Starting To Change The World Final Part
Kiran decided to go to train after he left Nino and Sharena with his new bike.
He really needed to improve his skills, even though fighting the hero king and survive was supposed to be a feat, or at least that was what Lucina said, Kiran understood perfectly that Marth probably was containing his full strength. Even if Marth was obligated to obey Veronica, he still wanted to be free. It was logic to say he was going easy on him, and even if that was the case, Kiran knew he couldn't have defeated him fighting alone... he still was very weak.
In the training camp, the princess of Ylisee and the prince of Askr were involved in a very even duel.
Kiran decided to wait his turn to fight either Lucina or Alfonse.
Kiran analyzed the fight, it was very interesting and amazing at the same time.
Lucina clearly moved quicker than Alfonse, her slashes were more. But Alfonse seemed to do not have any trouble, blocking her attacks very well. Lucina hit him more times, but when Alfonse decided to attack, his slashes were stronger and more precise most of the time.
They didn't seem to be about to finish, Kiran sighed and was about to approach when he felt a finger on his shoulder, he turned to see the hybrid Corrin, she had a wooden sword on her right hand.
"I guess you are getting tired of waiting, aren't you?" she asked while she patted Kiran's head.
"Kinda." Kiran closed his eyes, enjoying Corrin's action.
"Good, because I still need to practice my sword skills again... well, get ready."
"Can't we just wait a little more?..." Kiran asked, bowing a little. Corrin understood what he wanted, smiling, she began to pat Kiran's head again.
A few seconds after, Corrin's eyes went kinda wide as she heard Kiran simulating a purring of a little cat.
"Oowwwww!" Corrin couldn't stop herself and hugged Kiran while she continued patting him. Kiran, obviously, purred more. It only lasted two minutes as Kiran liberated himself from Corrin's hands.
The dragon princess giggled as she spoke "Okay, I-I felt I became Camilla." was that what his sister usually felt? now she understood much better some of her actions.
"Another of your siblings, I guess," Kiran said, holding his own wood sword, he imitated Alfonse's posture at the same time he created some separation between them.
"Yeah, she's very... affectionate." that was underestimating how affectionate she could be though.
Kiran got surprised when the girl crouched slightly, then, she jumped, making two spins in the air. She made a slash in the down direction, Kiran blocked it placing his sword in a horizontal position, he backed off a little by jumping... only to see the princess running towards him, he tried to stab her, Corrin just jumped again, making another slash, this time, hitting on Kiran's shoulder.
Kiran growled, reacting quickly to block a second slash, then he pushed her away with the sword. Being his turn to make a slash, he tried a horizontal one, Corrin avoided it by doing like if she was playing limbo.
"Uh.. uh... damn... Marth wasn't that agile..." in Corrin's case, she reminded him of a sports athlete given what he just saw
Corrin giggled. "I still need to regain all my strength and my old sword though, but well, these are the results of being raised in a tower during years. I couldn't do anything different to learning tactics and training."
"Inside a tower... who are you? Fiona? it makes sense I guess, considering you can turn yourself into a beast." Kiran giggled.
"Who?" Corrin scratched her hair.
"Nobody, just forget it... mmmmh..." Kiran then tried to make a similar posture to Corrin's one, but he held the sword on the frontal hand instead.
Corrin raised her eyebrow "Are you imitating me?..." he wanted to learn her style? "Mmmh, can you wield your sword with your left hand?"
"I wanna try something... let's say your posture reminds me of a character's one... and I'd be glad to dominate that posture..." the only thing he could not get to complete said character's fighting style was a gun for his other hand... and even then reloading it may have been a nightmare in the middle of the battlefield. "I may never be so agile as you... but I still wanna try it. And don't worry, the only thing my left hand cannot do is writing." Kiran smiled as he tried to run like Corrin.
Corrin blocked his first attack, only to do not almost block the second. Kiran had changed the weapon from the left hand to the right one very quickly and tried a horizontal slash from right to left.
