Perfect

He had good reasons for hating them, for one they were the only things that were keeping him from his fathers love. Also they had beaten him time and time again when he was obviously the better fighter. He hated them because they were on the good side, the superior side, the one every one always loved.

They were the sun, while he had to stay in the shadows. He hated them because they had friends, people their age that didn't envy them because of a title, or mock them because of a burn.

Most of all though he hated them because they were everything he wasn't.

Well this one is probably a bit sloppy because I jotted it down all in one sitting… Oh, well. I fixed it up a bit when I typed it on the computer.

Best wishes,

Alina