Hey. I sang the Star - Spangled Banner in front of the whole school, yesterday. It was pretty cool. Much love to dirtyd488, UltimateSorceress, rikulover, Riku-stalker, Chilly Academic, nurseangel, and armenian-keyblade. They were my reviewers for the last chapter.
This is for rikulover: I want criticism. Most people just say its great and all that. (Which is what I do when I review stories.) So I want criticism.
OK. Well, I'm getting a lot of things saying how short my story (or its chapters) is. I know you guys are right. It's actually supposed to be twice as long, or maybe even more, but then I'd have to put in some bitchy people and that'll just make me angry. So you're getting a drama-filled story, instead! The fic should be over in like, five chapters.
Here's the story. I decided that I'm going to tell you where Sora is.
Sora woke up groggily and looked around. It took him a while, but he noticed that he was tied to a chair. And that he still had his clothes on.
The first coherent word he could form was "Riku". He thought that this was one of his tricks. But the replying voice proved him oh so wrong.
"I go through all the trouble of drugging you, making sure that bastard doesn't get you, and kidnapping you and the first word that leaves your mouth is his name! How ungrateful can you be? Can't you appreciate all I've done for you?"
"Axel."
But the (let's just say crazy) redhead wasn't paying attention to him.
"Roxi! Our guest is awake! And it seems that the drug is wearing off! Can you bring some more?" Axel yelled at the door.
Then a cute blonde boy entered the room, wearing only a silk robe and holding a needle.
At once, Sora recognized who it was.
"Roxas."
"Hey, Sora." He smiled at the brunette and walked over to give Axel a kiss.
"So you guys are going out?" he asked spitefully.
"Not officially, but we are engaged." Axel gave a huge grin.
"Oh, that's great. So you guys kidnapped me just to tell me that?"
"Of course, not", Roxas giggled. "Yeah. We brought you here so that we could have a threesome."
"What!"
"Well, actually. We might have a foursome now. That guy is sorta hot."
"You guys are sick! And besides, Riku would never agree to that!"
"He would if that was the only way to keep you alive." Axel's eyes gave had a dangerous gleam to them.
"You wouldn't."
"Oh, don't worry. You probably won't even remember any of this later, anyway." Roxas said happily.
"Wha?"
Axel then injected Sora with the drug. (A/N: I have no idea what kind of drug, so you can say it's whatever you want. Crack, heroine, whatever you want. And for those of you who know what "Sweet Death" is, it has a teeny bit of that.)
Immediately, he felt it kick in. He couldn't comprehend anything. All he knew was that he felt... good...
Axel smiled and started kissing him. Roxas was behind Sora, kissing his neck. Then they both stopped, making Sora moan at the loss of contact.
"Sora. Do you like what we're doing to you?"
He was met with an enthusiastic nod.
"Good boy. Now do you want us to untie you?"
Again, there was a nod.
"Okay then. But you have to kiss me first."
So Sora and Axel locked lips and had a major make out session. By the end of which, both were breathless.
When they finally pulled away, Axel gave Roxas a nod and he untied him.
Then they stripped off his clothes and Axel went to get the camera.
Hey. Sorry it took so long. And I'm so sorry that everyone's so OOC. Roxas is just a happy fellow. Well the cliff hanger's there to keep you hanging. You'll understand soon enough. The next chapter's about Riku. That one might be short. I'm so sorry that I'm absolutely dreadful. Much luv.