She continued blocking attacks, but sometimes Kiran was able to hit her, due she got confused when he changed the sword from one hand to the other.
Corrin did a mortal jump somersault backward. She prepared herself to block another attack, but Kiran stayed where he was, then, he began to twist his wrist many times, due to that, his sword was making circles like the symbol of the infinite.
Of course, he did not expect this thing to actually block a thing with this move, just to confuse Corrin.
Kiran suddenly broke the cycle and attacked her with a diagonal slash from up to down, because the dragon princess was still trying to process what the hell was he doing, he actually managed to hit her.
They continued like that for hours, as the combat progressed more, Corrin managed to predict better Kiran's moves, even though Kiran was able to change the weapon from hand to hand faster.
Their training stopped at the moment they felt raindrops on their heads.
Kiran gave a smile. "Oh, great!"
Corrin raised her eyebrow "I guess that's sarcasm."
"No, actually, I like the rain, I mean, every time I'm not getting so pinches (fucking) wet... what I mean is that I like rain's sound." It may have been a very mocked liking in the modern world, but he just loved it.
"Oh, interesting, but I still say you should get wet" Corrin covered her nose with her free hand. "You stink." Corrin turned to see other things as she now was detecting Kiran's reek.
"Good point, I mean, at least this is because of sweating by training and not by the temperature," Kiran giggled as he detected his smell. "Honestly, sometimes I didn't stand the heat from my town." Kiran began to walk to the castle, Corrin following him.
"Um... Kiran..."
"Yes?"
Corrin gave a kinda worried face as she spoke, "I'm still wondering something... what was that... thing you asked me for?..."
Kiran yawned and rubbed his chin." Could you please explain to me what are you talking about?"
Corrin struggled at remembering the word. "About... bi... bi... bi something...
"Um..." Kiran did not catch it at first until a light turned on inside his brain. "You mean... what I asked you... that time... when I requested your help for ideas about tactics... right? I think the word you're looking for is binary."
Corrin nodded. She scratched her hair's back part "That was so weird..."
Kiran's face became kinda pale and he gave a more insecure expression. "Let's say... I wanted to test something," he responded vaguely, he did not want to explain everything that his mind feared.
"Test?... test what?..." Corrin wasn't expecting that kind of answer.
"Um... um... I wanted to know if you knew... something that... you shouldn't have known." it was true, just not the full truth of the situation.
"Why?" Corrin was even more confused than at that time.
Kiran sighed "I'm afraid I cannot tell you." this actually bothered him a lot, this kind of excuse was one of the ones he hated the most... but telling to what he thought was a simulation that he was aware of the fact it may be a simulation... would not help.
"Why?..." Corrin inclined her head, even more confused.
"It's something that could blow your mind up... I'll tell you later, I'mma take a bath." he began to walk faster. A vague promise he did not actually have to fulfill... that worked very well.
"Um... okay..."
All the heroes who were eating were feeling comfortable, the raining sound created a very relaxing and enjoyable atmosphere.
Kiran stroked Nino's hair as he asked "So, wanna get your own bike?"
Nino's eyes were filled with light and childish desire. "Yes, please!"
"All right, en chinga (quickly) I request to build another one." he patted Nino and then he continued eating, but it didn't last too much as Anna sat by his side.
"Kiran, important news." she commented with another letter on her hands.
Kiran felt a little uncomfortable due to what happened between him and Anna hours ago, but he decided to listen to her anyway.
"Well, what's going on?" Kiran sighed.
"There will be a reunion of Askarian tacticians, the council of Askr and the queen, you must be there."
He actually wondered when something like that was going to happen. In any kind of war, this kind of reunions was pretty much inevitable. Even more when there were flying horses that could help the generals return to the capital more easily. "When is it?"
"Tomorrow, do not miss it."
Kiran gave a thumbs up and he said "Símon (yeah)."
"I guess that is a yes." Anna scratched her hair.
Kiran nodded, he was about to begin to think about the meeting when Anna spoke again.
