Twilight Eyes: Immortal Grand Prix

Disclaimer:

Ok…it's been A REALLY LONG TIME since I have written about the IGPX. I started off with my characters and the team of my own. Team YMS, or Team Youth Middle School (my schools name) . The main characters were John Mac, Jasmine Mac, and Charlotte.

In this story…. we talk about the lives and stories of Team Sterling. In this story, our main characters are John Mac and Ren Mac, John's wife. Starting with a win in the IG2 series…they have to compete against all of the IG1 teams to take the championship.

With Carbon Fibre Mechs all suited up in there black on silver paint, Team Sterling is ready to go.

Prologue:

Wind flew by the late fall afternoon on the track. In the IG1 series, fall was the biggest season in all of IGPX history. Many talented young drivers would test drive their mechs almost every other week.

On this average autumn day, a certain John Mac was gliding across the track with his carbon fibre silver and black mech. Known to be Team Sterling's captain, John Mac would just hop into his mech and just glide through the track.

John Mac was a 22-year-old that was formally known to be an IGPX pilot. After meeting the girl of his dreams at age 13, John was excited to have his future wife to be an IGPX Pilot with him.

At age 20, John and his wife Ren signed an agreement to race for Team Sterling, a rookie-starting team that had just been established 3 months before.

After winning the IG2 championship, John Mac and his wife set off on an adventure of a lifetime. They were finally accepted into the IG1.

Story:

Zoom!

"John! Where is my hair dryer!" Ren McPherson yelled to her husband. Ren Mac was a 22-year-old IGPX Pilot that lived with John Mac in his fancy mansion. John pretty much owned everything. From fancy cars to fancy boats, you name it, he had it.

"It should be next to the toothbrushes dear!" he yelled back. John Mac was sitting in the family room watching TV on his 94' screen. His wife, Ren, was upstairs blow-drying her hair. She had just gotten out of the shower.

"I still can't find it dear!" Ren yelled back.

John sighed. He said it was next to the toothbrushes! All well, he liked helping his wife around the house anyways…

John slowly emerged into the Master Bathroom, looking for his beloved. Ren was standing in the mirror looking at her hair and putting make-up on.

"Why do you need the hair dryer? Your hair looks fine right now. No sense in having the blow dryer…"

Ren looked oddly at John. John shrugged slightly.

" Well the opening ceremony is tonight, and I want to blow-dry my hair…"

"Ooook then…. the hair dryer is over next to my razor…"

Ren gave a warm kiss right on John's cheek. John blushed slightly, and then walked back downstairs to the family room.

Zoom!

Opening ceremony, 10:00 p.m.

The opening ceremony was packed. Every IG1 and IG2 Pilot was at the opening ceremony, not a single person was absent.

All of the pilots stood with champagne glasses nestled into the fingers, many drinking wine or some other alcoholic beverage.

John stood over next to the glass aquarium. He had German Ice Wine in his champagne glass. He didn't drink a lot of it though. He knew that he'd have to drive home tonight.

Ren was standing with a few of Team Cascada's pilots. Ren didn't drink any alcoholic beverages. She would on certain occasions… but not tonight. She just wanted to gossip with other female IGPX pilots.

Almost every team in the IG1 was brand new except for Team Cascada. Team Cascada won the championship last year, and this year they were determined to win the championship again.

There were 5 new teams in the IG1 this year. Of course there was Team Sterling. They were the ones to watch for this year. Then there was Team LMS, Team Vyro, Team Carbon, and Team Veilside. All were ready to compete in the IG1.

Later that night…

John's Mansion, 12:00am

John and his wife pretty much crashed on the master bed when they got home from the ceremony. Both of them were exhausted.

"Our first race begins in 3 days…and its up against Team Cascada, the leading champions from last year…" John exclaimed.

" Their lead pilot, Sarah Reimer… that girl has issues…" Ren replied.

"When I had raced for Team YMS, both YMS and Cascada were like sworn enemies…"

Ren raised her eyebrows, and then settled them back down.

"Just be prepared angel…Team Cascada is tough…" John added.

Well that's the end of the first chapter…. So what do y'all think? Just give me some pointers please, cuz this is not my greatest writing.