Hey guys, Crimson here and before you read the chapter, please read what I'm about to tell you first. First of all, this is a Kanzaki Loves Nagisa, but with a brand new storyline with a ton of changes from dialog, different interaction and most importantly, different scenes. You see, when I asked KyrieEleisonElise could she draw some artwork for me, it inspired me to write Kanzaki Loves Nagisa again. But I wanted to try a different approach this time and not follow the original and previous remake storyline. So you could say this is a totally different story right? Well yes as I decided to change the new as well to something even better from 'Kanzaki Loves Nagisa' to 'A Captured Heart'. But I will explain more at the end of the chapter and I hope you guys will enjoy it as I tried my hardest writing this.
One Year Ago
Yukiko P.O.V
After climbing down the mountain, I decided to head home while trying to avoid the other students as I possibly can, but unfortunately I ran into a couple of girls who surrounded me. Do you think you can simply walk around here like as if it's your personal playground? Know your place bitch!" One of the girls told me which I remained silent as I was too afraid from saying anything back due to me being surrounded by them. "Can't you talk?" I heard one of the girls and I can feel myself shivering. "Please... Just leave me alone." After I had said this, the girl in front of me pushed me to the ground while the others snickered. "Do you really think that your better than us, just because your more prettier than us?"You should be working at the farm, rather than coming to this school you ugly tramp. " Their leader insulted me which the others laughed.("Why does this have to happen to us and why is it allowed?") I thought as they continued to harass me.
A Minute Later
After the three girls had finished harassing me, they all walked away laughing which I then had to pick up my school equipment as they emptied my bag which they then started to stomp on everything. "Great... Now I have to go to the store and buy new school equipment." I said to myself as continued picking up my school equipment, but I heard footsteps heading towards me which I began to prepare for the worse. "Do you want any help picking your stuff up?" Once I heard the person offering to help me, I instantly looked up, and it was a guy from the main campus. "Why are you offering to help me? Aren't you going to make fun of me like what the others do?" I'd asked him which he knelt down and started to help me. "I'm just not that type of person who picks on others and besides, you seriously look like you need the help." He replied to me which makes me think that he doesn't know that I'm from Class-E.
("There's got to be a reason why he's helping me, as everyone else would of looked at me and laugh.")I thought while watching him as I'm worried that he might try something once he'd finished helping me. "Here you go." He said to me which we both stood up and right as I was abut to collect my stuff, I've noticed he had a warm smile. ("He has such a gentle smile... So much, it makes it look like he's harmless ("He's got a such a gentle smile... So much, it makes him look like he's harmless.") I thought as I collected my stuff from him.
"Thank you for helping me and I do appreciate it, but are you sure it was wise to help somebody like me?" I'd asked him as he doesn't seem to be trying anything, but he is giving me a confused look which could mean he doesn't know which class I'm in. "Wait... Are you from Class-E?" He'd asked me which I sighed in relief as the way he said it makes it sound like he's harmless. "Yeah... that's the reason why those three girls were bullying me, because I was from Class-E." I replied back to him and even after I told him that I was from Class-E, he doesn't seem like he cares that I am. "Well, you don't have to worry as I'm not like the others." He replied back to me with a smile. "I'm glad that your aren't as your such a sweet person... Wait, I didn't get your name." I replied with a smile and I decided to ask him for his name. "Well, my name is Shiota Nagisa but please call me by my first name due to difficulties with my family." Nagisa introduced himself which I decided to do the same. "I'm Kanzaki Yukiko and it's a pleasure to meet you Nagisa-kun." I told with a smile and it was on that day fourth, we've became friends.
A week later
Nagisa P.O.V
Because it's a saturday, Karma and I are hanging out which we'll eating our lunch at a fast food restaurant, but suddenly Karma calls my name. "So Nagisa-kun, do you know there's rumours going around about you dating some Class-E girl, so is it true?" Karma asked me which made me choke on my food due to what he'd asked me. "Wait! What rumours?" I'd asked him to make sure if I heard him correctly. "Well, there's a rumour flying around saying that you've been dating some Class-E girl and some say that she'd seduced you. But I doubt that the rumour are true anyway." Karma told me which I now understand why some people were giving me the odd stares, because I've been talking to a girl from Class-E in the past few days. "It's true that I've been talking to somebody from Class-E, but I've only talked to her twice, so it's not like I'm dating her or anything." I replied which I heard Karma chuckle. "I knew there had to be a reason for this rumour, but I'm guessing that some idiot saw you and thought you were dating her." Karma explained, but it was only a matter of time when rumours about me spending time with a Class-E student will begin to fly around "You're probably right about that Karma-kun. But then and again, it was only a matter of time for a rumour to fly around about me spending time with someone from Class-E. I replied back to with a sigh which he took notice.
