SwiftAuditore: hey swifters I've had a re-read of my Undertale fanfiction and I have decided to rewrite the chapters to make them better I've started with chapter 1 and I will move on to the other chapters. While this story itself might not end up being very long, it is the first part of a series.

Disclaimer: I don't own anything or anyone that belongs to Undertale it belongs to Toby Fox

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Chapter 1 the Skeleton Bros

I close my front door from getting some much needed supplies, I put my supplies away. I hang my black leather bag up on the hook I keep it on Joseph I'll keep my promise on trying to find a way back to you I promise, I just need one day's break to regain my energy I look longingly at my ring I hide when I have to leave this house. I freeze on hearing a weird sound coming from my bedroom I need to keep my breathing even, I'm glad that hamon works in this world and that Lisa Lisa taught me hamon alongside Joseph and Caesar and before them as I can protect myself with hamon.

I sneak up to my bedroom running hamon through a chain necklace I've taken off my neck and holding in one hand and I enter my bedroom, as soon as I enter I dodge the staff that's swung my way and I throw the end of my necklace at the one attacking me causing them to yelp. There must have been two people because suddenly a piece of cloth is held to my nose and mouth. I manage to strike the one holding the cloth to my nose and right before I black out I put my necklace back on.

I let out a groan as I come to and stretch out for a bit before I open my eyes to find that I'm at a place I've never been to before, I work on making my breathing even. Why am I on a snowy mountain? This makes getting back to Joseph more complicated I stand up and look around, upon seeing my friend lying on the floor not far from me I quickly make my way over to her and I crouch, I use hamon to wake her up I can't wait who knows how long for her to wake up as it could take who knows how long for her to wake up if left on her own

"Hey Arleana, are you alright?" I inquire

"Aside from a slight headache I'm alright, are you alright Kristie?" She answers

"I'm good, don't worry" I affirmed Arleana stands up while massaging her head

"So where are we?" Arleana asks

"Aside from the obvious that we are on a mountain, I don't know we need to have a look around" I state and we look around the area for a bit until I find a sign I stop and read the sign and I gasp in shock No, how are we here?

"What is it Kristie?" Arleana quizzed

"There is a sign here which says 'Mt Ebott turn away now those that climb this mountain never come back Mountain Climbers Organisation'" I state

"We must be in the world of Undertale because I was putting finishing touches to a drawing for my next project when a cloth is put on my mouth and I struggled to get free however I failed in the end, though how we ended up in Undertale I have no idea. How did you wind up here?" Arleana reveals

"Well I just got back home from getting supplies, I had put them away as well as my messenger bag when I heard a strange sound coming from my bedroom so I crept to my bedroom prepared to defend myself, I dodge an attack when I enter and someone held a cloth to my nose from behind and I black out." I explained

We start walking and chatting trying to work out how we got to this world and how to get back. We must have gotten lost in our conversation because we trip on a vine and fall into a hole in the mountain.

As soon as we landed we checked ourselves for injuries and we get up from the floor and start walking to the archway we can see in the distance. When we get through the archway we see a golden flower with a face. The flower looks at us as soon as we get through the archway.

"H-Howdy! I'm Flowey. Flowey the Flower! What are your names?" the flower introduced himself

"I'm Arleana" my friend introduces herself

"Kristie" I say quietly Joseph I wish you were with me right now

""Hmmm… You're new to the underground aren't cha? Golly, you both must be so confused. Someone ought to teach you how things work around here! I guess little old me will have to do. Ready? Here we go" Flowey initiated a battle with us and two hearts appeared mine which is turquoise colour and Arleana's heart which is purple. Flowey looks at my soul and gains a confused expression but changes to a neutral face after a few seconds.

"See that heart? That is your SOUL, the very culmination of your being! Your SOUL starts off weak but can grow strong if you gain a lot of LV. What's LV stand for? Why, LOVE, of course! You want some LOVE, don't you? Don't worry, I'll share some with you!" Flowey spins out white pellets around him. "Down here, LOVE is shared through... little white... 'Friendliness pellets.' Are you ready? Move around! Get as many as you can!" he continued and spun the pellets in the direction of our hearts we tried to dodge them but we failed because we didn't get the hang of moving our hearts out of the way in time.

"You idiot! In this world, it's kill or BE killed. Why would ANYONE pass up an opportunity like this!?" Flowey exclaims with a demonic grin and surrounded Arleana's heart and my heart and exclaimed "Die!" before sending the bullets closer.

Just as I am about to use hamon on Flowey a fireball appears and sends Flowey flying away from us, we get healed straight away how exactly did that happen? "What a terrible creature, torturing such poor, innocent youths. Ah, do not be afraid, I am TORIEL, caretaker of the RUINS. I pass through this place every day to see if anyone has fallen down. You two are the first and second humans to come here in a long time and you two are the first teens to come here. Come! I will guide you through the catacombs." Toriel explains and leads us up some stairs and into a room.

Toriel explained the ruins and that you need to solve puzzles to get to the next room. She took us through a few rooms then gave us both a mobile phone and left us alone. We waited a while for her until we got bored so we decided to carry on through the ruins. On the way Toriel called us on the phone and asked if we liked butterscotch or cinnamon and answered that we liked butterscotch. Not long after that she rang again asking if we didn't dislike Cinnamon that we wouldn't turn our nose up if we found some on our plate and we answered that we liked Cinnamon as well.

