in this story i know Jack has been out of character, but its all part of the story, it's all about Jack's father side in this story. thank you all for reviewing and I hope to see more (hehehe)

Chapter 13

Jacks POV

'What the bloody hell does she think she's playing at?' I thought as I started bashing away at a rather ragged looking member of Barbossa's crew.

"You're going to die Sparrow!" shouted the pirate

"And are you going to kill me…" I asked, I thrust my sword into his chest and continued "oops too late!" I went back to my thoughts as I looked for another member of Barbossa's crew to kill.

'she's going to get herself killed, she's never done anything like this before, apart from the time when we stopped in Tortuga, but that was different' I spotted two pirates cowering behind a pile of treasure. I went over to see who they were.

"I don't like this new eye" one of them said "it's even itchier than the last one, the one that Barbossa's blasted monkey took"

"But at least your not walking around with a hole for an eye" said the other one.

'I know who they are' I thought as I sat behind them. My foot slipped on a coin and made a noise. The two cowards turned and looked at me.

"Jack? Jack Sparrow?" asked Pintel.

"Captain Jack Sparrow" I corrected, why do people always get it wrong, Captain is not hard to bloody say!

"Uh…um…what…umm…" stammered Ragetti.

"Yeah" I replied to whatever he was trying to say, I didn't care really.

"What do say, you join my crew, forget about Barbossa and I'll let you live" I said

"I say ok!" said Ragetti instantly

"Ok" said Pintel and they both scurried away from me. I looked up to see what Lily was doing, she had just helped Bill and from the look of it she was doing ok.

Lily's POV


"You!" spat 'the guard'; I could tell he was furious with me for tricking him. I smiled to myself as I noticed his head was bleeding where he had hit the bar.

"I'll wipe that smile off your face for what you did to me!" he shouted, he tried stabbing me but I parried quickly.

"You bastard" I sneered

"You whore" he growled back at me. He had hit a soft spot within me. No one called me a whore and got away with it, oh he was going to die.

"Any last words?" I asked as we furiously fought, ducking and diving from each other's blows.

"Yeah! Say Goodbye Miss Sparrow, it was fun while it lasted!" he replied. I made the mistake of looking at Elizabeth who was stabbing furiously into another man's chest, I felt white-hot searing pain on my shoulder, luckily it wasn't my sword hand, but it angered me just the same.

I flew at the guard and punched him square in the mouth.

"Goodbye!" I yelled as I thrust my sword into his chest, I pushed it in further as I watched life drain from the scumbag.

I turned around when I felt an arm on my shoulder, I punched whoever it was with my spare hand but stood up quickly when I realised I'd punched Oliver!

"Oh my god!" I gasped as I ran towards him; he was clutching his face and saying every profanity I had ever heard.

"Lily!" he shouted

"I'm sorry! I'm so sorry! I thought it was someone from Barbossa's crew, I'm so sorry!" I replied hastily, I wrenched his hands away from his face and kissed where I had hit him.

"All better" I said and stabbed a dirty looking man behind Oliver, who was coming towards us with his sword drawn.

I noticed that Barbossa was sat on the cursed treasure chest; he was looking down on us all like it was a play.

"Bastard" I mumbled and went off to stab the guy who had Will lying on his back on the floor, trying to reach his sword.

"Thanks Lily" Will said, flashing me a grin as he started to fight with a man whom I recognised as the cook from Barbossa's crew.

I heard a blood curdling scream from behind me, worried for the safety of my friends I turned around. The first thing I saw were the wide eyes of Elizabeth as she dropped to floor, I noticed blood coming from her head and a pirate running away behind her. I threw my sword at his head and was thrilled when I hit him, he dropped to the floor dead and I ran to get my sword. I cleaned it on a piece of expensive looking cloth and then went to tend to Elizabeth, she was unconscious but it appeared that the pirate has only hit her round the head with the hilt of his sword.

"Come on Elizabeth" I whispered, I shook her shoulders gently but no movement came.

I dragged her back to the entrance of the cave and struggled to put Elizabeth into a spare rowboat. My shoulder tensed as an intense pain went through it. I rowed as much as I could to the Pearl and called for Ben, who had been left on the ship to guard it.

"Miss Lily?" he called back

"What are you doing?" he asked me, under the correct circumstances I would have found his expression comical, but I needed to get Elizabeth safe.

"Just help me up!" I shouted, we both hoisted the boat up the side of the ship and dragged Elizabeth into a spare cabin. I put her into the bed and bandaged up her head. I kissed her forehead.

"Be safe Elizabeth" I whispered.

"Lily, I'll watch over her and the Pearl, you should go and help the others" Ben said from the doorway. I gave Elizabeth a quick squeeze on her hand and walked back out on deck.