"What's wrong? Are you afraid that the others might try to do something to you, due to you spending time with someone from Class-E?" Karma asked me which he got it correct about what's weighing on my mind. "Yeah... I'm afraid what the others might try to do something to me or even worse, I'll get into trouble with the school for what I did." I replied back to him. "Then, just stick with me for now on until the rumours die down, as they won't mess with you if your with me." Karma told me which made me smile in relief as it's true that you shouldn't mess with him as he has a infamous reputation in the school. "Thanks Karma-kun, I owe you one." I gave Karma my thanks which he chuckled. "No mention it Nagisa-kun, we'll buddies after all." He replied back to me and we continued to eat our meal.
Two hours later
"These rumours... they were created because I didn't mind my own business... Now, there's people who are thinking that I'm dating someone from Class-E, simply because I was just talking to her.") I thought as I laid on my bed. "No matter what I'll tell them, nobody is going to believe me." I said to myself as it's only a matter of time until people start asking me questions about it.
Six months ago
Yukiko P.O.V
"Class, I'm happy to announce that we'll be getting another joining us today, so lets give him a warm welcome shall we?" Yukimura-sensei told us cheerfully which caused everyone to sweatdrop. "Yukimura-sensei no offense, but I don't think that he'll be happy that now he's in the end class." Maehara said with a sigh. "Maehara-kun is right, as who is it to say that he doesn't want nothing to do with us?" Kataoka told Yukimura-sensei which made me remember how Nagisa helped me that day. ("Kataoka-san is right as they may not want to do anything to do with us. But I still remember how Nagisa-kun came up to me and offered me help, despite him being in Class-E.") I thought which I began to wonder what the new student be like and would they be act similar to Nagisa? "Cheer up everyone as I'm going to bring him in now, so that he can introduce himself to you all." Yukimura-sensei told everyone and then left the classroom to get the new student.
"What do you think this guy is going to be like?" Yada asked everyone and I just hope nothing bad happens when he enters the classroom. "I don't know, but I hope he's not going to carry on mistreating us, that now he's here." Kataoka replied and Yukimura-sensei re-entered the classroom which she then clapped to get everyone's attention. "Class, I like you to meet Nagisa Shiota and he'll be joining us for now on." Yukimura told everyone and my eyes widened as I saw Nagisa enter the classroom. ("Nagisa-kun, why are you here?") I thought as I watched him walk to Yukimura-sensei.
"I'm Shiota Nagisa but I'd rather you call me by my first name and it's a pleasure to meet you all..." Nagisa introduced himself, but I could tell that he's depressed that now he's here. "Are you sure he's a boy Yukimura-sensei as he looks a lot like a girl." I heard Nakamura which made me sweatdrop. "Of course I'm a guy! It's just-" Nagisa was cut off when Yukimura-sensei placed her hands on his shoulder. "Nakamura-san, don't be rude about Nagisa's appearance and I told you earlier that we should be giving him a warm welcome to the class." Yukimura-sensei told Nakamura and I'm guessing that Nagisa probably gets this a lot. ("I'm guessing that Nagisa-kun is very sensitive to people calling him a girl just because how he looks like one. But still, he actually looks cute in my opinion.") I thought while staring at Nagisa and I wonder if he remembers me?
Later
Third P.O.V
It's the end of the day which everyone is packing up their things and started to head home which Kanzaki walked up to Nagisa to see if he still remembers her. "Hey Nagisa-kun... Do you remember me from awhile back?" Kanzaki asked which he stared at her for a few seconds. "You do look familiar... Yukiko-san was it?" Nagisa asked Kanzaki, was her name Yukiko which made her somewhat happy. "Yeah, I'm the one who'd you helped back then, but I'm guessing you don't remember much as we only hanged out a couple of times." Kanzaki said to Nagisa which she was quite sad about it. "I'm sorry Kanzaki-san about how I suddenly stopped hanging out with you, but I had a couple of reasons why I did it." Nagisa told her as he scratched the back of his head. "I figured as much there had to be a reason, so there's no need to worry about it Nagisa-kun." Kanzaki told him with a smile. "So, do you want to... walk home together or-" Nagisa asked her nervously which she giggled. "Sure!"Kanzaki replied and with that their bond was reformed.
