IMPORTANT!
Hey guys I just wanted to say thanks to all of my reviewers, anonymous or not. You authors out there know how important it is to get feedback so that you can continue writing. Both positive and negative. On that note I have a couple of things that need to be addressed. Yeah I know boring...sorry I should have another chapter up by tomorrow evening if not then this weekend. Promise. :)
First point: Yes I have made Link's character protective as many have pointed out. Mazoku85, her stories are awesome READ THEM, pointed something very important out to me and I'm glad that she did because now I can explain myself to my readers. I don't mean Link to come off as a brat or as this super jealous person (cough cough Inuyasha cough cough). My way of seeing Link is that the poor guy is really frustrated and angry because 1. He can't admit his feelings to Zelda publicly and 2. He has to watch her with other suitors who could eventually end up marrying her. His emotions are bottled up and that's why he reacts the way he does to the suitors, aka why he broke the chair and why he feels angry when they're around. Don't worry - this will go away I promise. Wait for the next chapter.
Second point: The sex. First of all may I just say that compared to the beautiful stories I have read, my story fails to portray the intimacy scenes? Haha yes I am aware of this and all I can say is that I try my best. I know that there is a lot of it and trust me I'm not a horny teen who needed an excuse to write it all down. That would be my ex boyfriend. Anyways, I didn't want to wait until the ending and write this cliche sexual escapade. I wanted to stress the sexual tension between two teens who are in love. Don't worry...there probably won't be another one so breathe a collective sigh of relief my friends.
Third point: As I have told a few reviewers, there will be a big action sequence at the end of the story and am so pumped to write it. So be looking out for that and if you think Link gets to do all the ass kicking then think again because Zelda is the heroine. Hell yes. Haha.
Thanks for reading all of this crap (though I'm sure most skimmed over it and are now pissed at me for wasting their lives.)
