Thanks for the reviews. Also I've been thinking about switching it from romance/action/adventure to romance/drama (don't worry it's still a happy ending). Tell me what you guys think about that. One more thing, I decided to scrap that lee&tenten thing.
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Chapter Four: Is Winning Still Losing? Part 2
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Yamcha continued slowly trailing up Hinata's thigh. Suddenly he stopped after feeling a large surge of chakra. "Whose chakra is this?" He question in his mind as his eyes widened. "Kakashi...? No. The kid, with the fuzzy eyebrows...? No. The woman dressed in bandages? No..." Yamcha questioned and answered himself in his mind. "The kid...? Couldn't be... I killed him."
He turned to see Naruto still on the ground but there was red and black chakra swirling around him, the chakra swirled into a pillar. Everyone gazed and gawked at the sight. When the pillar of chakra calmed, Naruto was seen on all fours, his fingernails were now about sixteen millimeters long, there was a hole, from the stab wound, on the back and front of his orange jacket; his whiskers were more defined; his k-9s were fifteen millimeters long. The chakra focused on the color red and was surrounding the contours of his body, also forming a fox's tail.
Yamcha became angry at this site but calmed down shortly, "I guess I underestimated you kid!" He shouted with rage fueled joy.
'...,' Naruto didn't comment.
"I really thought that I killed you. Well I guess that means I get to...!"
He was cut off by Naruto disappearing and reappearing in front of him, about to strike with his right claw. Yamcha barely managed to dodge it and grab his sword with his right hand at the same time. He backed off, "Wow! That was fast!" he commented in his mind.
Naruto then stood up and stared at Hinata; her eyes widened in horror. She gazed into his eyes, which were no longer the peaceful blue eyes with the black pupil in the middle. They were the eyes the she saw in her dream. They had the same killer intent as in her dream but what really made her scared was that they were now no longer in her dream but in the real world.
"I see you got faster." Yamcha commented.
His comment was replied to by a long deep growl. When he didn't even get a proper thanks for his compliment, he became serious. Yamcha charged and attacked with a horizontal slice from left to right but Naruto dodged it by ducking. Naruto kicked him in the face, causing him to drop the sword and be hurled five feet into the air. Naruto twisted his body and did a spin kick into Yamcha's stomach, the kick sent him twenty meters away and rolling another two meters, before he sprang to his feet.
This really made him mad as he lost his cool. He charged at Naruto; he leapt into a jump kick, Naruto was kick in the stomach and sent flying into a tree before sliding down into a sitting position. Yamcha did a few hand seals 'Water Style: Snow Dragon', the dragon appeared once again and flew towards the seated Naruto. The sound of snow crashing and crunching echoed through the air.
"Naruto-kun...!" Hinata shouted. Everyone else just stared on in fear thinking that Naruto wasn't going to get up after that.
When the snow ceased its attack upon the tree, it revealed that no one was there. "What…? Where did he go?" His question was answered, and the answer was all around. Naruto used his mass shadow clone jutsu and there were now over a thousand Naruto clones.
"Where did the real Naruto-kun go?" Hinata questioned to herself.
"He's really fast, from what I know about Lee, he's equally as fast or... even faster?" Kurenai thought.
"Naruto, how did you get this fast?" Lee pondered
"Naruto is as fast as Lee? How is that possible?" Tenten thought.
Four did a baseball slid and each kicked him straight up "U... zu... ma... ki...," each shouted as they kicked him; he flew fifty feet straight up into the air and a fifth Naruto appeared in front of him and performed a leg drop on his head, "Naruto Rendan!" Naruto finished, as Yamcha was sent flying head-first to the ground. As he flew towards the ground, all the Naruto clones disappeared in puffs of smoke, while the real Naruto was waiting on the ground for Yamcha to come into range, so that he could attack.
When Yamcha reached about five feet off the ground Naruto unleashed a blue ball of chakra into his stomach, "Resengan...!" Naruto held it there and the rotation of the chakra made Yamcha begin to rotate. Then he was sent rotating through five trees causing them to fall. Yamcha bounced off of the ground three times, rolling all the time before stopping by a frozen lake. Naruto then ran after him.
Yamcha struggled to his feet only to meet a short flurry of punches, before receiving a kick to the chin; he flew up into the air, but didn't go very far when Naruto grabbed his leg and pulled him down, slamming him into the ground. "H..., how did you get so strong?" Yamcha questioned, frightened.
Naruto took a look at his left hand, which made Yamcha confused. Naruto glared at him and then lifted him up. Naruto threw him up then caught him with a three sixty degree spin kick, which sent him flying through the bushes back to where everyone was, landing on his back. He looked straight up to see Naruto hovering high in the sky, before falling down like a boulder. Before Yamcha knew it he was being driven into the ground causing him to cough up blood. He made a bigger crater then what Naruto made.
Naruto jumped to the side when the crater wasn't getting any bigger. Then his bondage jutsu failed and everyone was released but they were too weak to land on their feet so everyone feel on their stomachs except Kakashi who remained sitting down, but everyone was still watching the fight.
Naruto slowly approached Yamcha. When Naruto was hovering over him, "P-Pleease... spare me..." Yamcha pleaded, "...pleease."
"Do you know what all you did?" Naruto questioned deeply.
"Yes... yes..., a... and I'm sorry for them." Yamcha became happier thinking that Naruto would spare him.
"What you did... is unforgivable." Naruto said as he tensed and clenched his fists. "You attempted to kill me and my team... my friends, you attempted to destroy my home, but what was mostly unforgivable is that you..., you disrespected one of my close friends!" His voice became louder.
"Naruto-kun... considers me as... a close friend." Hinata whispered with a blush and a small smile on her face.
"So are you going to at least spare my life?" Yamcha asked weakly.
'...,' Naruto was quiet for a second. "...No." he replied coldly. Then he opened his right fist and began making a ball of chakra that was, this time red and black.
Yamcha's eyes widened at the sight "Noo... Ahhhhhh...!" he screamed as Naruto kneeled down on one knee and struck with his newly colored attack. When he was struck he was driven even further into the ground.
Everyone's eyes all popped out of their sockets as they gazed in awe at Naruto, who had single handedly destroyed one of the most feared swordsman shinobi. Naruto stood up before his appearance returned to normal; he looked at everyone and gave them individual looks.
His eyes became sad and happy at the same time. Then he fell to the ground. The last thing he heard was his name being called over and over again.
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