Oy I am Nasita,formely known as Nothing of importance well i got rid of my depressing ness and decided to writemy first Fan Fiction review i don't care if its all flames just review please puppy dog eyes
Disclaimer:I don't own Naruto but i do own two roleplay characters from a Role Play my friends and I started way back when and are still doing.
Chapter I the Characters get introduced
A tear rolled down my cheek as my mother and father were laid next to each other in the soaking soil I clutched onto Sen (my brother)hand that was 10 years ago.My name is Nasita Dalqu I am 16 years old I have blond hair that goes to the middle of myback.I have blue/green/grey eyes I am abnormally pale.I am hated by the Elves for my Vampire blood vise versa with the Vampires.I have watched my Mother,Father,bestfriend,boyfriend,Aunts and Uncles all die as I sat there unable to help them a few years after my parents died my brothers Sen and Nuro went different ways when I turned 8 years old I grew up beleiving I was an Elf when I turned ten I suddenly went from being disgusted with blood and wanting joy and peace,I adored blood I want pain and war I went from learning how to use a bow to save smaller animals to a katanna right up to the fact I lick the blade clean of blood.A girl once insulted me I plunged the kattanna through her heart and lapped the blood up like a puppy who has been outside all day without water (don't do that to your dog please it isn't healthy for them and they could die if its a chawowow I actually don't care what you do to the disgusting thing).The Elders gave me one more chance to prove that I wasn't a savage vampire,One day a boy decided it would be funny to tease me with blood from a baby deer.My elven blood screamed to stay in line but I listened to my vampire side it told me not to trust elves they already betrayed me,I slaughtered the boy and the entire village using the element of water to drown the strong ones.I left the children alone but everyone else I killed.The Elders grew angry andused there elment of the wood (Gaia,land,trees that sorta stuff) to create an Island it had no food of anysort I had to take the few things I had and live on the island the vampires soon came to send me things to eat they slowly began to accept me.I live in a hollowed out willow tree,it has know doors or windows my only entrance is to go up a balcony hidden in the tallest branch so I have to climb or jump to get to it.(I forgot to mention early that I use the element of water oops .) "Ino were are we"I here a boy say exactly below the balcony in which I am sitting on making another bow for the elven army,yup I am exiled to an island to make bows for my enemies so I make the good ones for the vampire archers and make the elven ones from rotting twigs,I have my ways of getting blood.Seducing works for the young guys,no women ever come on the island because the men are the adventurers and all that,women sit at home take care of childeren and clean,I break the older guys necks in half,thats pretty much how I get blood I kill different ways but I don't feel like describbing them.I put the bow down,take the knife and cut my hair ribbon so my hair is down I stand brushing the wood shavings from my fighting kimono "Choji what are you doing you don't know if thats poisonus or not"A female voice comes from the ground.I fix my fighting kimono and jump down from the balcony.Land with a soft thud I hear a gasp.I turn around "Do you know were we are"A fat boy says stumbling out from a blackberry bush "Your both intrusing on my island,this is the sad country of Nvade"I say the boy is wearing a strange bandanna that has a metal band with a weird inscripiton on it,two brown puff balls stick out I assume is his hair.He is dressed in weird clothes (I can't remember what Chouji wears EEEEK).I hear a rabbit hopping (If you are a rabbit I advise you not to read this next part you have been warned) behind me I flex my claws turn around grab the thing and bite its neckand suck the blood I throw the dried carcass into some bushes.I wipe my mouth turn around the boy named Chouji looks pale and disgusted."Whats wrong with you"I say "Your Physco you just drank blood from a rabbit what do you think you are a vampire"He says "I don't think i'm a vampire noone wants to be vampire they want to be elven kind.
