Upadate! This one sounded a bit weird to me, but I still like it muchly. Kindly read and review.
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Fade
The journey has been
Long, but I've learned at least all
Hearts must fade, someday
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Just think about it. Doesn't it remind you of Kenshin?
I was thinking about "Shimmer" by Fuel when I wrote this, as some people probably guessed. I found out a little later that maybe, it was a little too similar to some of the lyrics, though that was unintentional at the time… I wasn't actually listening to the song when I wrote it. But you know:
And I have found all that shimmers in this world must fade away
Isn't that similar? I was a little annoyed. But, but… OH WELL.
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