I am so so sorry if the fight scene is not good I have not written one and a little worried how it turned out.
Tris's Pov
I watch as Eric Enters the ring. Four smirks at Eric as he gets in his fighting stance that he taught us. I'm biting my lip as I see Eric throws a punch to four's face that throws his ass to the ground. " You know that even if you beat me it just shows her dangerous you can be." I look over at Eric and shake my head so he knows I don't believe anything Four is saying. Four tries to kick Eric's leg out from under him but Eric is a fucking tank and does not fall right about the same time Eric kicks Four in his balls and he doubles over I start to laugh my ass off while most guys are cringing. I see Eric is about to end the fight because while Four his doubled her he knees him in the stomach and punches Four's nose as Four looks up I see he has blood pouring down his face. Eric looks at me quickly and then jams his elbow in Four's neck with that last hit Four is out cold. I smile victoriously I know I was worried and that's because I have a major fear of Four. I look up from where I'm sitting to see Eric looking at me with concern I just smile and hug him "I'm so proud of you". he just smiles and bends down to kiss me. "he Al can you get Four to the infirmary." he smiles at the scared look Al gives him.
"Okay you shitheads listen up you all saw your first fight now its your turn." everybody gives him the look of fear except me since i know I'm a damn good fighter. "first jumper and last jumper in the ring now." damn his voice is loud when he yells but I do as I'm told I don't even remember who the last jumper was as I see the tall girl standing next to Peter step in the ring I can beat her. I notice that she is tall that one thing going for her, another is the fact she is built like a damn tank. Okay Tris breathe you can do this I get in the stance Eric fought in. "Okay Molly and Tris your fight starts now." well now I remember the fucking name thanks babe I laugh to myself Molly takes a swing for my face but I'm able to block it and throw a punch to her stomach and nail it. "Don't let the stiff beat you." I hear someone yell. Bitch throws a weak punch to my arm but i swipe her feet out from under her as she falls she hits her head and I see a little blood coming from the back of her head. I get on top of her and slam her head into the matt and that's it she is out cold. "Congratulations Tris you are the winner of this round" I look over and see Eric is smiling. "that's my little girl." His voice makes everyone turn their heads leave it to dad. "How long you've been standing there old man?" he laughs and shakes his head "After I saw one of the initiates carrying Four to the infirmary." Eric laughs "Everybody leave for lunch I expect you back here at 2:00 any later you will be factionless." everyone runs out of the room.
"We are so proud of you Tris." Dad looks at me and smiles as Eric puts his arm around my waist from behind. "I say we will be the best damn fighter we have had in a while well since Eric." Eric laughs after dad says that. " I agree." Eric lets go of my waist and kisses my temple as the three of us start to walk toward the mess hall for lunch. "Eric since Four is passed out in the infirmary what do you plan on doing with the initiates after lunch." Eric just smirks "gun training." I smile and shout "yayyyy." like a little kid dad just laughs with Eric. "Okay babe lets get food then I can scare more shit out of the initiates." dad just smiles "I'm going to help you plus I wanna see my daughter go through her initiation." I look up and smile at him, even though he was not there all my life he really is the best dad anyone can ask for. I grab a burger and fires while the both of them grab a grilled cheese and apple slices and we sit. "Dad how long does initiation last?" he looks up from his food "Normally 7 to 9 weeks but this time with all the cuts being made it should last 3 to 4 weeks." I cannot wait to be a full member.
"Hey Pansycakes." Uriah yes as he wraps his arm around my shoulder and he also uses that word all of the time but we all love him. "You know that we love you but please get your arm off of my girl." that's another thing I love about Eric but it also annoys the shit out of me. "Dude she is my fucking sister but not by blood." Dad and I start to crack up laughing. I look at the clock and see its 1:45 "shit Eric it 1:45 and it takes 6 minutes to get to the training room." the three of us get up quickly and run to the training room I'm faster than dad and Eric both its fucking great. I walk in the door and see almost everyone is there except Peter and Drew yayy I think they will be factionless. I look at the clock and its 1:56 just as I start to celebrate they walk in smirking.
"Okay people gun training." I watch as dad and Eric both start to shoot the targets. When they finally let us at the gun it takes me 2 seconds to shoot the target in the dead center. "Fuck yea babe." Leave it to Eric to shout next thing I know I feel a sharp pain in my leg. "where the Fuck did you get that shithead?" dad is screaming at the top of his lungs. "ummm the dauntless born trainer gave it to me." Drew cowers down.
UH Oh what did he have and why did Lauren give it to him? I am so so sorry if I messed up on the fight scene. If you like this story would you read another Eris story if I did one? I would still continue this one.