"Also, my sisters wanna meet you." Anna smiled again at him, although a feeling of jealousy could be perceived.
"Oh, you have sisters? how many, I have three." Kiran grabbed a spoon and then continued eating again.
Again, Anna scratched her hair, but she was partially confused this time. "Honestly, I don't remember very well, it was a long time since we had a family meeting."
"Um... okay?... could you please give me at least an approximate number?..." had they stopped meeting a long time ago? or why she had problems remembering that? also, why she knew her sisters want to meet him then anyway?
"Um..." Anna put her finger on her lip as she tried to recall. "Over thirty in this continent," Anna narrowed her eyes as she attempted to make sure her answer was more or less correct. "Yeah." she nodded.
Kiran opened his mouth so much in surprise. "¡A la verga! (holy crap!)..."
Alfonse then decided to speak. "If that surprises you, the fact all those sisters are like twins of the commander is gonna break your mind..." Alfonse himself had had trouble understanding that when he was younger.
"...Poncho, are you kidding me?..." although making jokes was not something he had seen the prince do, there was the possibility that he had hidden dephts.
Alfonse narrowed and Anna giggled. "No, he's not." she answered as she leaned on Kiran's shoulder. "All they are as beautiful as I am."
"I can confirm that, we have Annas in our own worlds. All they look equal," Lucina commented, Virion nodded.
"Yeah." Corrin and Kagero said.
"It's the same case for us." Lilina explained, Nino made a sound of confirmation.
"N-no-no mames (don't be kidding), who coño (in the hell) are you?... the nurse Joy?..."
"Who?" Anna scratched her hair.
It was a damn shame nobody here could understand his references and have a good laugh about it... but explaining them was entertaining in itself too.
"Let's say you're not the only person with multiple identical sisters I know..." Kiran giggled.
"There are people like me in your world?!" Anna seemed excited and even all the other seemed surprised.
"Emm... the problem is that those persons were fictional characters... I never expected something like that could actually happen..." Kiran clarified as he smiled nervously.
"Oh." Anna gave a kinda disappointed face, the others did too but a little less than Anna.
"What exists in my world is the twin town, a town where there are ninety pairs of twins, or at least that was the number of twins registered the last time I took a look at that information." Kiran rubbed his chin and narrowed his eyes as he tried to remember more. "It is in a country called... Brazil?... yeah."
The sense of wonder of everybody seemed to reactivate "Wow... all them in only one town?" Alfonse asked.
"Yeah, I mean, I read the notice a few days before I got summoned."
"So, you lived in... Brazin you said?." Lucina asked.
"It's Brazil, and no, Brazil is too far from where I lived, I mean, I have a friend there and I talked to her every day but, no."
"Wait.. you talked to someone who lives in another country every day?..." Kagero questioned.
"Even though you said you lived too far..." Nino commented.
They almost felt like it was a very bad lie... like, too much.
"Yeah, I mean, your fastest communication object is an owl." Kiran shrugged. "Where I come from, we use something that is able to send messages as fast as the light itself called the Internet..." he hard trouble imagining how to explain it. "Mmmh... consider it... a no physic dimension where you can have talkings, play games, look for information or whatever you want, that is used by people from all the continents."
"...You're never gonna stop surprising us eh?..." Alfonse nodded slowly.
"Never Poncho." He was still unsure why them seemed to believe him that easily... but then again, the concept of the Internet may not sound that insane to people who had been summoned into another world.
Sharena felt so excited, imagining herself doing a lot of things with people from the whole world... if sometimes she felt eager to visit that place since first time Kiran explained them about the wonders of his homeworld, now she was so decided to go. "Brother, w-we should open a portal to that world!"
A few heroes showed their approval, others had doubts.
Alfonse rolled his eyes. "First we need to be able to close the portals, Sharena."
But only Kiran had an expression filled with horror.
"NO! NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONNO!" he negated with his both hands at the same time he yelled.
Everybody backed off a little on their chairs.
