I do not own Naruto.
This is my first Naruto fanfic. I am a fan of Naruto, but I do not think it's the best, although I still find it pretty enjoyable. Anyway, I hope this gets some good reviews.
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Someone was banging on Naruto's door. She was banging real loudly for that matter.
Who could be thumping on the door so early in the morning, thought a fifteen-year old Naruto. Naruto was tired. He couldn't sleep with the thumping.
"NARUTO!" screamed an outside voice.
It sounded oddly like Sakura. Naruto realized it. Checking his time, Naruto knew he was late. Immediately getting dressed, Naruto dashed outside, his hair going in all directions and his clothes messily donned on him.
"Damn it Naruto!" said Sakura. "We're late for our mission!"
The pair dashed to the Hokage's office, where Tsunade was waiting.
"You're late," said Tsunade softly, yet strictly.
"Soorry…" yawned Naruto. "Don't blame Sakura, it was all my fault."
"I don't care whose fault it is," said Tsunade. "Anyway, I will repeat the mission details. An important person in Kiri has been abducted. The details on the person were not specified except that he had five bodyguards. Three were jounin and two were elite chuunin. The bodyguards managed to track the kidnappers down, but all but one was killed. He is our client. The kidnappers probably have escaped that place. This is an A-ranked mission. You can't fail this one. Suna is already .01 ahead of us. We used to be the top village."
"It's only .01 though," said Naruto.
"True, but people go to the one that has a better succession rate. Suna is our ally, but we still need funds. Plus, Kiri has supplied us with a great deal of water. If you fail this, Naruto, you'll become an academy student again, and Sakura, you'll go back to Naruto's current rank."
"WHAT?" screamed Naruto and Sakura, apparently in disbelief. Naruto was about to argue, but Tsunade stopped him.
"Your client is waiting," stated Tsunade.
The pair walked out of Tsunade's office.
"Oh hi, Kakashi-sensei," muttered Naruto, "You here to see Tsunade old hag-chan?"
Kakashi just smiled at the two and walked into Tsunade's office. Kakashi had heard everything.
"Hokage-sama, don't you think you're being a bit too harsh on them?" asked Kakashi.
"Kakashi, let's just say I developed a new way to make ninja work harder on their missions," smiled Tsunade.
Naruto and Sakura met up with their client, and set off to Kiri.
Meanwhile, in the Tsuchikage's office in Iwa, the Tsuchikage was planning something with some of the Kyoushu clan. The Kyoushu clan members were elite ninja assassins, the best of the best in Iwa. No other clans of Iwa could match them.
"That's right, so that way, Konoha and Suna will have a war," explained the Tsuchikage, "so then that way, they will weaken each other, and them we will defeat both Konoha and Suna. Their territory will be ours! Now then, dismissed!"
"Kyoukan-sama," said Kyoushu Kira, a strong, honorable member of the clan.
"Yes, Kira?" asked Kyoukan, the leader of the clan.
"How long will it take to get to Konoha?" asked Kira.
"Exactly forty-eight," said Kyoukan, "We begin assassinations at midnight."
Two days passed. Naruto and Sakura were at the climax of their mission. The Kyoushu clan had arrived.
"Looks like we miscalculated," said Hyouhakusha, the member with the most jutsus. "We arrived too early.
"I can't wait any longer!" shouted Hakaisha, a wild, maniac always ready to kill.
Kyoukan covered Hakaisha's mouth and walked a few steps back. We whispered something in Hakaisha's ears.
"What'd you say leader-sama?" asked Kira.
"Nothing really," said Kyoukan.
Night fell. The Kyoushu clan members had already decided on a place to stay during their time in Konoha. It was a dark cave. A bear was originally in it, but it had become the food of the Kyoushu clan members.
"Man, that was delicious!" shouted Hakaisha.
"Quiet," shushed Kyoukan.
"Time is almost up," said Hyouhakusha. "It's approximately midnight."
"Kira, go check if there's anyone still on the streets of Konoha," instructed Kyoukan.
Kira came back with an answer of a few people.
"I suppose they're all dead," smirked Hakaisha.
"Yep, I killed them all."
"Perfect, then we strike now," said Kyoukan. "Remember, let's do this slowly. Each of you, only kill five or six people." Kyoukan raised his arm to signal that they were released. The three other ninja jumped away, towards Konoha.
Hakaisha managed to get pretty impatient and killed a dozen people. Kira had already killed four, so he killed two more. Hyouhakusha had a good fight with a chuunin, but managed to kill him, along with four other people. Kyoukan himself killed six people. They killed twenty-nine people in all.
"Report how many you killed," said Kyoukan. "Six."
"Six."
"Five."
"Twleve."
"Oi, Hakaisha, didn't Kyoukan-sama say that we were only suppose to kill five to six?" scolded Kira.
"Yeah, but I got pretty impatient and decided to kill two times more," laughed Hakaisha.
"It doesn't matter," said Kyoukan, "As long as the number of people killed isn't noticeably different."
"Konoha ninja are pretty tough though," said Hyouhakusha.
"Nah, you're just weak," Hakaisha mocked.
"Anyway, Kira take this," instructed Kyoukan, handing Kira something. Kyoukan had the exact same thing in his hand.
The two went in different directions. Kyoukan and Kira both dropped the objects near dead bodies. The objects were glimmering brightly under the moonlight. They were forehead protectors, and the symbol on them, was the symbol of Suna.
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Yes, well this chapter was pretty short, but I promise to make the other chapters somewhat longer. Also, if it's okay, can you critique the story and also put like a rating for the story so far?