"I say "Vampires don't exist the girl says coming out from bush she has a headband with the same design as the boys bandana thats tied around her waist. She's dressed in a purple dress and bandages without any blood on them."Cleric"I hiss at her "No,Clerics don't exisit"she says with a snotty voice.I close my eyes sigh and touch the japanese symbol for water on my left wrist (left is my strenght right is defense)I open my eyes to see the one called Ino put her fingers together along with Chouji I press my right wrist to make giant bubbles surrond them like a cage "Oh so your mages well I can't do anything with your blood the mermaids can deal with you"I say."Your from the village hidden in the mist aren't you"Chouji says."You call me a deceiving mermaid"I say poison lacing in my voice.I flick my wrist and the bubbles rise and follow me to the beach.I start saying in Elvish"Oh stupid fisheis were are you?" "Nami were coming a voice calls from the sea"soon two mermaids that have green tails and black hair,they are laying in the sand there bodies being washed with the waves "I have mages for you"I say "OH we want the fat one don't we Sasami"one with green eyes says "Maruka no we want the skinny girl she could help us dearly collecting the shells"Sasami says "Take 'em both same price as it is for just one I feel generous today"I say,"Oh Nami thats nice of you we have to give you it"Maruka says."Huh"I say tilting my head to the side "It was layed last night the mother died our people can't take care of it"Maruka says pushing a blueish egg about the size of an ostrich egg.I grab it flick my wrist to make the bubbles surrounding the two follow the mermaids I get inside the forrest and the egg starts to hatch I put it down and sit on a fallen tree as parts of the shell go flying I laugh looking at two wings and legs trying to walk I get up and start to pry off parts of the shell, "Mama"the dragon says in it's native tounge which I learned from my brothers "No I am Nasita"I say kneeling to eye level with the dragon "Mama"she says defiantly I roll my eyes she yawns I laugh quietly pick her up and stick her in my pouch.and quietly walk to my tree I start to jump up the branches trying hard not to disturb the water dragon because you disturb a water dragon hell breaks loose.I get to the platform open my bear skin door, yeah there are bears,unicorns,hell hounds,squirrells,rabbits and birds.Unicorns taste disgusting so the Elders put them on the island and bears to get on my nerves Hell hounds are constantly howling and fighting the sqiurrels are useless I live off rabbits birds and fish.I walk over to my straw mat I have a down bed but I prefer hard surfaces (NOT LIKE THAT YOU PERVERTS)grab the pillow remove my belt which holds all my pouches I carefully take the sleeping dragon put her on the pillow,carfully pick up the pillow and put the dragon on a dresser I quickly walk over to my other dresser and pull out a speghetti strapped light blue silk dress I shed out of my work clothes and change.I take my porcline black ocarina stand outside and play a haunting melody the forrest goes silent,I finish playing the ocarina and go into my house,in case your wondering my home has three levels my room with stairs that lead to a kitchen beneath the kitchen is a storage room.I lay down on my mat the next thing I know the dragon is curled up beside my stomach (I'm sleeping on ny side).
"Your name is now Dane any objections?"I ask the small aborable bundle of joy she just growls contently I fall asleep."What a drag were are those two"I hear someone say below my balcony I look at Dane she is gets up and flies to the door "Dane get back here"I say she shakes her head defientely and flies down to the ground.I run out to my balcony and jump down forgetting about the way im dressed thankfully the dress dosen't fly up.I land "Your kinda cute"I say walking up to him, his jaw drops I smirk playfully and hug him I tilt his head to the side,I look at the soft flesh oh so long has it been since i tasted that sweet tangy blood."Shikamaru move you lazy bum she'll suck out your blood she did it to a rabbit and sucked it dry"the annoying Ino calls to him i am just about to take a bite when he moves away."Sasuke wouldn't fall for that trick he is so smart"Ino says dreamily."Shikamaru was it come with me I want to talk to you ok."I say grabbing his wrist and dragging him up the tree.We get to my balcony he looks at the dried carcasses around of him and looks green "Sorry usually its just me up here i say kicking the bodies off the balcony so they land on Ino."Ewwwwwwwwwwwww"she shreiks I smile."So what is it"he says,"Well I have a little proposal for you I'll help you get back to were ever you came from if you get me off this damn island."I say he looks completeley out of it and is "Muhahahaing" I sweat drop pick up a vampire bow and hit him over the head with it."What was that for?"he says rubbing his head "Well I am going to erase Ino yours and Choji's memory of me and this place so when you go back to where ever you came from you can't tell people about me."Are there others like you?"he asks "Not like me I am the only vampire/elf but there are Elves,Vampires,Dog Demons,Wolf Demons,Cat Demons,Ogers,Dwarfs,Humans,gnomes,and Fairies at least those are the only races that speak common tongue."I say "Whats the currency here?"he says sitting down "Yen and Rupees the smaller races use Rupees there easier to carry,So Why do you all have those headbands with metal plates are you turning to metal as the rest of us?"I ask "The headbands are part of the village and what do you mean you are turning to metal?"he asks staring out at the rising suns."Well the people of this land are being cursed those who do not obey Pyro will slowly turn to metal by his clerics like me i say lifting up the bottom of the skirt slightly so he can see the scales of metal that cover from mly ankels to my knees."Pyro?" "Pyro was cloned by 6 of the most powerful people of the age Nascue Cu'es the Elven Princess,VAshez Dalqu the vampire King,Wolverine Gami of the North,Rogue Tanaka the Lady of the East,Lord Sesshomaru Taisho the Lord of the western Lands and Kagura Oni of the Winds.Pyro's accomplise Perye was cloned from the heroes Friends ( Neo the coward,Natsumi the theif, Itakuro the assasin Jakuura the liar Moinokie the avenger and Bishina the betrayer)she was somehow able to persuade there sons in joining Pyro inc"I say "WHAT IS THAT THING"Shikamaru yells pointing to a...
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bye my beloved peoples who wanna kill me
Nasita