This a correction to fix the mistakes I made in the chapters so far. I am very sorry to those who do not like my stories and also, I want to thank those who have gave me advice.
Tris's pov
I am walking down the hall to my apartment, I also can't believe I am a leader in training. My dad is so proud of me, I found out the first day of my initiation that Max is my biological father. He had to give me up because my mother died during child birth. He tried to raise me but he couldn't do it by himself so he gave me up. Natalie took me in when he explained the situation to her but she did not really want me, so she choose to keep me anyway because she did not want me to grow up in the factionless sector. Max and I have a good bond now, I call him dad, father, and most importantly my best friend. He told Natalie at the last faction meating he went to that he finally told me the truth. Before I knew all of this, I always wandered why I was so fancitanted with dauntless. When Eric found out who I was he treated me a little different than the others but not by much. He and I are friends though and I like him, though once you get past his bad ass attitude he is a teddy bear.
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