Once we reached Toriel's house we see Toriel walk round a tree and she sees us and comes over to us and checks us over.

"We are sorry for leaving the room when you asked us to wait we got bored" I speak

"It's ok since you both are fine" Toriel exclaims and leads the way to her home and lets us inside her home. We ended up in her living room.

"I'm Arleana and this is my friend Kristie, Sorry that we didn't introduce ourselves when we first met you" Arleana apologizes for the both of us I think I'll let Arleana do most of the talking for me in this world

"It's ok now the pie is ready so if you two would have a seat please and I will get the pie" Toriel exclaims and we sit down at the table and we ate the Pie. She showed us to a room and apologized for their only being one however we told her that it was fine. I ended up getting the bed through rock, paper, and scissors.

Over the course of a week Arleana and I explored the entirety of the ruins and currently Arleana and I are in our room which now has two beds, Arleana sees Toriel as a second mother, and I see her as a friendly monster. We are currently going through my bag placing things into two piles which are one to keep and one to throw away once we get out of this situation and once we had finished sorting those piles out we put the pile to be disposed into a bag and put into one of our bags so that we don't need to worry about them and moved on to sorting the pile to keep in order of what they are.

I pull a leopard's ears headband that I once used for a Halloween video for my channel. "Arleana it's been a week since we fell down here and Frisk hasn't shown up yet. Why don't you stay here in the ruins and keep an eye out for Frisk and I will leave the ruins" I exclaim

"That's a good idea but how are you going to protect yourself?" Arleana asks

"By putting the Leopard ears headband and bring out my leopard tail, claws and teeth out I will look like a monster" I reply

"Let's go talk to Toriel about the idea" Arleana says and we leave the room to find her and we found her in the living room and we explained our idea to her leaving Frisk out of the explanation and she liked the idea and asked me to change so I went back to the bedroom Arleana and I share I put the leopard ears headband on securely, pull my claws, leopard tail and teeth out and I made my way back to the living room.

"That is a really good disguise my child" Toriel says and Arleana agrees Toriel leaves the room for a short while and she returned and led me to the exit of the ruins and opened the door she and Arleana wished me luck and I walk out of the ruins and Toriel closes the door behind me.

I started walking down the path shivering from the cold I move around the branch and continue walking when I heard a snapping sound do I turned around and saw a broken branch now lay on the ground no one else is there so I turn around and keep waling until I hear footsteps approaching me so I stop at a bridge.

"Human…. don't you know how to greet a new pal? Turn around and shake my hand" I turned around and took his hand and a fart like sound let out.

"Heheh… the old whoopee cushion in the hand trick. It's always funny. Anyways, you're a human, right? That's hilarious. I'm sans. Sans the skeleton" he says

"My name is Kristie it's nice to meet you Sans" I greet probably best to be polite to the monsters

"I know that you are human because Toriel told me that you are a human disguising yourself as a monster. Good disguise though one question Kristie why do your claws and tail look real?" Sans asks

"They look real because they are" I answer less information about myself I can get away with telling them the better

"How are they real?" Sans questions

"I'm sorry but I don't know you, I don't trust you right now to tell you that, I'm sorry maybe I'll tell you at a later time" I inform

"The only reason I haven't attacked you yet is because I promised someone that I wouldn't attack you, that I'd give you a chance so neither of us is going anywhere until you answer the question" Sans threatened that settles it I don't trust you and I never will, I'll tell you the version I tell to those I don't trust

"I was kidnapped and experimented on at a young age" I conceded "When someone tells you that they don't want to tell you something when they first meet you don't threaten them as if you do then you'll have a very hard time gaining that being's trust" I Chastised "I told you that I didn't trust you yet and you went straight to threatening me, right now you are showing that you don't have much honour to go back on your 'promise' you are not the first being that isn't human I've met and before I continue don't bother asking as I won't tell you and it was before I wound up in this mountain who have more respect and honour that you. I have high respect and honour for them that you will never have from me" I fumed

"I'm sorry, I shouldn't have treated you like that" Sans gaped

"I accept your apology but I don't forgive you" I acknowledged

"c'mon let's go through those bars my bro made them too wide to stop anyone" Sans exclaims and we walk through the bars and we stopped outside by a lamp. "Speaking of my bro here he comes" Sans speaks and he walked into the area and he was about to speak but stopped when he saw me.

"SANS WHO IS THIS" he questions

"Papyrus this is Kristie and she told me she has nowhere to stay" Sans speaks

"KRISTIE YOU CAN STAY WITH MY BROTHER AND I UNTIL YOU ARE ABLE TO GET YOUR OWN HOME. SANS… IT'S BEEN EIGHT DAYS AND YOU STILL HAVEN'T RECALIBRATED YOUR PUZZLES WHAT HAVE YOU BEEN DOING?" Papyrus exclaims

"That is kind of you to offer but I won't impose I will stay in an Inn" I acknowledged

"Take it easy bro... I've gotten a ton of work done. A Skele-ton" Sans exclaims. Sans gave me some coins to stay in an inn for weeks.