Heyo! Author here! Although I hope you can figure that out by the name of the chapter. I really wanted to share that I love it when reviews are left, as well as I love to read them for inspiration. So this update is going to me responding to reviews I found funny, or I could answer without spoilers. From now on I want to put this at the end of every chapter, after Deku's Stats. I Am also going to use this block to advertise my discord server at /Etzjm4d please join it for updates, to comment on my works, and to look at others works! I am also going to add a polls section for when I need to put them out. doesn't like them. In doing this I'm not going to reuse the same answers, nor am I going to answer questions that I already answered, either in the fic itself, or here.
Chapter 1 Reviews:
To Dylan-A-Friend and King-Of-Gods, Thank you for the encouragement, it means a lot for someone to just say it's good and keep on reading!
To JJafan, The original plan was more a martial artist but, I felt like going a more tabletop Monk feel. More like yes he will focus on hand to hand, for quite a bit. Once [Redacted] happens, he will need to branch out more. He has skills for now, but he will need more in the future.
To , I still call him Deku because I myself was a target of Bullying, till I stood up for myself and my friend. They moved on and targeted someone else. I feel like a quirk that at first is thought to "Quantify Strength of the user" would still be the weakest on the totem pole.
To WouldYouKidnapA, I love how you phrase your reviews like you're yelling at Deku. Me and my friend laughed when we first read that.
To aSleepyPenguin, Same Bro. Same.
Chapter 2:
To WouldYouKidnapA, I agree. He does talk too much.
Chapter 3:
To MIKE202303, Nice name, I look forward to seeing it more.
Chapter 4:
To , Yes Iida would call someone plain. If fact he calls him plain looking in the manga. Deku just doesn't stand out that much, which makes the first thing people think is "Plain."
To Bluebeetle32, Meditation is a temporary skill that gets dissolved into the new skills it creates at max level. I know I didn't clearly state that, but this is my first fic!
Chapter 9 (Seriously. No reviews till here.)
To drannakka, I see what you were thinking with the phrasing of "Communing with" his spirit animal, but that's just not how it works buddy. I felt like it would feel too much like Naruto and Karuma. The idea of meditation to talk with a take power from a beast inside you feels very Naruto. Although I like where your head is at!
To JJafan, Hey again, So I don't plan on a Harem, but just for you telling me not to "even think about it" pissed me off beyond belief. I agree with what you said to an extent. A Harem with Deku being in the middle would feel off with this form of Deku. A harem is completely acceptable with the right version of the character. Honestly, I want to make Deku a Harem Star in one of the other fics I write. Also if you have ever played a relationship game, most allow you to max out everyone there. In fact when you first wrote the review, I was very tempted to change everything I had in mind and making it a Harem. Also please in the future don't tell any author what will and won't ruin the story. Ruining it for one person could make it amazing for a million more.
To ProjectIceman, Against the Machine?
Chapter 10
To drannakka, I love the idea of spirit animal projection but I was too young to remember that series. I probably watched it a lot, but don't really remember it at all.
To ProjectIceman, Yes that was the point. I wanted to show off that Gamer's mind+a rage bar was fucking with him.
That's the end of the Review Train (Toot Toot!) Onto the Polls, then as a special gift I want to explain some of the parts of the series I won't go too far into detail in the actual writing.
First Poll, Who do you want to see Deku shipped with? I wanna limit it to female characters. Not because of bigotry, but because I don't like randomly changing a character's sexuality. I am willing to go for any of the following 1-A girls, 1-B girls, Mei or Camie. This is not the place for Toga.
Second Poll, What kind of fight scenes do you guys like? The one like his first Villain encounter, where each step was thought out enough for an image to be formed, or the Nomu fight, where it was left to you guys, other than the fact he was rampaging hard?
Third Poll, What do you guys think about the skills I've given him so far? Do you want more detail, maybe even something like a rarity? Do you have anything you would like to see? I still have to make up two new skills, an "Uncommon" and "rare" even though that really has no meaning to it without rating the others huh?
Fourth Poll, Do you guys want more characters interacting? Like dialogue or actions as well?
This last on isn't a poll, but a statement. I really hate Mineta. He has no morals, even after his "character arc" in which he realized that "Heroes aren't cool because they are heroes, they're cool because they are cool!" In which he changed nothing about his perverted actions. He exists for solely comic relief, but only from a pervert and slapstick point.
Now! On to the races! This is going to be me explaining stuff about his quirk that won't be directly said in cannon.
Relationship Sim: This was something I had going from the start to help me write, and I thought it would be funny if his first crush triggered it. The percents are just total bullshit, except they also determine how likely I would have that person help you if you really needed it. Of course there are exceptions like his mom and teachers. As shown with Todoroki, the sim percent can skyrocket either way in a moment of heat, and calm down with time. That will come in later. It was just something I thought of on the spot of it, and thought I could use it later.
Gamers Mind and Gamers Body: These are two things that I didn't write out for this fic, but are still passive parts of his quirk. I mentioned them in the first chapter, by talking about their effects. I also showcased it with Deku's near death experience. Also I would like to apologize, I believe that at one point I had Deku's heart beating, then later had Bakugo say his heart didn't beat. I would like to clarify, I meant that when his Hp was low, it didn't beat.
Anyway, thanks for reading. The new chapter hasn't been started yet, but I hope that I can get some feedback before I begin!
