First off I would like to say to who ever reviewed as that if you could clarify it would be much appreciated because I have no idea on what your talking about. If it's the parseltongue and Dudley's small part I will say it was supposed to be like that but if not I haven't the foggiest idea on what you meant by Your spelling, punctuation and grammar is so horrendously awful it renders this story unreadable. I will also clear up I am 13 years old and I know my grammar isn't perfect but it isn't that awful is it?
"how are we here when we were just in a park." the snake asked bewildered. "I don't see a sssstick ssso how did you do that. Well at leassst now I know you are not a muggle that would have been dreadfully boring."
"I just wished to be somewhere else." I said.
8 years later
I cant believe it its been exactly 8 years since I was last at the Dursley's of course I still clearly remember my time there. As soon as I could walk I was set to work. Oh well I'm only a week away from my birthday. I no longer in the place I landed in I found out I had come out in Yellowstone park which was located in America I managed to during the week I stayed in the forest to figure out how use my magic. There was simply no other definition for it. I left the forest were I learned it was really just a massive park. I managed to put on a cute kid act and hitch a ride with a couple who were headed to California. They were heading there from their grandmas 100 birthday or something and they said later when I met them again when they had seen that him walking all alone along one of the lesser used part of the highway their harts just bleed for him. Anyway when he got to California he used his magic to buy a flat by copying a 20 dollar bill he found on the side of the road several times. He still had that 20 to. It came in handy when money was low but he never copied a lot that would seem kind of curious as to were it was coming from. He managed to enroll in a school without them noticing he didn't have parents. Though he supposed that was due to him modifying his memory. That had been a bit of an experiment. After that he never thought there to be any limitations to what he could do. He then went around looking for a job but apparently they were against child labor here so he just picked up several jobs to do for cash saying his family wasn't making enough money on there own for him to buy anything like toys or new clothes so he wanted to get some work for the money saying he didn't feel right about just taking money. Which he didn't.
The lady he told this to was fairly well off but all alone except for her 3 year old daughter Gale. She asked him if he could help pick up some while she took care of her because for some reason she refused to cry at all or ask for things. The lady whose name was Ebony Dark had to watch her constantly and had to make sure she ate because she ate so little it would be really bad if she skipped a meal. Ms. Dark as he took up calling her had adopted Gale after her parents abandoned her but a few hours old on the street. How she managed to survive a month on the street baffled everyone but Ms dark was glad she had. She started him off on small stuff giving him $5 a day which when he got home he duplicated once. He was a hard worker from when he was at the Dursley's and she was shocked when he told her he was three too. He and Gale grew up together and when he found she could do magic to he and her practiced together though she had more experience. Gale he found wasn't human and to make sure he didn't tell anyone she asked him to tell her a secret so he told her he lived alone. When we were both 6 we went over to the fight gym to practice while Ms Dark worked and they both found they had talent in all the areas and the boss of the place taught us for free since it was rare for someone to have so much talent when the first start and the fact they were so young added to that. Though after they had been taught everything that could learn from him when they were nine, though they still visit, they became rather paranoid and carried at least a dagger with them always and boy was he glad. You see me and Gale had been attacked by the local gang shortly after completing their training and having the weapons on hand had helped a lot. I still work for Ms dark but I sometimes go on random jobs. You know painting, cleaning, mowing lawns. It helped a lot that I was getting paid more so I manage to splurge on shopping every once in a while.
I was brought out of my musings by a tap at the window. I opened the window and let the two birds come in after I noticed the letters tied to their feet. One landed in front of gale the other in front of me. We took off the letters and red them.
Dear Mr. Potter
We are pleased to inform you have been accepted into Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. The list of supplies are includes in the letter. Please send response by April 23
Deputy headmistress
Minerva McGonagall
I have no idea I don't remember what was in the letter. Oh well hope you liked it even if it is depressingly short.