"NEVER IN YOUR LIFE SUGGEST THAT AGAIN!..." Kiran deep breathed a few times after that... "That's a bad idea, have you forgotten what I said about the weapons where I come from?..."
Sharena's felt a cold appearing in her heart as she remembered "Oh.."
"And okay, I guess we agree when I say this, weapons don't kill people, people kill people, that's right..." he shook his head. "However, the problem is what I've told you about the people from there. They have, as far as I know, some problems with two things. The first one is this thing called petroleum, it is running out." he made a signal with his hand that ordered them to stop before asking anything. "What is petroleum? It is the most wanted natural resource in my world. it is hard to obtain because it is created by the corpses of animals that lived thousands of years ago, but it's very useful. Basically, it is a cornerstone of society, and... one of the most powerful countries is so desperate to get more petroleum. Considering how far they are willing to go to get what they want when they want it... I guess I don't need to explain what would happen... and that only considering the petroleum in this world, if they discovered others that are connected to this one right... more eager to conquest they are gonna be, and again, we're not considering the other natural resources they want." uranium for nuclear reactors and weapons... tungsten for tanks...
"...And if we have a lot of troubles dealing with Embla..." Anna grimaced.
"..Dealing with them is gonna be a nightmare.." Alfonse ended the phrase.
A death silence appeared for a few seconds before a scared Nino asked something.
"And what is the second one?..." she was trembling.
"The needing of a new world to live in... many activities generated by using the petroleum have caused a... climatic disaster..." what's worse was that, as far as Kiran knew, what the scientists attempted now was to reduce the damage it could cause rather than avoid the damage. "We know it as... global warming, to explain all the processes involved would be very hard, so let's say the temperature is increasing too much through the whole world. It will come a day when everything is gonna be as hot as the hell itself... due that, they are trying to get another world where to live, in case they fail in their attempts to stop the possible apocalypse they have caused..."
Again, silence... until Alfonse gulped and decided to speak.
"We would make them the things easier with a portal to our world," Alfonse said with a serious face.
"Pretty much... you don't have to suffer as a result of their mistakes... so... DON'T OPEN A PORTAL TO MY WORLD! EVER!" He hit the table with his palms.
"I-I see... sorry Kiran..." Sharena apologized.
"It's okay... the only reason why we would open a gate to my world would be to steal information and technology to apply on them reverse engineering, and we would open the gate only one day or two, no more." an anomaly like that in space-time continuum would be detected... it was probable that the mere fact he got summoned attracted to a lot of people... something like that would have left a clue behind... not that he expected the USA, China, and Russia to discover he got summoned to another universe... but perhaps they would find something that would lead them to discover interdimensional travel...
It was not very probable they could open a gate themselves to exactly this world but...
"So you really don't want to go back," Anna asked.
Kiran began to shake his head and his both hands "No, ni en pedo, (never, never) ni en pedo, I only return to get as more books and lamps or whatever technological stuff as I could and mexicano va que chuta. (I return quickly)" then he pushed Anna's face "... and you, stay two meters or more away from me."
"Mi mi mi.. you're hard... I like that" Anna winked.
"Tsee."
The next day, Kiran was already waiting outside the throne room, nobody but him had already arrived, he sat by the door, he had the eyes closed, the voice of his commander made him open them.
"I hope you slept this time."
"Yeah yeah, could you please stop chingandome (bothering me)?." Kiran growled as he facepalmed.
"Oh? then you don't want this?" she was holding a coffee cup.
"I slept, but it does not mean I don't want it." Kiran stood up and took the cup, he drank happily and he exclaimed. "¡Esto sabe de puta madre! (This tastes extremely delicious)."
"I heard you kept your manners when you met the queen, so I hope you're doing the same now." she gave him a concerned face as she placed her left hand on his shoulder.
"A huevo (of course), that means yes, don't worry." he drank more.
This time, instead of being sat in front of the queen Henriette, Kiran, Alfonse, Anna, and Sharena were on some seats similar to those of a jury, they and some men were in the right part of the room, in the left part more men and women.
