this is the updated version, i found i had some Uh-OOs...so i fixed them :D i sortof changed it to go with the story because i decided i wanted to keep writing it
--next chapter should be coming soon!
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He was the king of 10th grade. She was the girl no one seems to notice. They both happened to be at the same football game but in different places. But oh, how they were in the perfect spots.
Riku was talking with his friends under the bleachers of the football stadium. Their High School football team was losing anyway so they didn't pay attention to the game. "Hey Riku, how come you and Jennifer aren't going out anymore?" Roxas, one of the guys in the group, asked.
"Uh... well, I guess I just didn't feel right with her." Riku replied.
"Naww...I think Riku has got himself a crush on someone else...a certain artistic blonde in our English class, if I'm not mistaken." Sora, one of their friends chimed in. At this Riku just gave him a death glare and pushed him into some mud that was left from the rain. Everyone laughed at him.
What a sight. Olette and Kairi were having ANOTHER screaming contest. Namine was covering her ears and laughing at her two friends. They were standing at the very top of the very edge of the stands. Namine was on the end. Finally, Kairi ran out of breath and started gasping for air. Olette screamed "WOO I WIN AGAIN!"
"AANNNDDD...OLLETE, YOU ARE THE UN-DEFETED CHAMPION OF THE FOOTBALL/PEPRALLY SCREAMING CONTESTS! WAT ARE YOU GONNA DO NOW?" Namine yelled.
"IM GONNA START THE WAVE!" Ollete yelled back. Unfortunately, they were the only ones on the very top row, but that didn't stop them. Ollete jumped up and through her hands in the air screaming and Kiari did the same and so did Namine after them. Ollete went to start it again, but when she jumped up, she slipped knocking Kiari over, who pushed Namine, like dominos. Namine was on the end and when Kiari bumped into her, she flew off!
All of the guys under the bleachers heard screaming and then more screaming. Then, they saw a small blonde girl on the very edge lose her balance and start to fall.
"OOO!" some of the people said, as they watched the small figure fall quickly to the ground.
The feeling of fright and excitement rushed through Namine's body. She didn't even have time to scream when she realized she was falling. Then, a face flashed across her memory. It was the boy, with long silver hair who always seemed to be staring at her. Why she thought of him at that moment, she didn't know.
Riku and his friends looked up and before they realized what had happened, Namine fell right on top of Riku.
She felt herself hit something hard, but the thing felt so warm and she felt safe there. She was afraid to open her eyes. Then she realized she was crying, so she tried to wipe the tears away. She felt the thing move under her and she held onto it tighter, she felt like she couldn't walk. The pain in her leg was so bad, she felt herself start to cry again.
"Are you ok?" Riku asked her. She had fallen right in his arms and knocked him to the ground. He was still holding her there, because he saw she was crying. She finally opened her eyes. When Namine looked right at him, he felt like he could melt. He absolutely loved her eyes, and when he noticed they were crying, he couldn't help but brush the tears gently away from her face. "It's ok, you're safe now"
She looked back and smiled at him.
"TOLD YA!" Sora yelled in triumph.
Riku and Namine blushed. They realized they were being watched by almost half the school.
"umm... so are you ok?"
"I-I d-don't know...m-my leg really hurts!" Namine stutterd.
People were starting to crowd around them to see what happened. A teacher came running up. "IS SHE OK?" the teacher yelled as she pushed her way through the crowd.
"I don't know. She said her leg hurts." Riku told her. When he looked back at Namine he realized the strange position they were in, and their classmates were stareing at them like it was the cutest thing in the world. Riku tried to get up, but when he moved her, she yelped in pain. His first reaction was to hold her tighter. She was still crying a bit, so he said, "it's ok, you're safe now."
Oh, how he really wanted her to stay in his arms forever. He barely knew her, but he lliked her so much. He felt like he was holding the world. He was suddenly snaped back into reality when he saw the teacher feeling Namine's leg.
"It's definatly broken"
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Namine woke with a start. She had another dream, and he was in it. "OOWWW!" she jumped up to see her little sister sitting on her leg. "WOULD YOU GET OFF OF ME!" Namine yelled at her. It was 2 a.m.
"UHhhhggg..."
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Riku's eyes flickered open. He was haveing such a nice dream... she was in it. Again. He looked at his clock. It was 2 in the morning.
"UHhhhggg..."
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how u like? i sortof fixed it to be a dream type deal...and if you didn't get it, they had the same dream