Okay quick author's note, I have the end done, but I don't have the middle part done to my liking, I might just add a little then end it, the story would make sense but might not be up to standard, and trust me, I have read several stories that set the bar pretty high.
I am sorry about the long overdue update, I have been busy and quite frankly floundering I have had… well in this stories case, still have writer's block. If you have any ideas I would love to hear/read them.
For those of you who have read "Getting back Up" I am going to finish it, I am also having writer's block on it.
I started one based on the last Las Vegas crossover that was on last week (I loved it… in fact I don't know about you but this whole season has been outstanding so far) But the story could be massive, and I want to finish it before I put it out.
One last thing, these last two chapters have direct dialogue from the show, with my take on the internal monologue added. That's why the beginning of the chapters look the way they do.
Any way that's all for know but as always if you see any grammar or spelling mistakes, please let me know I well fix it, I am a writer not an editor and it shows ;)
(Jordan)
"Hey hold that elevator!" Yes, its Woody, maybe I can get some answers… no he's running scared again
"Oh no no no no…"
"Morning to you to Woody"
"I'll take the next car."
"Don't be ridicules"
"I refuse to be an accessory." That's my farm boy.
"Look, I won't do it this time, okay." Sorry Woody the whopper of a story is already forming in my pretty little head
"You do it every time we ride in an elevator together." It's only because I care… really.
(Woody)
Damn it Jordan you are going to be the death of me faster then the cancer, I was in Dr Macy's office telling him about the drugs I was taking, we have an appointment day after tomorrow and I wanted to let him know, when I heard the shots, I panicked at first, I knew Jordan was out there, hell my 'family' is here, I passed Lily in the front, and Nigel and Bug in trace on the way to Dr Macy's office. I had just let him know, so I have not gotten to hear his reaction. Should be fun…
I so much enjoyed the 'interrogation' of the shooting 'victim'; I could blame it in the drugs. Dr Davis said I could get irritable but well I can't stand that type of person, Perverts, rapist, the worst scum in the world. I got yelled at for an hour, by Captain Frakes, after the deal with Gordon the Leviathan serial killer, but he knew about how Gordon had goaded me in to attacking him, so no serious punishment was given, still I should be able to control myself better. I doubt old Sammy boy is going to say anything about it, and I did get the information I needed. I still don't believe that the brother knows nothing, something this big you can't just hide; besides, this guy seems off somehow I can't put my finger on it.
Once again, I'm walk away, my legs still slightly shaking, damn it Jordan, I really wish you would stop taking so many risks. It just reinforces the fact that she can't find out about my cancer, she might do something even dumber then taking on an armed man with basically nothing to loss, like follow me around and try to 'take care of me' but no she had to go in to the house and save the day, and I thought I had a superhero complex.