"(Parece que la misoginia y el machismo no existe en lo absoluto en este mundo... o al menos en ésta nación... (it looks like misogyny and machism don't exist at all in this world... or at least in this country)... si éste mundo es de verdad... ¡lo amo aun más! ( if this world is real... I love it even more!) )..."
Two persons in the room had a similar coat to Kiran's one.
The first one was a man of gray hair and eyes, he seemed to be older and taller than Kiran, like if he was twenty-five years old. But considering the Askarian calendar, that man's age would be thirty point forty-one... since Kiran became eighteen the previous day, his new Askarian age was twenty point nine... If that man was actually twenty-five, in Askarian age he would be eight-point fifty-one years older than Kiran... without considering months and days of course... if Kiran needed to name something he and that man shared, it was their serious face.
The second one was a woman, purple hair, but her eyes were brown as Kiran's ones. Younger than the first one, that was for sure, but she was as tall as Kiran. Maybe twenty-four point three in Askarian age, her expression showed a kind person.
There was a third one with a coak, but his own was kinda different, it had a better decoration... more serious face, a mustache, clearly very old, almost forty-eight point six years old in Askarian age... black hair and eyes... probably he was the best tactician of Askr.. how that kind of people was called?... Grand Masters?... yeah.
"Alright..." The queen Henriette spoke. "I'm going to pass list first."
For the first time in a very long time, Kiran felt as if he was in his second favorite place, the school.
He wrote down the names of all the people who were present, some of them were nobles. Considering Alfonse, his sister and mother didn't seem to be evil at all, Kiran wasn't sure if he shouldn't untrust so much as he did to the previously mentioned ones. To do not take risks, he was going to investigate them if he had time.
For him, the most important ones were the tacticians.
The gray-haired man was called Carl, the purple-haired girl was Evelyn, and the old man was Frank... but he wasn't sure if these names he heard were the real names or just the ones he got due the translator integrated into his brain.
Kiran stayed silent for most of the meeting, he actually didn't have anything to say, but he had a lot of information to process.
While Carl and Evelyn defended the west side of the country, Frank defended the south, as it would be expected, he had to deal the most difficult battles, but he managed to win an 80% of the times, but everybody seemed to agree that it was only because some heroes were in Veronica's forces.
Emblian tacticians were good at their jobs anyway, the fact that Carl and Evelyn had a 60% of victories explained that.
This war had lasted for one year at that moment, but, again, a year for these people was only ten months. However, apparently, this wasn't the first time it happened. A similar conflict was caused by Veronica's father, it ended with his death. The portals were closed by his son, the prince Bruno, but due to that, he was considered a betrayer. He escaped from home and nobody had known anything about him for years... unfortunately, Veronica managed to deceive Alfonse and he opened new portals for her. She used the excuse she needed to get minerals from those worlds to rebuild her nation, actually, that's why they wanted the portals in the first place. Mining was easier if you knew the location of certain minerals and if you can open a portal to the same place in infinite timelines, you didn't have to waste your time looking for minerals anymore. You only needed to get them from the same place again and again... after that, Alfonse lost nobles' support, it was one of the reasons why he joined the order of heroes, to fix his mistake and redeem himself.
Kiran resisted the temp to yell at him a classic meme from his loved (hated) country: Cabrón, ¡¿Qué hiciste?! (Fool, what did you do?!)... he decided that maybe he would do it later.
Most of the nobles showed a behavior similar to their queen's one, friendly and respectful when they asked things about the war. Kiran still saw a few ones who were more like he had expected about these people, eagers to get Henriette's favor, saying a lot how much they were loyal and that they would try their best to support the army but never actually explaining how.
"(Populismo barato de porquería.. (Shitty cheap populism).)" Kiran thought... probably they would be the most annoying stones in his way in the future. since he was gonna try to convince Alfonse to change the monarchy to something better, and it didn't need too much explanation why they would disagree with the idea.
