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Tris pov

Eric and I walk into Max's office to see what he wants.

"I want to thank you both for coming here." He says with a big ass smile on his face. "You gave us no option Max." Eric says in an amused voice, it's actually kind of funny. "True, true I do not give you guys a choice but I really needed to talk to Tris." Max says it in such a serious voice. "Do you want me to step out so you to can talk?" Eric asks in such a serious tone. "That's all up to Tris." Max says then looks at me. "Are you okay with him staying Tris?" Max asks. "Eric can stay." I say in such a calm voice that Max looks at me like I have grown to heads. "Okay very well then you two take a seat." If I'm not mistaking Max looks so scared right now I wander what's going on.

"Tris first of all I want to say I'm sorry for springing this onto you now but you need to hear the truth." Max is seriously scaring the shit out of me right now and I'm not scared of anything. "Just spit it out Max whatever it is I can take it." I say in the boldest tone I have ever used before. "Okay, here goes nothing." He says. "Tris I am your biological father." He tells me. "What? How?" I ask in a shocked tone. "I had you right into my first year of being leader. My wife came to me after I got introduced into being a full faction leader and told me she was pregnant, 9 months later as she was giving birth to you the doctors had to do an emergency c-section because your head was to big." The fucker starts laughing as he is saying this ugh. "Anyways the doctor accidentally cut your mother's vein we thought she was going to be okay, they got the blood under control and stuff but that night she passed away."

"Are you okay Tris?" He asks with his voice full of concern. "Yea I'm fine just continue on with the story." I say to him. "Okay." He says. "I knew Natalie from back when she was living here, so in one of the faction meeting I pulled her off to the side and told her about you. She asked me how was supposed to raise a chiled that was meant to be in Dauntless and I told her to raise you as an abnegation chiled. I also wanted her to teach you the things of Dauntless and she did as I asked but I never gave up on you. Do you remember when you were little and your mom said stuff to you about your cool uncle Max?" He asks me with hope in his eyes. "No way your the brave, cool, mysterious, and over protective Max?" I ask all excited. He laughs at me "yep that's me." He tells me.

"Tris I want you to know I told you all of this because I want to be in your life, I want to be your leader, friend, protector and best of all father if you will let me." He tells me and I can tell he is being sincere so I might as well tell him now the secret I've been hiding for years.

"Yes I want you to be those things to me but there is something I half to tell you." I say to him "and before you ask yes Eric can stay." We all laugh at that. "so what is it you want to tell me?" He asks. "Andrew always treated me different. Always told me I was not meant to be with them, so I did some digging and found out about you. I never told anyone not even Natalie because deep down I knew I was not abnegation, I am and always was fully Dauntless." I say to them and they both looked shocked. "Yea your my daughter through and through." He says to me

"Max I have three questions." I say to him. "Ask away." He says in a cheerful voice. "1 can I call you dad? 2 can we tell the faction? 3 can I eat every meal with you?" I ask him in a shy tone. "The answer to all three questions are yes." He says to me. Then he does something I don't expect he picks me up and hugs me. But I gladly except it, now I know this my home and this is my family.

"Sir I have a question for you?" Eric says to my dad, I just love calling Max dad he is the dad I always wanted the one that loves me for me. "What is it Eric?" Max says back to him. "Can I date your daughter I promise I will have four score her. Oh and I will treat her right." Eric says to Max. I'm really surprised he wants to date me. "I guess I mean you guys do act the same but Eric hurt her and your dead." max says.

after that Eric and I leave the room because Andrew and Jack called for a debriefing on the next faction meeting.

"So what does my girlfriend want to do?" Eric asks me in a sweet tone. "I want to get tattoos and piercings." I say and he starts laughing. "Okay." He says.

What type of tattoo do you think Tris will get? how do you think Eric will react to Tris's tattoos