One month ago
So after finishing setting everything up, he decided to take his seat which the classroom door suddenly opened revealing a small brunette girl who just smiled at him. "Your sure are early, aren't you?" The small girl asked Nagisa as she walked to him and at closer inspection, she's about the same size as Nagisa but only a little shorter. "I have to arrive early before everyone else is because I'm the one who sets up the classroom. Anyway, who are you?" Nagisa asked which she ignored him and touched his hair. "Huh... Your hair is sure is long for a boy..." The girl said as she inspected his hair. "To be honest with you, I want to cut it short, but my mother refuses to let me." Nagisa told her the reason why his hair is long. "Well if that's the case..." Kayano said as she took some spare hair clips out of her pocket and started styling his hair. "Look, now we look like twins! Oh my name is Kayano Keade by the way, what's yours?" The girl known as Kayano told Nagisa as she gave him a small mirror. "I'm Shiota Nagisa, but I'd rather to be called by my first name if you don't mind. " Nagisa told her which she smiled at him. "Alright, it's a pleasure meeting you Nagisa!" Kayano said with a cute blush which made him blush slightly.
Nagisa P.O.V
After this girl had styled my hair which looks exactly like hers , I feel like a weight has been lifted of my shoulders as I'm really liking the new look. "Thank you Kayano-san for doing up my hair, I really appreciate it." I thanked Kayano which she just smiled. "Your welcome!" She told me and to be honest, I'm really glad that I met her.
The Present
Third P.O.V
After an argument he had with his mother, Nagisa couldn't wear his hair clips as his mother had confiscated them which meant he had to have his hair down for the day. "Why did it have to be this early in the morning and not later?" Nagisa asked himself as even though he hated his mother's abuse, he didn't wanted it to happen before school as it meant he had to wear his hair down for the day. "I really do hope that Kayano-san has some spares for me to use, as I don't want to spend the rest of the day with my hair down." Nagisa said as he really does hope that Kayano will let him borrow some spares if she has any. "Then and again, Korosensei would probably fly off somewhere and go get me some." Nagisa said to himself as he continued to walk.
Elsewhere
"Nagisa-kun is kind of late isn't he?" Kanzaki asked as they waited for Nagisa. "Now that you mention it, it's unusual for him to be late as he's always the first one to arrive." Kayano stated which made Kanzaki a little worried. "Do you think something happened to him?" Kanzaki asked Kayano while thinking about where Nagisa could be? "There's nothing I could thin-" Before Kayano could even finish, she spotted Nagisa in the distance. "Wait is that Nagisa-kun and why does he have his hair down?" Kayano asked which she then ran to Nagisa, followed by Kanzaki. "NAGISA-KUN!" Both girls yelled Nagisa's name as they ran up to him to see if he was okay. "I'm sorry that I'm late you guys, it's just that I had an argument with mother and she's the reason why my hair is down" Nagisa said to them with a sigh which Kayano walked up to him with a smile. "I can fix that." Kayano said to him as she reached into her pocket to pull out some of her hairclips which she then started to do Nagisa's hair while Kanzaki watched.
("Could the reason be why Nagisa-kun isn't allowed to cut his hair, because his mother wanted a girl?") Kanzaki thought as she watched Kayano finishing up Nagisa's hair. "There we go, now we'll twins again!" Kayano told Nagisa with a smile as held Nagisa's shoulders. "Thanks Kayano-san, I owe you one." Nagisa said to her with a smile which Kayano grabbed his hand. "Don't mention it and if this happens again, don't be afraid to ask me to do your hair again." Kayano told him which relieved Nagisa. "I don't mean to interrupt you guys, but shouldn't we be get going as we'll be late for registration." Kanzaki told them along with a cough. "Oh right, sorry Kanzaki-san." Nagisa replied which they all started running, so that they don't be late.
Hey guys, thanks for read the chapter and I really hope you'd enjoyed what has been changed. But anyway as I was saying at the beginning of the chapter. Kanzaki Loves Nagisa has a brand new name with a entirely different storyline. When writing the present, I had a hard time writing it as I didn't know what to write and after few days of thinking. I eventually came up with a idea that shows Kanzaki is a little jealous of Kayano which is what I intended to do. But for now, I won't spoil what else I have planned as I need to plan everything out, but the backstory came out perfectly. Anyway please tell me what you think and
I'm Crimson, signing out!