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Ravenpaw skitteed to a halt a few feet from the Thunderpath. He could tell that something was wrong. In his dream, the road had been made of dirt. Now, he could tell that it was made of the same black material used back at his home.
He walked out of the trees and hoped for the best, closing his eyes. He could feel several monsters rushing past him, ruffling his fur. He opened his eyes.
He could not believe it. He couldn't stop himself for yowling in surprise. Instead of one Thunderpath, with a Twoleg village across it, there was dozens of Thunderpaths. Some crossed over and under eachother. There were Twolegs everywhere.
Ravenpaw turned to his right. Some small dead animal was lying there, unrecongnizable from the amount of monsters that ran over it. He bristed in fear, hoping that he would not share the animals fate. Taking a deep breath, he began to cross it.
It was the largest Thunderpath he had ever seen. Everywhere he turned, a monster would zipp past him, scaring the fur off of him. Ravenpaw only hoped that StarClan would watch over him. He took a final leap to safety, but had judged poorley. He wouldn.'t make it. A monster roared towards him.
Ravenpaw ducked and closed his eyes, ready to feel the blow. But it never came. He opened his eyes. He had gone under the monster! He breathed silent thanks to StarClan, but the danger was far from over. A small monster, with little paws, was headed his way. Dispite the size, Ravenpaw knew it was still deadly.
The black loner leaped out of the way, narrowly dodging another that crossed his path. How much longer can this last? he thought. He was barley half way to the forest on the other side.
As he dodged monster after monster, one Twoleg, in a very noisy monster with flashing lights, grew interested in him. Soon, the fully grown male Twoleg came over to him and tired to pick him up.
Ravenpaw hissed and spat, and the Twoleg grew mad. he tried to attatch a bid of rope around his neck. Snarling, Ravenpaw clawed the Twoleg. It dropped him immediatly. Ravenpaw used the opprutunity to run swiftly towards the forest. Unfortunatlry, he forgot to look.
A huge monster with incredable paws was coming straight towards him. It grazed past his forpaw. Ravenpaw here it snap and felt a numbing pain it his paw. tried to stay conscience, Ravenpaw focased on beting to the other side. He fell.
I'm sorry Graystripe, I'm sorry StarClan! I tried! he thought. He knew this was the end. Here, on unformiliar territory, Ravenpaw would join StarClan.
Suddently., He felt teeth grip his scruff. The animal dragged him over to saftey. Ravenpaw glimsed a smokey figure before he lost it.
I know! Not that long, and not that good of a chapter, but dont flame me too bad! The next Ravenpaw chapter will be better, know that I have another character to use. Graystripe's POV next... and we'll see what Silverstream has in store for him... Click that little 'reveiw' button now and tell me what you think!