sup my fellow companions of companionship. it is i, once again prepared and dangerously ready to finish this arc. in a different manner. i'm going to take this opportunity to speak with you a bit more...warmfully. first things first. i'm sure you must've felt that i took far longer to write this Arc compared to the last arcs.
i'm sure the lengthy chapter posting didn't really change all that much in my opinion. But maybe for some it Might have had its difference, so I just want to make this clear. This was my least Favorite Arc in the East blue saga, personally. I thought was going to have a blast writting this down. Which I was originally. But then later on it became really tedious to me, which as many of you who read it know, ended up with me skipping a lot of important scenes from the original source material.
And a lot more of exclusive for this story things were planned but had to be pushed on for the later arcs. I think it's time for me to share some of them to my audience.
First off, I was originally planning on having Jango Hypnotize himself after the group is distracted leading on him turning into a buffy version of himself, and Sanae would also have her first major fight against him.
But I thought, you guys wouldn't like it that much. I just wasn't very confident about this, so I scrapped into a more stupider plotwist that everyone saw it coming. There were also a few other gags that I was going to feature throught the story, but I decided to push them for Baratie,character interactions were also planned but pushed for baratie due to lack of confidence.
I talked about this with my friend on the internet and he told me this.
"Not to sound rude but, if you're unable to make one single majorly different scene in the story, or Character dialogue, or anything at all, you might as well give up on this story, or fanfic writing in general."
An I've been reflecting on this, thought and began reading a bunch of random popular OP crossover stories, and that's when I decided to not be as Afraid of writing down character dialogue, as I was before. Originally. There's one slice bit of it that'll be hinting but don't really know how to implement it so the max you'll see is a few scenes cutting to the point.
Now, changing subjects I've decided to completely skip this chapter. I know it's lazy, but you already know what would happen.
And now here's my biggest concern with this story so far. Sanae. She's joining the Straw Hats but I don't know what to do with her. I know basically nothing about her, and writing down fights will be a pain in my slimy ass. (Sorry) so just in case I downloaded every mainline touhou game including the fighting games. Just don't know when to play them.
Baratie is next, an I'm quite Excited for it. I have Lots of gags and ideas to be thrown for it, that I'm very Confident to show you. Hope you enjoy it when the time comes.
Okay,I think this is it. For the people that are still reading this. Thank you very much, for everything. I get more constructive criticism comments than anything but I still find them very helpful.
(please continue to comment on this story, it doesn't matter what it is about, it may look like i'm just begging for people to comment about my grammar,you don't have too much anymore i'm well aware of it. i would like to hear another Thing's coming from you. the plot, really.)
