias - I am aware that Star Wars blaster weaponry uses plasma but I meant they didn't use it in the same way since plasma weapons in Halo are contained within a magnetic field and the ones from Star Wars use Tibanna gas to ionize.

Braulio Cano - Thanks

Guest: Couldn't have said it better myself

Shadowninja10 - Thanks I'll keep writing them to hope you enjoy