Here's chapter nine. And I know I messed up on two parts. So yeah, my original had every thing perfect, but my stupid computer deleted some of the things I changed.


"Hey Rai, Kimiko." Chloe said happily.

Chloe speed so fast down the stairs it was it was like she flew instead of running. As soon as the three of them were alone she was going to question the heck out of Rai.

"Hey Chloe." Raimundo and Kimiko said in unison.

They both had a really nice even tan covering them from head to toe. Chloe noticed that Raimundo had some lipstick smudges all over him; she could tell that he was trying to hide them by rubbing them away. Surprisingly enough the lipstick was the same shade as Kimiko's lipstick. Chloe had to know what they were doing.

"So why are you covered in lipstick smudges?" she questioned, as if she was Sherlock Holmes.

"Who said I was?" nervously said Raimundo as he and Kimiko ran up to his room.

"There up to something, I just know it. People might think I'm crazy but I'm not….. Or at least I hope not." Chloe said to herself.

"Chloe stop talking to yourself, it's getting really creepy." Shouted Raimundo from the top of the stairs.

Kimiko was racing Raimundo up the stairs. She has always loved teasing him ever since they've been boy friend-girlfriend. Since she didn't want to do 'it' this was her way of torturing rai. She could still hear the words that her mother said before her and rai left for Brazil, 'Kimiko remember don't have sex with him. Wait until you are married.'

"Catch me if you can!" Kimiko said giggling.

"Girl you're asking for it." HE shouted back.

"Oh like the big bad Raimundo can get me." She said mockingly.

He caught up to her on the stairs. Grabbed her from behind then scooped her up bridal style.

"Raimundo put me down." She giggled with every step he took.

"Make me." Raimundo said.

Me kicked open the door and laid her gently on the bed. He quickly raced over to the door and locked it shut. Then went back to Kimiko.

"You should know not to tease me." He said in a romantic voice.

He was lying on top of Kimiko, pinning her to the bed. He started to take off the shirt she was wearing over her bikini. In return she started to take off his shirt. Now they started to kiss with so much passion, neither one wanted to give up. Raimundo was ready to untie her bikini top when Kimiko stopped kissing him, and she pushed herself away from him.

"Rai….Rai….Raimundo stop! Stop it now!" She said as Raimundo was trying to keep the feeling alive.

"Kimiko why? Didn't you like it?" Raimundo said waiting for an answer to come.

"I loved it, but Rai were not ready I mean were like what 17 almost 18. Rai were too young to do this." Kimiko said with concern.

'Well actually I'm going to be 18 in a few days but I get were your coming from. And I guess your right." He agreed.

"That and my parents will hunt me down and kill me. I hate it when my mother's words haunt me." Kimiko said while wrapping her arms around him.

"You know when we get married then we'll have a reason for having sex. Plus it might be more fun." Raimundo agreed again while grabbing some cloths.

"Rai I don't like it when you say 'sex' out loud. I mean I don't want your parents or brothers and sisters to hear that word." She yelled at him.


Back to Chloe…..

"Damn, I can't hear what they are saying." She snapped.

Chloe was sitting out side of Raimundo's bedroom with a glass by her ear. Trying so desperately to hear what they were saying.

"Umm, Chloe what are you doing?" Carlos was saying as he looked at his twin in a weird way.

"I'm trying to hear what Raimundo and Kimiko are saying. Now leave me alone." She was getting annoyed.

"Chloe that's and invasion of privacy, isn't it? And isn't that against the law?" Carlos sat down next to Chloe.

"Number one, it's not like I'm watching them. Number two, how in the hell should I know. Now be quiet." She replied

"Wait Chloe stop every thing." Carlos was stuck by an idea.

"Were not moving, you retard "She said to carols.

"I know but I have and idea. Don't we still have those walkie-talkies in Rai's room?" He questioned.

"Yeah I think so. And they should be still on Maria and I were playing with them." She said now getting his plan.

"Then we could spy on them with out actually being by their room and risk being exposed." He had finished his plan. "Oh and I'M NOT A RETARD!" He shouted.

The twins raced down the hall and up a flight of stairs to her bedroom. She searched her desk for the other walkie-talkie.

"Found it, now it should be set on the setting that one in Rai's room is on." She informed Carlos.

They turned it on and listened. They could hear their voices so much better. Here's what they said:

"You should know not to tease me." He said in a romantic voice.

"Rai….Rai….Raimundo stop! Stop it now!" She said as Raimundo was trying to keep the feeling alive.

"Kimiko why? Didn't you like it?" Raimundo said waiting for an answer to come.

"I loved it, but Rai were not ready I mean were like what 17 almost 18. Rai were too young to do this." Kimiko said with concern.

'Well actually I'm going to be 18 in a few days but I get were your coming from. And I guess your right." He agreed.

"That and my parents will hunt me down and kill me. I hate it when my mother's words haunt me." Kimiko said while wrapping her arms around him.

"You know when we get married then we'll have a reason for having sex. Plus it might be more fun." Raimundo agreed again while grabbing some cloths.

"Rai I don't like it when you say 'sex' out loud. I mean I don't want your parents or brothers and sisters to hear that word." She yelled at him.

"So now what do you want to do?" rai said walking over to his window.

"Hmm, I'm not sure what do you want to do?" Kimiko said putting her arm over his neck.

"Do you want to go see more of Rio?" He said.

"Sure let me just grab my purse." She said excitedly

"Hold on Chloe is this the one that you had a camera on?" Carlos questioned.

"Yeah that's why we can see what they are doing to. Man, are all boys dumb or just you?" Chloe said then slapping her hand on her forehead.

"No, I just don't like thinking. It hurts my head." He said rubbing his head.

"Gee I wonder why." She said "It must be so hard to think with those few brain cells you have."


A/n so Rai and Kim almost had sex, note it was ALMOST. Then Maria is older than Chloe by a year, so that makes her baby sister Sophie. Then you might have guessed a little bit more of the plot. I'm also thinking of having a sequel when this story is done. And that should be this summer. Also now updates on May30-June 3. Because I'll be in New York and Washington D.C. Remember to R&R