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Chapter 29: Saving Rory

'No' Rory thought as she tried to struggle, 'I don't want to die' she thought.

"I'm sorry Rory but I've been found out so you have to die" Max said picking up the knife.

Rory started of sob, 'I really am going to die' she thought as she struggled to hold on.

Max took the knife and cut Rory's wrists.

Blood started to pour from Rory's wrists as Max went to get some of his stuff.

Luke and Lorelai had entered the building and were running around looking for Max's room.

The first and second floor provided nothing, only a couple of people didn't answer but they were most likely out.

Once they reached the third floor Lorelai noticed something, "Luke that door over there is open" Lorelai whispered.

"Lets check it out" Luke said as they slowly walked over.

Luke went into the room and was sickened by what he saw.

Luke saw Rory naked, bruised, and bleeding it took all his power to keep from throwing up.

"Is she in there?" Lorelai asked not looking inside.

"Yeah" Luke said quietly, after he said that Lorelai came in.

'Oh God!' Lorelai screamed in her mind.

Lorelai went right over to Rory.

"Rory can you hear mommy?" Lorelai asked.

Rory slightly nodded.

"She's still alive, what should we do?" Lorelai asked.

"I'll try and stop the bleeding you call an ambulance" Luke said as he took his flannel shirt off to cover Rory up.

Luke ripped some of his shirt up to try and stop the bleeding, just then Max came out of his room.

Everyone in the room froze when this happened.

'He needs to die' Luke thought and before he knew it he had tackled Max to the ground.

Lorelai was still on the phone telling the police to get there and bring an ambulance.

Luke and Max were on the floor fighting each other, Luke had gotten in about three punches but Max was still fighting strong.

"You bastard" Luke said getting a punch in.

"I was only doing my duties as a step-father" Max said getting up.

"Those aren't your duties your duties are to love and care for both of them" Luke said getting up.

'When is the ambulance going to get here' Lorelai thought knowing that Rory wasn't going to last much longer.

Max and Luke had gone back to fighting and both were getting bruised and bloody.

'He must die' Luke thought while throwing punches at Max.

'I need to kill him' Max thought as he fell to the ground.

Max reached up to the table and grabbed a knife.

This surprised Luke he hadn't expected that move and he began moving with more caution.

Lorelai was crying now, 'Please don't let anything happen to Luke' she prayed trying to stay low.

Luke looked around quickly and found nothing he could use to fight with so he picked up a pillow for some protection.

"You're going to die" Max said lunging at Luke.

Luke backed up and the knife got stuck in the pillow.

Luke took advantage of this and kicked Max in the leg.

Max then dropped the knife and went back to fighting Luke by hand.

'Where are the police?' Luke asked himself.

Then Max got very lucky in that second when Luke was distracted Max hit Luke over the head and knocked him out.

"Luke!" Lorelai screamed.

"Know Lorelai you're going to come with me and we're going to hide" Max said as he walked over to Lorelai.

Lorelai didn't know what overcame her but she went to the floor and grabbed the knife.

"Don't come any closer" Lorelai said holding up the knife.

'She's bluffing' Max thought as he edged closer to her.

"I'll do it" Lorelai said nervously.

Max kept on coming towards her.

Lorelai took a quick look over at Rory and Luke, Luke was definitely alive, but Rory was barely breathing.

'I have to stop him' Lorelai thought and she lunged towards him.

That took Max by surprise and the next thing he knew he felt cold steel inside of him.

'She actually did if' Max thought as things started to go black for him.

Lorelai dropped the knife on the ground and started to cry.

'I actually killed him' Lorelai thought as she cried.

Just then Lorelai thought about Rory and went to check on her.

'Yes, she's still alive' Lorelai thought, just then Luke woke up.

"What happened?" Luke asked looking around and seeing Max's dead body.

"You killed him?" Luke asked as he heard sirens outside the building.

"Yeah" Lorelai said crying.

Just then the police and paramedics came into the apartment.

The officer took one look around, "Put your hands up" he said.

Luke and Lorelai complied and put there hands up.

"What happened here?" another officer asked.

Luke and Lorelai explained the entire situation to him.

"Alright don't arrest them" he said.

"Are you sure?" his partner asked.

"Yeah this is the guy we've been looking for and she's that girls' mother" he said pointing to Rory who was being taken out of the room.

"Can I go with her?" Lorelai asked.

"Go ahead, we'll talk to you more later but we need his statement" the officer said.

"I'll meet you at the hospital and don't forget to call your parents" Luke said.

"I'll see you later" Lorelai said as she left the room.

"Is she going to be alright?" Lorelai asked the paramedic.

"We won't know until we get to the hospital" the paramedic answered.

'Please be alright' Lorelai prayed as they made their way to the hospital.

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