OOOOOOO I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Hehehe, this is an idea I got just talking with my...uh...loliconish friends. Anyway, This is the REVISED version of it, because the original SUCKED. I hope you like it! Oh, and excuse my horrible paragraph spacing. I didn't space the originals because I suck at it, and now im doing it for Status:

Im working on Chapter 26 (Yes, thats right! 26! I've done 25 chapters so far. Im so mean P) but i got bored and started working on some later chapters too. I think that those chapters will be 28&29, but im not sure. Oh, and the size of the chapters around ch25 and ch (possibly) 28&29 practically EXPLODES. I've also noticed that I get better at writing too. Keep waiting

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Sorry, I'm lazy right now and dont want to check the last chapter to see which responses i last checked. I just want to get this out to you all!

Chapter 5 Revised

Asuna sighed.She wanted to go see a movie with Konoka, Setsuna, and Nodoka, but she didn't have enough money. They were going to see the movie that was "being hailed as the greatest movie ever made!" and didn't want to miss out.

Asuna sat down on the floor in the dorm room, and thought. She wouldn't borrow any money from Konoka, and she didnt get her next paycheck for awhile.

"If only I were a kid again. I have enough for a child admission..." Asuna said wishfully.

Asuna laughed at the thought of herself dressed up like a 10 year old. She would look ridiculous, and if it tricked anyone, then they must have brain damage. "Wait a minute!" Asuna thought. "Negi's got those age pills!"

Asuna moved like lightning. It only took her a few minutes of searching, but she found the pills. She remembered how it had made Negi into a 15 year old, and the pretend date. She blushed at the memory.

"Back to business," Asuna asserted.

She pick up some of the ones that made you younger. Making sure that she could reach the eldening ones incase something went wrong, she took a pill. With a small puff of smoke, she noticed that the room seemed bigger. Asuna looked in the mirror.

"It worked!" she celebrated. As she was doing her victory dance, Konoka walked in.

"Asuna-san, do you have enough for the..."

Konoka noticed the "child".

"Who are you, little girl? Are you lost?" Konoka asked.

"It's me, Konoka! It's Asuna!"

"What? But Asuna is 15. Your much to small to be her...unless..." she rolled her eyes. "The age pills?"

"Yep! Now i have enough money to see the movie! With you and the others bringing me, I can get in to see it even if i'm '10'" She got "that" look in her eyes.

"Well, if it'll get you in, I guess it'll work," Konoka said cheerfully. "I'll go tell the others so that they know its you."

Asuna watched as Konoka left the room. Asuna remembered that she had work tommorow, so she went to set her clock. After finding a stool to stand on ("Was I really that short?" Asuna wondered) she looked at where she usually put her clock, only to find that it wasn't there. "Weird," Asuna thought. "I'll look for it tommorow. After all, I guess I could miss one day of work".

20 minutes later, Asuna, Konoka, Setsuna and Nodoka were headed for the theatre.

"Um, is that really Asuna-san? She seems so carefree... Its so different from how she normaly is." Nodoka wondered.

"Thats because deep inside, we all have an 'inner child' that wants to get out. However, we often supress it, because of our age. Asuna-san right now is 10, or at least looks like it, so she can get away with being a kid for now. It's very fun releasing your 'inner child', and I can see why Asuna-san is acting the way she is right now. This could be her last chance to be a kid." Setsuna sad.

"What are you two yakking about?"

Asuna had managed to sneak up on them.

"A-Asuna-san! we were just talking about..." Setsuna's mind drew a blank.

"About classes! Yes, about classes. Break is going to end soon so..." Nodoka was surprised that she came up with an excuse so easily.

"Oh, ok." Asuna said, satisfied.

Or so Setsuna and Nodoka thought. The truth was, Asuna was suspicious of the two.

"Were they talking about me? All I'm doing is having some well deserved fun." Asuna thought. After buying the tickets, the group went to buy snacks and popcorn.

"Ah! Set-chan! Let's get some candy!"

"OK..."

They sat down to watch. The movie was great. Action, romance, a bit of horror, somehow this movie blended them together perfectly! Incredible! Asuna got bored after the movie, though, and turned to the group.

"Let's head back now. It was fun for awhile, but now i'm getting bored being ten."

Murmurs of agreement from the other 3 decided their next stop. Head back to the dorms to get some pills to change Asuna back. Telling jokes along the way, and talking about the movie made time fly by. They were infront of the dorm building when they ran into Negi.