Not that he expected this to happen anytime soon... just like with his technology, this was something the results would not become that much apparent until he and this generation were long gone.
But even with all that, Kiran could compare Askr to Iceland... two beautiful countries.
Of course, Kiran was perfectly aware of some of them watching at him, so did Anna. Both of them knew perfectly it would come a time when one person would ask who is the new weird guy who wears a tactician coak, especially because most of them hadn't seen him before.
And that time came when it was time to check the order of heroes' performance.
"Commander Anna, could you please explain to us a few things?" Frank asked.
Anna stood up and nodded. "Yes."
"We sent you to recover the legendary relic from the temple to discover if you could bring the hero of the legend... and considering your order seem to have gained a new member.. is he the hero?" the grandmaster pointed to Kiran.
Anna nodded again "Show them." she ordered.
Kiran didn't stand up, he just raised the Breidablik to allow everybody to look at it.
Some people showed their surprise, Frank raised his eyebrows a little, but he stayed calm.
"Very well, now, considering he's wearing a tactician coak, I suppose he's good enough to lead the army... is he?"
"His performance is decent, during our attempt to liberate the world of the mystery, we lost 50 soldiers of the 450 queen Henriette gave us, that could be considered too bad, if we only fought two or three battles, we had at least seven direct battles with the Emblian Army. In some of them the heroes were not exactly present but they still count."
"Those would be like seven casualties per battle..." the man considered the situation before nodding. "It's not bad. Of course, the enemy is not as strong in the conquested worlds as in ours, but it's not bad."
"He has discovered the method to summon heroes to fight for our side using Breidablik, since it is like a weapon from his world. We have six heroes right now, counting Sharena, Alfonse, him, and me, we are ten."
"Is he always that silent?" Carl asked, his face showed indifference.
"Wait a minute..." Evelyn placed her fingers on her chin as she began to think. "Silent.. tactician... young... that hair..." she noticed his portrait... looked similar to a certain tactician of legend that, although their existence was confirmed, there were almost zero registers about his personality and private life. "Is he.. Mark?"
"Mark?" Frank questioned.
"Uuum..." it was the first sound Kiran made during the whole meeting. "Who is Mark?..."
"So he's not, ha!"
Kiran narrowed his eyes.
"Carl, relax..." Frank sighed. "Well, what's your name, young man?"
"...Kiran... Kiran Enríquez López..." he crossed his arms.
"Kiran Henrik López?" Sharena asked.
"Enríquez Sharenita, Enríquez López."
Evelyn raised her hand. "I'm kinda confused, your surname is López, right?"
"It's one of my two surnames." Kiran corrected. "In my country, we use two surnames. The first surname of the dad, and the first surname of the mom. It is very practical to differentiate between siblings and cousins... Kiran is my name, Enríquez and López are my surnames..." names in Spanish could be very large...
"Oh, I see." Evelyn seemed to be thinking about what kind of curious scenarios it would create a naming system like that one... so he decided to give her an answer.
"And that only because my naming process was pretty much standard... I mean, I could have had a second name... and then there's the phenomenon of mixed names where you get two names that technically speaking still count as a single one." Kiran laughed as he closed his eyes. "Or compound surnames, when you want to have both the surnames of a certain parent. I could have been named Kiran Enríquez Escobedo López Jaramillo for example."
The nobles, the queen, the tacticians and pretty much anybody else in the room was getting fuzzy. Kiran placed his hand with his index finger raised and he moved it as he explained the next part, as a way of staying "in rhythm" or something like that "In a very extreme case you could have a person called Carlos María Eduardo García de la Cal-Fernández Leal Luna Delgado-Galván Sanz... yes." he giggled.
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"That... was... educational..." commented the grandmaster. "So, how do you want me to refer to you."
"Whatever is fine. Kiran, Mr. Enríquez, Mr. López."
"Well, Mr. Enríquez." Frank spoke."I would like to test your skills as quickly as it is possible... but I'm afraid it will be once I've finished all my own battles. The only possibility to do that right now would be taking you to the main army but leaving the Order without the summoner is an obvious tactical mistake."
