u/4113075/TheGreatGodzilla
Okay so this isn't a chapter but a QA my first one at most. This reviewer is now my second favorite because he or she or they brought in questions along with information that I never knew about. So, I will be answering most of his questions as best I can, so let's get started. And the link to his profile is up top and make sure to follow this person.
TheGreatGodzilla chapter 3 . 9h ago
This story is definitely good and quite interesting for sure. However, I have to say like what the others said here. Why is Izuku, who is Spider-Man in this universe, is being chased by two pro-heroes for no good reason? Did he commit vigilantism yet? Also, you spelled Ms. Marvel as Mrs. Marvel.
The reason why he is chased by two heroes is because these two have different reasons. For Eraser Head: He wants an answer as to why Spider Man was not effective to his quirk. Now, before he encountered Spider Man, he was called in because the guard didn't know if the 'villain' had some kind of quirk that in a form of a super strength kind. As for Endeavor: He has too much pride. When he got the call about a quirk user with a possible super strength he saw it as an opportunity to boost his popularity, but since he escaped using more than one 'quirk' he wants to find him and show Spider Man and the world who is really the strongest ever. And did he commit vigilantism: No not really, the reason for being so is because he did escape the police and used his quirk he is a villain for now. And also I thought 'Mr. Marvel' was spelled out as 'Mrs. Marvel' you know like you would call a teacher or a manager or a corporate leader, so thank you for telling.
And since you decided to bring Dante Pertuz, aka Inferno, into the picture, will the rest of the team happen to be mainly inspired from Marvel Rising: Secret Warriors? You know, the team that has Squirrel Girl, Quake, Patriot, America Chavez, Ironheart and Lockjaw.
Yes I will bring them into the fanfic and I am planning on giving them an arc actually.
Also, you do realize that Kamala Khan and the rest of her family are Muslims, right? While it is not mandatory for Izuku to convert to Islam, it is recommended. However, the children born from him and Kamala are definitely raised as Muslims.
I knew her family was born from the middle eastern, and also I don't use the M word. To me it sounds like a racist word and when I tried to say it, I felt like some kind of creature was going to pop out of my stomach and eat my face. And I never knew that Izuku would need to convert to I word. Another word that I feel like poison for me because it sounds racist. And I never knew that if they have kids that they will become M word.
By the way, will Toga also become part of the harem like Kamala and Ochaco? I hope so because aside from shipping Izuku with Ochaco, I also like to ship him with Toga as well. To be exact, I would not mind if he has these three women as his wives.
No, I'm not planning on bringing Toga into his harem. I think that Kamala will just feel as if she is being the most targeted of all.
So in your story, who are part of the Avengers? I can see Iron Man, Captain America, Captain Marvel, Black Widow and Hawkeye but where are Hulk, Thor, Ant-Man, Wasp and Vision? And aside from the Avengers, do the Guardians of the Galaxy and the Masters of Mystic Arts of Kamar-Taj exist? Well, the Guardians of the Galaxy will be required for sure since in this story, quirks most likely seemed to have something the origins from the Terrigen Mists created by the Kree Empire when they were experimenting on humans more than ten thousand years ago.
Yes the Avengers will be here. Hulk, Thor, Ant-Man, Wasp and Vision will be here as well, but like Marvel's Spider Man, they will meet him in episodes with team ups with the two not anyone else. But, Widow, Iron Man, Hawkeye and S.H.I.E.L.D will keep an eye on both Izuku and Spider Man. The reason why they will be watching the two without knowing that they're the same person is because; Spider Man is more creative and more agile than anyone else along with his strategic thinking. But with Izuku; the reason why they will keep an eye on him is because of his detailed hero analyst journals, because they think that those books will bring down any hero. As for the Guardians and the Mystic Arts they will be there as well. And also quirks didn't come from the Terrigen Mist that will still be for the Inhumans, and the same thing with quirks, because quirks came from genetic mutation while Inhumans were created.
And if that's the case, then that means Attilan may still exist along with the Inhuman Royal Family. After all, the Inhuman Royal Family existed for more than thousands of years without aging. So to live a few more centuries into the world where their population is now widespread around the globe would not make them aged much. Speaking of which, does the word "Inhumans" are still being used to describe the people with quirks in your story? Or is the word considered to be pejorative by the time when quirks were beginning to become the norm?
The word 'Inhuman' is used to describe someone without a quirk, because it was natural for people to get powers while others didn't and to some, that was Inhuman. Inhuman is used as pejorative as a slur for quirk users to call the quirkless. And, no it will not be pejorative for the time when quirks were becoming a thing. As for the royal family; they will still be the royal family.
Do you plan to have more villains from Marvel appear as well? I can see those who are members of the Sinister Six are actually being part, or at the very least, allies of the League of Villains here. But it seemed to be the former from what I saw in the preview of the next chapter. And while the Sinister Six are incorporated into the League of Villains, those like Exile and Sheath may become part of the Meta Liberation Army here. Heck, you can even also go to have the Army is actually either in service of the Kree Empire or of Maximus the Mad. I can see someone like Maximus being the inspiration for Destro and his son in this universe. After all, Maximus wanted the world to be solely ruled by the Inhumans. But if you decided to have the Re-Destro and his army serve the Kree Empire instead, I can see the someone like Hala the Accuser is being sent by the Supreme Intelligence to form a pact and assist them in their quest to takeover the Earth on behalf of the Kree Empire in exchange of allowing the Earth to become an autonomous province within the Kree Empire.
Yes I am planning on having some villains from Marvel appear as well. Also, there will be some members of the Sinister Six who will be a part of the L.O.V. but there will be others that are rogue, then the ones of the L.O.V. will become a rogue and be a part of the Sinister Six. Also, no Exile and Sheath will not be part of the Meta Liberation Army.
One more thing, I believe that during the early days when quirks were beginning to appear more and more, the government responded by creating an army of killer robots called the Slayers to deal with them. The Slayers, of course, are actually the adaptations of the Spider-Slayers from Spider-Man. So by taking out the word "Spider" and putting them into the roles similar to the Sentinels from the X-Men, they will be the ready-to-go killer robots for the Inhumans when quirks were becoming the norm. The reason I told you this is because the Sentinels originated from the X-Men. So it will make no sense if something from the X-Men will appear out of the blue.
And no, the appearance and reference of Slayers won't be in here.
P.S: I think the powerful alien civilizations that would be good for this universe would be the Chitauri, the Klyntar, the Kree Empire and the Rigellian Empire. As for the Nova Corps, I really don't know if it should have a domain of its own or not.
P.S.S: Are you planning to adapt some story arcs from Spider-Man into this story? If so, I would love to see some arcs like Alien Costume Saga, If This Be My Destiny...! and Maximum Carnage.
I just might. I think I will do Spider-Island, G-Nation, The Raft, and possibly the final showdown with Norman.