"Hey Konoka-san, Setsuna-san, Nodoka-san!" Negi yelled.

"Hi, Negi-kun!" Konoka said.

"Hello, Negi-sensei" Setsuna answered.

Nodoka just blushed and looked away slightly.

"Who's that little girl with you? She seems familiar. Is she a cousin or something?" Negi asked.

Asuna looked annoyed. "It's me, you idiot."

"W-What?" Negi backed away suddenly, obviously caught off gaurd. "Asuna-san? ...Chibi!"

Negi started poking her and messing with her hair. He was like a child with a new toy. Asuna was getting annoyed, and a bit embarrased, and it showed in her face. However, Negi was having too much fun too notice, and didn't expect it when Asuna shoved him.

"Ow," he whined, and pushed her back.

"I'm gonna kill you!" Asuna shouted, and started chasing Negi. Konoka, Setsuna, and Nodoka were watching this.

"Aw, its so cute! It's like they're best friends!" Konoka said, obviously entertained.

"Agreed" Setsuna said, smiling.

"Um... I'm going to my room. I have things i need done for the library," Nodoka said. "Please excuse me."

"Don't work too hard, Honya-chan! We're on break!" Konoka called.

"I won't!" Nodoka reasured Konoka.

"Ow!" Asuna had just managed to hit Negi on the head.

"Even when i'm the same size as you, I still beat you!" Asuna bragged.

"That hurt... Fine, you won't be getting any age pills. You'll just have to wait until it wears off!" Negi shot back. "What? grrrrr..." Asuna growled. For the rest of the day, Asuna and Negi played games with konoka, although Konoka acted more like a referee.

"Tag! hahahahah you'll never catch me!" Asuna teased, running from Negi. "

Come back here!" Negi called.

They played Tag, Hide-and-go-Seek, and other games.

"Think fast, Negi-kun!" Asuna warned. She launched the dodgeball at incredible speed toward Negi.

"W-wha- OW".

He bounced off a wall, ran into Asuna, and hit the ground, bringing Asuna underneath him. When he didn't get up, Asuna realized he was unconscious. Asuna looked at him. "He's so cute... and he said I was too" Asuna thought, and blushed.

Konoka came around the corner. "Where are you, Asuna-chan? Negi-kun?" Konoka called. She spotted Negi on top of Asuna, and stared. "What are you two doing?" Konoka asked, teasingly.

"This brat got knocked out by a ball and landed on top of me! I was just about to get up!" Asuna explained quickly.

"Maybe I should leave you two alone?" Konoka joked.

"WHAT? KONOKA WHEN I GET UP YOUR DEAD!" Asuna exploded.

"Ow...what happenned?" Negi got up. Then, immediatly, he fell back down. "I feel like i got hit by a train..." He moaned.

"About time, Negi-bozu." Asuna said, annoyed.

"What happened, Asuna-chan?" He asked.

"You got hit by the dodgeball and landed on top of me in a...strange way" Asuna said.

"What do you..." Negi collapsed.

"That must have been some throw, eh Asuna?" Konoka said, smiling.

"Never mind that, can we please just go back now?" Asuna pleaded.

At the end of the day, they headed back. Exausted, they climbed into bed. The pill had just worn off, and Asuna had returned to normal.

"Today was fun. Good night Negi-kun. 'Night Konoka-san!" Asuna said.

"Ya, it was. Night everyone" Negi agreed.

"Good night," Konoka said.

She thought about today. Asuna and Negi acted like best friends. Or maybe more? When Negi had fallen asleep, Konoka bumped Asuna's bed.

"Asuna-san!" Konoka whispered.

"What?" Asuna yawned.

"About today, what was with you and Negi-kun? You too looked so close!" Konoka teased.

"W-What? I'm not close to that brat! I'm more interested in whats happening between you and Setsuna-san!" Asuna said, caught off guard. Konoka yawned.

"Why don't we just go to sleep? I'm tired, and I know you are too." Konoka suggested looking for a way out. She was avoiding the question. After all, even she didn't know what she thought. Just what was happening between her and Set-chan?

"OK, but dont think ill forget about this!" Asuna warned. For awhile, Asuna thought of herself and Negi. She blushed and laughed as she remembered things from before, like the bathing area incident and the library. Lost reminicing, her memories became part of her dreams, and she drifted off with a smiling soul

You know what? Im starting to think you people are insane. How could this possibly be good? I swear, this looked a lot better half a year ago when I wrote it...hehe

(my grammar is a whole lot better now too)