Kiran gave a classic military salute. "Sir yes sir." only to feel uncomfortable once everybody gave him a confused look, except Anna, Sharena and Alfonse, they knew it was probably another of his weird hand expressions.
"Um... this is how military display respect where I come from." he explained.
Carl and Evelyn did the same thing then, while Evelyn smiled. Carl just shrugged.
After a few more time, the queen ended the meeting.
So.. I'mma be the Mrs Enríquez?... mmhh?
Anna asked as she held Kiran's hand. he shook his head. "No, because I'm not interested in getting a wife. And even if I was, in my system the wives keep their surnames. You'd become Anna whatever your surname is de Enríquez."
Anna just giggled. "Maybe you're not right interested now... but nobody knows what the future holds."
(Interesada de mierda.. (interested woman of shit...)). Kiran thought, he growled and kept walking.
Alfonse, who was looking at them, whispered to his sister. "The commander sees a gold mine instead of Kiran himself..."
Sharena nodded. "They look cute together though."
Alright, I just wanted to release this already.. I'm not gonna lie, part of the problem why this chapter took so long is because I was playing GTA SA and Minecraft a lot.. the others were the final exams I had.. fortunately, the lowest calcification I got was an 8. (while in USA you use letters, in Mexico, we use numbers from the 0 to 10, being 6 the lowest number you need to pass the exam.)
The new Original Characters are going to have their time to shine, just wait.
In this story, nobody is gonna be forced to use only one kind of weapon.
Technically, using our calendar, they are on January 2nd 2018.
Is everybody having fun with the world cup?, here I saw too many memes about Mexico beating Germany, as everybody expected Mexico getting raped like Brazil and Argentina.. but I'm not too happy, since many videos about Mexicans burning Germany flags appeared... for just a stupid goal (gol here)... urgh..
Whatever, let's forget these Neandertals and let's go to answer reviews.
Artyom-Dreizehn:
Thanks a lot, and sorry for releasing this late.
JP I'm Italian:
1.-Due that, I respect you, and yeah, she even has a brother... who everybody says he's gonna be a lot like Ephraim... I hope that's true.
2.-Thanks for the corrections.
3.-Technically speaking, those moments about Kiran doubting reality are the farthest I will ever let Kiran to break the fourth wall.
4.-Well, Kiran has a lot of ideas to get a lot of money, Anna is obsessed with gold.. it was inevitable.
5.-Just wait until Kiran builds a trampoline or his mini soccer game is finished.
6.-The heroes are: Lucina, Kagero, Lilina, Nino, Corrin, Virion (but he does not appear a lot since I never like him in Awakening), Anna, Sharena, Alfonse and Kiran.. maybe I put too many women in the story but.. well, the game gives me better and more women units than men units (I only had one man 5 stars and like 7 women 5 stars the first three months of the game), and I live surrounded by women in real life so..
KiraLight-san:
Yeah, it was.
Coralei:
1.-Aunque no se ha visto, Sharena sí ha estado entrenando.. (Even though it hasn't been seen, Sharena has been training..)
2.-Si bien es cierto que por efecto de las lineas de tiempo infinitas debe haber muchas Lucina que no son planas, del mismo modo que debe haber Camillas planas, ésta Lucina es plana como las que acostumbras a ver. (It is truth that, due the infinite timelines, there must be a lot of Lucinas who are not flat, just like there is a lot of Camillas who are flat, this Lucina is flat as you are used to see her.)
3.-Yuri?.. bueno, no es que tenga algún problema con eso pero.. sólo lo agregaría si no fuera forzado. (Yuri?... it is not like I have a problem with that but.. I wouldn't put it if it is forced.)
4.-Ve más capítulos y sabrás cual es su nombre. (Read more chapters and you'll know what is his name).
5.-No, hasta donde supongo eso es muy propio de ti. (No, until I can guess, that's so normal coming from you.)
As I always ask.. is there a grammar error?.. where?.
