Hello guys, today i'm giving some answer for a review of Guest-Questioner:

1 - Yes, everything is a fulfiment to the story at this point, since OC is minding his own business while team RWBY and team JNPR do all the important plot stuff. But in incomin chapter there will be more events and changes from original story (aka - The story will be finally changing in meaningful way.).

2 - My grammar is pain, and i need to agree with you on this one. But i will try to improve it in next chapters. As it comes to another brawler, my primary thought on this series is to have OC as lone Wolf (Why do you think i wrote initiation specifically to make him alone?) and then have one girl (maybe two) from team RWBY join him before ending of Volume 2 as brawlers (And yes, the Stinglash tapped to the tree will be used to that.) .

3 - When it comes to "[words] said Maken" , i will try this in the next chapter and see what happens.

4 - Glad you are also a bakugan fan! It's always good to knew someone reads it.

As it comes to the next chapter, it will be posted around 26 October since i will put more effort into it.