Eric pov

I can't believe that Tris is Max's daughter. She captured my attention as soon as she jumped onto that roof. Her and I are exactly the same, I went through my initiation the same way she is going through hers. I'm already falling for her hard and if anybody looks at her or touches her in the wrong way they are dead. I have no idea what this girl has done to me but I can almost say that she is the one for me.

"Eric babe come here and help me look for a tatto." I can't believe she wants me so involved in her life. I can't even believe she said yes to date me. "Okay babe." I say to her and she smiles at me with this biggest smile. "I really like this one." She says to me. It's like the one on my forearm, it's a maze that leads to the Dauntless flames. "I like that one a lot babe." I say to her and her smile gets that much more brighter.

"What would you like?" Tori asks her. "This one it's just like Eric's but instead of it being a plain maze can you make it lead to the Dauntless flames?" Tris asks her. "Sure but I can do you one better how would you like it to start from Abengation then do the maze and end at Dauntless?" Tori asks her. "That would be so cool thanks." Tris is so happy and excited it's really cute.

1 hour later tris is done she ended up getting it on both arms. I can tell she is really proud of it, to be honest I am to. Tris also got some piercings two above her eyebrow like mine and she got her ears done, plus her lip. She looks really fucking sexy.

"Tris are you ready to go meet your dad in the cafeteria for dinner?" I ask her. She leans up and kisses me for the first time, wow her lips are so soft even with the piercing. I am really addicted to her. "Yes I'm ready to go eat and see dad." She says to me. "Oh and Eric I really like kissing you." She says to me and we start laughing, we walk into the cafeteria just like that laughing and holding hands.

"Wow baby girl you look a lot different than I saw you an hour ago." Max says to her smiling his ass of. He hugs her then goes to get his food and Tris and I get ours. We sit at the table with the leaders and Max already told them that Tris is his daughter. Tris is also sitting between Max and I. Four starts walking over here.

"Tris I know you are new here but this is the leaders table." He starts to say to her but she cuts him off. "Meaning what goody toe shoes?" She says it in a really snarky tone. "Don't you think that if they did not want me to sit here they would tell me to move?" Oh shit she is really on a roll Max is looking at her with the proudest look on his face. "I mean really goody toe shoes I'm siting between my dad and my boyfriend so I really think it's best you move along before you embarrass yourself more." She has this crazy glare it's almost worse than mine and that's saying a lot. "Who's your dad and boyfriend? Last I checked you left your dad in Abengation stiff." He says to her. "Eric I got this one." Max says to me pissed off.

"Four I suggest you watch the way you talk to my daughter." Max says with his arms crossed and a hard glare on his face. "Si-sir I had no idea." Four says. "Well now you know shit head call her stiff again and this whole faction will know who you really are Four." Shit I've seen Max pissed but never to this extent. "Wait sir if you don't mind me asking who is her boyfriend." Really this shit head can't see that my arm is around Tris. "Look at who is holding her and use your fucking brain." Max says to Four.

"wow Tris is already fucking her way into initiation." Four says. That's it that is the last straw for me but before I can get up Max has Four pinned to the floor. "Say one more thing you little fucker and your ass will be in the factionless sector." Max says to him. After that Four leaves and Tris has to go to the dorms.

"Eric want to walk with Tris and I to the Dorms?" Max asks me. "Yes." I say to him, and we start heading to the dorms. "Thank you dad for defending me today." Tris says to max and he hugs her. "Never thank me for defending you its my job, you are my daughter Tris and I'll be dammed if anyone hurts you." He says to her in a sincere voice. We get to the dorms. "Keep it clean infront of me you two." Max laughs. I give Tris a quick peck. "Goodnight baby." I say to her. "Goodnight baby girl I'll see you in the morning for breakfast." Max says and kisses her forehead. After that we both walk off.

How do you think Tris's first night in the dorm will go?

I am once again very sorry for the errors my story has, I am trying to work on it.